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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From pandagirl6606 on June 29, 2011
    ZOMIGAWD!!! I am in LOVE with this story. You are one of the few people out there who write really good OC's and if this does turn out to be Harry/Blaise/OMC I have no idea how you are gonna choose between them. Keep doin what you're doin!
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  • From ANON - Bright One on June 27, 2011
    I love this story so far! I would like to put my vote in for the pairing to be Blaize/Arsenio/Max/Draco/Harry. I think Harry would love to have some one older to take care of him and quite frankly, I feel terrible for the older dominants!
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  • From AngelPegasus21 on June 27, 2011
    Im so EXCITED about this story. Personally I dont think there are enough creature harry fics out there that are very well written but yours is and I LOVE IT!!! I hope you keep updating! Love the story!!!
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  • From LstCryptonian on June 27, 2011
    write more, this is amazing and great. Though you kept mentioning Snape had two mates and you mentioned lily. Why do i think that james hid his human side from snape unless Black was a draken and it was hidden
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  • From sprinklescake67 on June 26, 2011
    I'm loving the story! I clicked on your profile page to see if there was any news about Life and Trials and found this little tidbit instead. I don't venture beyond the Draco/Harry verse, but sometimes I do get caught up in Other Male/Harry pairings, and I'm enjoying your rendition of a magical creature Blaise/Harry so far. I can't wait for the next chapter with Draco.

    I would like to send my vote in for a OMC to be added, but for it to be an older Draken - this because as you pointed out, some have had time to settle down and learn, and I think an older Draken would be understanding of the dynamics of a multiple relationship and be more patient than a younger one (especially since I can see both Blaise and Draco clashing rather badly). Plus, I think they would be better at grounding as well. My vote is for the older Draken from Greece over blue-wings, but of course it is an author's prerogative to choose in the end. I just stand on the older side because that would make the ultimate statement in the Draken world.

    Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have the time to post.

    Sprinkles
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  • From ANON - Xoburntofferinga on June 26, 2011
    I really love how the story's progressing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on June 26, 2011
    Oh, wow, loooved this chapter :D I really liked Max as well :D And the Greek Dracken as well, but mostly Max :D
    He'd be a great Dad, too, I think :)
    Yay!
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  • From ANON - Jen on June 26, 2011
    I think you should do Drco/Harry/Blaise/Maximillius. I really like the way you made his character. He seems like he'd be a good grounding mate for Harry. =D
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  • From ANON - Riversong90 on June 25, 2011
    I really think this mate finding is going to go on for too long if you have a third. I know some of the characters you are making are sweet and all but keeping it to HP is nice. I want other stuff to start happening not this same old same old mate getting stuff for another three plus chapters, unless you plan to make that more interesting the next time around (and don't make it a vote, it's your story). So if I had to say, then I would prefer you to stop it at Draco Blaise and Harry. Plus I was hoping for DP (since they have to mate together) and didn't want to see you try with three going for the one place (0.o). K I'm done.
    Really loving the story otherwise. It's like a cross between indago and veela inheritance problems (I believe it's called). And finally we see Draco! Also I applaud your swft updates, but even then the story feels like it's dragging on. Keep up the great work, this is on my watch list :)
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  • From ANON - Kieshar on June 25, 2011
    Yee Haw!!! Nice chapter and definitely a vote in favor for HP/DM/BZ/OMC! Keep up the fantastic story you have going. I have been thoroughly enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - zsfantasy on June 25, 2011
    I found this story today and gobbled up all the chapters! I love it! Not only do you write well, your story line is also well thought out with great characterization. I vote for a Blaise/Harry/Draco & any other male...thanks for writing this story! I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - beyondblack on June 25, 2011
    wonderful story i have enjoyed it greatly and i am looking forward to how harry's mates will interact.
    Personally i would like harry's mates as Maximilius Diadesen Maddison- most Dominate sexual mate/Blaise- second most Dom sexual mate/Draco-third most Dom sexual mate and a grounder/Arsenio Demetrius- least Dom minor sexual mate and a grounder.
    Max would provide for physical needs (food, potions, etc), Arsenio would provide for emotional needs (guidance, wisdom, extreme care), Blaise would provide for intellectual needs (learning, active wit), Draco would be the punching bag and fancy accessory (sorry i don't like draco/harry pairings as a general rule only harry(dom)/draco(sub) pairings make any sence to me)
    However i am looking forward to the next chapter as are a lot of people are i believe so i will leave you to your writing and life.
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  • From Jessica86 on June 25, 2011
    This chapter was brilliant. I love this story. And I think that you cut it in the perfect place. It's an awesome cliffhanger, cause how will Harry and Blaise react on having Draco there? And I'm so glad that you let Harry beat up Dominic. that spoiled brat deserved it, and more.
    I would love it if you let it stay a Darco/Harry/Blaise story, but I'm not that against to throw in a OMC in the relationship. It's all up to you, cause I'll keep reading anyway since I love the story.
    I can't wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Anne on June 25, 2011
    I just had a thought: what happens to the "widowed" submissives? I would imagine that the need for dominants for breeding/grounding wouldn't decrease with age, so what if one of the sumissive's bounded dominant died? Wouldn't they then choose an older dominant?

    Great work, by the way. The sex scene is steamy and I liked how Blaise wasn't an overly jealous bastard about the second/third/fourth mate. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on June 25, 2011
    Oh I hope the harry and Blasie gget to have Draco, Arsenio and Maximilius That is all I want for them becuase Blaise got along with thses too and is friends with Draco?
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