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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From Artemis on March 14, 2014
Hi there! My name's Arty and I just had to say something....

This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. Period. Now, I don't read very many FF, or even all the time, but this one was special. I'll be honest, I was just looking for an old Harry/Fred/George fic that I hadn't read in a while when I noticed yours and I decided to give it a read. I'm so happy I did because once I got into the first couple chapters I just couldn't stop! I started on Monday, read all night, read a little at work and did the same thing Tuesday and Wednesday. Every night I fought with myself over the need to sleep and needing to read just one more chapter. I was so invigorated and invested. I used to read all the time when I was little and would stay up through the night with my books, reading. Harry Potter among them of course! It's been so long since a written work has captured my attention like this story has and it actually reminded me just how much I love to read. Your style, the characters, the world you built; it's all just so capitulating that I loved every word.

So, that was my overall impression but I have specific stuff too:

First off, the Leolin saga, thank you so much for letting him live! I gasped out loud when he fell ill and I just became more and more sad as the story went on. And then, when I saw that the next chapter was named "Goodbye" I lost it and starting crying and whispering to myself "No, please no!". I've become so attached to the little guy that it broke my heart to think he wasn't going to live. On top of the pain his fathers were feeling. It was hard to even read the chapter because I didn't want to read the words that he died. When he pulled through I was as happy as I have ever been reading a story. The thing to understand too, is that I've only cried because of a book twice: when I read the last words in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows, and The Green Mile. I'm not a crier but you really pulled my heartstrings with that one. Amazing job!

Secondly, I always personally loved Draco. From the books to the movies I emphasized with him and his situation so I've really enjoyed reading him growing up and become such a warm man not only to his mates but to his children as well. Just a soft spot for me and I love it every time I see an instance. (Also as I side note: I'm so hopeful we get to see a little Draco baby before this story ends. I know just by numbers from Scaled that at least one has to be his but I'd love to read how he reacts to being the biological father)

Third, I very much enjoy how many chapters may not have so much conflict or a huge problem to sort out. They're just a slice of life and give the reader a chance to enjoy the characters they love just being themselves. It's rare and so fun to read in between the huge drama sections.

Fourth: I'm American, I live in the city of Chicago in the Midwest. I say this because I find it fascinating all the British (I hope I'm not offending you by calling you that. I'm not sure how Welsh consider themselves) terms and habits. A great example is the unit of measurement "stones". That threw me off and I had to make sure I was reading it right. It was fun to look it up and learn something new. Along with a ton of other references and things I have no idea what they are but it's fun to learn.

So, yeah, in summary I fell in love with the story and the world with in it. I'm going to be an avid follower and will look forward to every chapter here on out. If it's ok I have just a couple questions.

1) What will happen in the far future when people realize that Harry is a hundred and two but still looks in his forties? (I assume that's how old he'll look) Will he have to come out and admit he's a Dracken?

2) How does the rest of the world view Drackens? Especially here in the United States where we are currently having a big gay rights movement and just had a civil rights movement in the 60's. Would Magical creatures maybe be more accepted here as versus Europe? Or in any country in particular like how France treats the Veelas?

I know that is a massive chunk to read and I don't expect you to look at it all so if you skimmed down, the long and short of it is that I adore this story and avidly wait for any future chapters. Thank you for being so awesome!

All the best,
Arty
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From ANON - notsohappy on March 14, 2014
i love your story but i thought it was dracos turn to get a child ....it makes me mad max already had 2 give draco one atlest plese but still that aside grate chapter
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From ANON - Bamarose on March 14, 2014
aww loved this chapter love the Eva's name and cant wait till we find out A's name lol and Nasta is a amazing out of all the mates I think he may be my fav even though I like all of them lol I was a bit dissapointed that Draco hasn't had been a biological daddy yet....I hope he doesn't have any issues with that cause of those suppressants he took...

I'm glad there will be more fairy babies and omg over thiry babies??! Wooooow thats a hella lot of kids lmao but pretty awesome I havent kept up with the Scales Bits so I will have to re read it lol
great chapter as always and can't wait till the next one
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From ANON - Meechypoo on March 13, 2014
So the older mates are doing a bang up job in the baby count! Max has 4, Nasta has 3 and Blaise has little Braiden. Poor Draco still has none biologically at lest but following scaled bits we know that Draco gets be eventually and how cute will he be with his own. I do love how much the boys really do care for the children regardless of who is the biological dad. Draco is especially cute. I am somhappy with everyone right now and they are getting a chance to bask in the newness of the twin girls. Also kudos to the rehabilitation of Lucius. He is really trying to change his attitude around the mates all because Harry opened his eyes to how shabbily he was treating his own son. Thanks for a wonderful chapter and I hope your next month is better than the previous one.

