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From Foxluna on April 24, 2014
was Snape's mate Sirius?
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From ANON - Lilly.n.g.k on April 23, 2014
G'morning star Sorry if you've already Answered this questions
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From ANON - LILLY on April 04, 2014
I'v stopped counting how many times i'v rered your story... and i have to tell you one of my all time fav sentence is "He needed to decide what he wanted more, Harry as a mate, or his sanity." i love that sentence so so so much!!! not as much as the story in whole but a lot!! thanks for this amazing story!!!
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From ANON - tay on March 29, 2014
Wow im rereading this story (as i always do when im waiting for a new chapter) and ive just npticed harry has taken all his mates but draco! I found that odd but it would make a good scene! Draco has trusted everyone else to have him...does he not trust harry to take him or have you just not written a scene with it?
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From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on March 28, 2014
Wonderful chapter loved Harry and Ginny's story telling.
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From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2014
Sooo, when will poor clueless Max realize his submissive is a very VERY HORRID AT POTIONS? love this story
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From ANON - Seth Soul on March 23, 2014
Just so's you know when I was reading the chapters when Leo was in the hospital I had to put my phone down and walk away SEVENTEEN times because i could not read through my TEARS. One of my friends thought I got a call about some test results I was waiting for from my doctor saying that I had cancer or something, luckily it wasn't that bad and I just had a vitamin deficiency. The fact that Lucius is becoming more of a grandfather even though none of the kids are biologically Draco's makes me all kinds of giddy inside, I was also surprised at who their father was I totally forgot that Max has blonds in his family.

Also I wanted you to know I love how you write it's amazing, not just this story but Blue Moon as well and I hope who ever tried to steal it from you gets kicked. I absolutely love how you added in the families of your OCs, most people don't do that... actually now that I think about it you're the only person I've read who does that. I also don't think I've ever read anything with parents not using magic around babies and toddlers, nor the Dragon Pox vaccination thing.

This Fic has taught me many things, i didn't what a rusk was or that those pacifiers that are also teething rings were called anything else out side America. The one thing I'm still not sure about is Cosy Toes; every time I look them up i get something different, I've gotten footsie pajamas, socks and these things that remind me of a papoose that can be fitted to a stroller.

I hope to see a new chapter soon, but don't kill yourself getting it out relax and enjoy some honey tea of your own. c:
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From ANON - AC7 on March 22, 2014
Just read the scaled bits and although I'm happy that Draco will finally get a child, it makes me sad that you were forced into writing about it so soon and still I read through a few recent reviews and people still aren't happy, good god, some people really need to get off their soap box and shut up. Obviously you had a plan for how your story was going to unfold, and the drama only makes things more interesting to read, if all you wrote about was sunshine and roses it would make for a very boring read. I've enjoyed the journey of this story right from the beginning, I work in retail and I've learnt people will just complain for the sake of complaining and on the Internet it's so easy for some people to hide behind screen names and pass judgement on others. I bet half of those people who complain have nothing better to do then to bully others who have a the courage to put something up for the pure enjoyment for others to read. I think that's one reason why some stories go unfinished because of faceless bullies whose words caused them to abandon their story.
Other than that keep up the good work and I look forward to the next instalment, although at the moment I've been quite surprised by the amount of updates you have put out recently, good effort I say, but take your time, I like to be surprised :-D
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From ANON - sweet on March 22, 2014
I just read your complaint wbout people asking about Draco not having babies. Has it ever occured to you that we have 89 chapters and this originally started as Harry/Draco/Blaise, but you are treating Draco so badly. He doesn
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From ANON - tkykitty on March 20, 2014
Awe. Such wonderful new chapters! So many great things happened that I dont know where to start. I just loved harry's feral state when he was in the ground. So cute with him rolloing around and chirping at "the other drackens near by" (snickers) too cute. And the lil babies are sooooo adorable!!! I really thought they might be Dracos b/c of how demanding they atr. Lol. Im sure he'll get one some day but its so nice to see him care for them so much. Oh and braiden calling narsissa and myron grandma and grandpa was tooooo cute.
Oh and im happy that remus and harry got to talk too. Lil teddy would be a great playmate for the kids:-)
I am always excited to see what will happen in the new chapter s! Plus valentine's is right around the corner. I hope harry is some what healed to have fun with his mates hehehe.
till next time!
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From magentah on March 18, 2014
Lovely chapter! I love seeing (reading?) everyone get upset on Harry's behalf, knowing that while they may be frustrated with his recklessness, that it also comes from a place of love and concern, and likely some anger that he didn't have the adult support that would have prevented him from getting himself into so much trouble. I especially love the Lucius and Narcissa interactions as well! I won't lie--I'm a little bit heartbroken that the twins aren't biologically Draco's, but if you already have 35 kids planned, surely at least one will be his. (That he is so in love with his children regardless of their biological makeup is, of course, completely endearing and wonderful nonetheless.) As always, thanks for sticking with this and updating so frequently! On behalf of my fellow readers, I can safely say we appreciate it!!
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From ANON - Dracolover on March 15, 2014
If I were in Lucius place I would feel my anger confirmed. Another pregnacy and the guy being the dad is not Draco. it feels like you don
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From ANON - Lyoness on March 15, 2014
You really have a nerve - so the two guys who were meant only as a back up and to stabilize the bond, they get to have many kids - Nasta 3 and Max 4 Blaise has at least 1 and Draco still is Babyless, and NO it doesn
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From ANON - Chrisvags on March 14, 2014
They talk about Ellien and her being on heat after everyone is there, but you already said that Bill and the others don't know that they aren't human. Why don't they question what everyone is talking about? And is plaster gauze something normal to put on gashes in England? Just that, other than a cast for a broken bone, Ihave never had or heard of getting something like that - even after I had surgery.