~~ Meechy
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From ANON - Krystal on March 13, 2014
I actually wanted to cry when I read that they weren't Draco's your such a heartless person. I mean like really 89 chapters and like 7 kids later and Draco is still childless! I almost wish he would have just listened to his father, because at the end of the day Draco is not married and without an heir. If he was to die today or tomorrow that would be the end of his line and his name. It doesn't matter that he views them as his kids and his family that doesn't change the fact that in the court of law and to the rest of the wished wizarding world. I feel like you just don't get that. If you didn't like Draco or didn't want to make him one of Harry's mates then you shouldn't have. Their relationship would probably be better off as a friendship anyway. All I can say is if Draco was my child there is no way in hell I would be ok with his situation.
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From BAFan on March 13, 2014
Ch. 89

I loved this chapter, as I have all of them. The descriptions of daily life with so many babies (and mates) are just wonderful. A couple of corrections:

In the fourth chapter: "He
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From ANON - Seliki on March 13, 2014
This is such and awesome story and I am loving every addition to it.
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From Lady_Arachne on March 13, 2014
Loved the chapter! I adore the baby scenes and I just love it when Harry tells them about his Hogwarts years! Looking forward to the next chapter and the court case! :D
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From ANON - Tahlia on March 09, 2014
I have to say i absolutely love this story. Everything about it. I cant wait for the next chapter. Very few stories have me always coming back for more and even fewer have me actually writing a review. Thanks for this wicked story cant wait for the next chapter.
T
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From ANON - guest on March 06, 2014
OMG!! This story is fantastic!!! I just wanted to ask one thing, do you think Harry will be blessed with another Fairy baby? maybe a female? Just to show how F-in freaky his chances are :D PLEASE PLEASE DO IT with the next round!!! It'd be so funny to have a boy for draco and a girl fairy for nasta :) and I HOPE there will be another pregnancy, he doesn't have any boy children for draco yet :) Update when you can! I'm gonna go and finsh the story now.
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From ANON - sharlenna on March 06, 2014
I love this story! When you finish it I will cry if you don't do a scaled bite for the girls sixteenth birthday and first meeting or a 5 shot if they are submissive, which I hope they are. Submissive raised buy harry would be the most sought after and with 2 of them oh thee drama.😝
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From ANON - Jennifer on February 28, 2014
I have just read the story through again and something occurred to me, I would really like it if you could Write where max was locked in the Wardrobe. I think it'd be interesting to see what he was thinking at the time. Love this story have read it 6 times.
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From ANON - Bamarose on February 25, 2014
Aww yay the twins are born woot! Glad he had a smooth labor I really hope they are Draco's though ...loved the chapter! A nice relief after all that worry about Leolin lol can't wait till next time! A question though will Harry have anymore fairy babies? Cause that would be pretty interesting....
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From ANON - Abigail on February 23, 2014
Star, you don't understand how happy this chapter made me. Here I am all tucked up in bed, sick as a pig, I was going to re read ROTD from the beginning until I realized you had a new chapter up. I squealed like a little girl and my mum came into make sure everything was okay. I was like yup, new update so excited please leave love you bye. Lets just say my mother looked dumbfounded, but also knows i'm a bit loopy about books. So thank you Star for making me feel better on a horrible day. Love ROTD and I love the girls already :D :D :D
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From magentah on February 21, 2014
Draco's babies! It's adorable that he doesn't see it. Aaah I love them all so much--never thought I could love OCs the way I do yours and Scioneeris. :) Thank you for giving us so much in this chapter! I'm of course so glad that the twins are here, though a bit nervous for the adjustment period the whole family will be going through. With so many kids, I automatically worry about the time and attention each one gets--which is completely unfair, because the men do nothing but smother them in attention and love!--but then again, there are five parents. And so many aunts, uncles, grandparents, great grandparents, and the rest of all the families. Regardless, so so excited to watch it unfold. I also love seeing the babies grow up! They're walking, they're talking! It is adorable, and I am smitten. I imagine it must be difficult to write, but you do it so well! It comes across effortlessly. Lots of rambles from me tonight. Can't wait for the next chapter and as always, thanks for sharing this story with us!
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