Other than that I really love this story and how long each chapter is. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I'll try to contain myself for a few weeks before I resume checking Facebook every few hours for news on the next posting date. :)
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From Artemis on March 14, 2014
Hi there! My name's Arty and I just had to say something....

This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. Period. Now, I don't read very many FF, or even all the time, but this one was special. I'll be honest, I was just looking for an old Harry/Fred/George fic that I hadn't read in a while when I noticed yours and I decided to give it a read. I'm so happy I did because once I got into the first couple chapters I just couldn't stop! I started on Monday, read all night, read a little at work and did the same thing Tuesday and Wednesday. Every night I fought with myself over the need to sleep and needing to read just one more chapter. I was so invigorated and invested. I used to read all the time when I was little and would stay up through the night with my books, reading. Harry Potter among them of course! It's been so long since a written work has captured my attention like this story has and it actually reminded me just how much I love to read. Your style, the characters, the world you built; it's all just so capitulating that I loved every word.

So, that was my overall impression but I have specific stuff too:

First off, the Leolin saga, thank you so much for letting him live! I gasped out loud when he fell ill and I just became more and more sad as the story went on. And then, when I saw that the next chapter was named "Goodbye" I lost it and starting crying and whispering to myself "No, please no!". I've become so attached to the little guy that it broke my heart to think he wasn't going to live. On top of the pain his fathers were feeling. It was hard to even read the chapter because I didn't want to read the words that he died. When he pulled through I was as happy as I have ever been reading a story. The thing to understand too, is that I've only cried because of a book twice: when I read the last words in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows, and The Green Mile. I'm not a crier but you really pulled my heartstrings with that one. Amazing job!

Secondly, I always personally loved Draco. From the books to the movies I emphasized with him and his situation so I've really enjoyed reading him growing up and become such a warm man not only to his mates but to his children as well. Just a soft spot for me and I love it every time I see an instance. (Also as I side note: I'm so hopeful we get to see a little Draco baby before this story ends. I know just by numbers from Scaled that at least one has to be his but I'd love to read how he reacts to being the biological father)

Third, I very much enjoy how many chapters may not have so much conflict or a huge problem to sort out. They're just a slice of life and give the reader a chance to enjoy the characters they love just being themselves. It's rare and so fun to read in between the huge drama sections.

Fourth: I'm American, I live in the city of Chicago in the Midwest. I say this because I find it fascinating all the British (I hope I'm not offending you by calling you that. I'm not sure how Welsh consider themselves) terms and habits. A great example is the unit of measurement "stones". That threw me off and I had to make sure I was reading it right. It was fun to look it up and learn something new. Along with a ton of other references and things I have no idea what they are but it's fun to learn.

So, yeah, in summary I fell in love with the story and the world with in it. I'm going to be an avid follower and will look forward to every chapter here on out. If it's ok I have just a couple questions.

1) What will happen in the far future when people realize that Harry is a hundred and two but still looks in his forties? (I assume that's how old he'll look) Will he have to come out and admit he's a Dracken?

2) How does the rest of the world view Drackens? Especially here in the United States where we are currently having a big gay rights movement and just had a civil rights movement in the 60's. Would Magical creatures maybe be more accepted here as versus Europe? Or in any country in particular like how France treats the Veelas?

I know that is a massive chunk to read and I don't expect you to look at it all so if you skimmed down, the long and short of it is that I adore this story and avidly wait for any future chapters. Thank you for being so awesome!

All the best,
Arty
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