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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - lovershatred on January 01, 2014
    please please don't kill Leolin! I am begging you! ( gets down on knees with puppy dog eyes ). O.O
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  • From ladybutterflyy on December 31, 2013
    Please not precious Leolin, Harry has enough on his plate without dealing with Leolin's death too. This might be enough to send Harry into depression and lose the twins. I had to pause several times reading the ending to that chapter to wipe my eyes. At first I thought the some Fairies had stole Leolin. Though I am surprised and glad Harry didn't rip into that nurse. I know I would have even if it was only to focus on something other than fear. I can said I am awaiting you next chapter in morbid fascination.
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  • From ANON - whskykitty74 on December 31, 2013
    NO!!!!!!!!!!!! Leolin can't die!! He's a fighter and so is Harry!!
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  • From ANON - Sammie2468 on December 31, 2013
    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP LEOLIN ALIVE!!!!!!!!! I love Leolin so much and it honestly just breaks my heart that Harry is be put through this. I know that it would make more sense for Leolin to die because of not having an immune system but, can't like some of the Draken blood he has help him survive, like a miracle type thing.

    I know at the end of the day it's your decision because it's your story and I will keep reading even if Leolin does die but, can you at least think about it? Can't you....this sounds so cruel...have Cepheus die instead? Like Harry's poison did not completely leave his system and does a sneak attack. Or have Harry finally meet Remus and he says goodbye to him. Or something else, just don't take Leolin away, please. I am begging you to consider in keeping him.

    I didn't mean ramble, I just really love Leolin and always want to keep Harry happy. However, it doesn't change how I feel about this story.
    P.S. If you have time to respond, please write to me on FanFiction.net my username is VampirePrincess248.
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  • From ANON - Selecia on December 31, 2013
    First of all I love this fanfic. I have read this about four different times. Please don't kill
    Leolin off. He is my favorite child. To me he seems to so far be like Harry in doing the unlikely,the impossible.
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  • From ANON - Lin on December 30, 2013
    I just read this chapter a second time since the first time I read it I had actually stopped at a rest stop on the turnpike while driving to my grandparents' house so I felt I didn't really absorb it as well as I should have. I don't think I've ever reviewed, but I thought I should at least once; you are an amazing story teller, you make it so easy to connect with your stories and characters, and that's a talent that, unfortunately, many writers don't have. In fact, I have connected to this story so much that I'm going to be in turmoil until I find out how everything resolves. I was even at my uncle's yesterday visiting for the first time in about two years and met my cousin's, now year old, baby who was sick and caught myself thinking of little Leolin and Calix. Also, it was the light of my day when your updates gave me a reason to procrastinate my school work and studying, and I give you extra praise for that one update during my finals week, because who wants to study for organic chemistry when you can read and awesome story? Anyways, sorry for the crazy, long winded, not really a review that probably has spelling and grammatical errors from typing this on my phone since I currently lack Internet and I hope you enjoy the rest of your holidays, and I can't wait for you next update, even if I'm on the turnpike home.
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  • From ANON - Hannah on December 30, 2013
    Please have little Leo live. That chapter broke my heart. I'll even admit to crying. I can only imagine how Harry must feel at the moment. If he doesn't not only will it destroy Harry but it will make those stuck up faries think their right in Harry's lack of ability of raising a farie child & if they were to have another farie child those faries would do everything to take the child away. I can't help but have hope since Leo is still alive in Scalded Bits even after the twins are born but it may change to fit the plot line. I am very excited for the chapter when the Dursley's go to court & justice is finally served. This is my favorite fic & I look forward to each update.
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  • From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on December 30, 2013
    Max has seemed to have a great deal of trouble hasn't he?
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on December 29, 2013
    Oh Star, dearie, i seem to have left my heart shattered somewhere around the middle of the chapter. a wondeful job though why do i feel like im gonna cry in the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2013
    This story is incredible and I've been reading in non-stop. I actually cried at that last chapter, and it's rare i cry at stories. I don't want baby Leo to die :( how will in know when the next chapter is out?
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  • From ANON - Windsor~ on December 29, 2013
    You could say I'm new reader, I did not comment before actually technically this was the second update since I started following the story and love euu will comment more from now on you deserve feel for butchering the English my native language is Portuguese, I am Brazilian, I will comment in the next chapter in my native language o /. I'm crying so much for leolin I love it so much (one of my favorite babies along the Calix and Braiden) I really wish the title'' goodbye'' to be directed to another character, and the blood inside dracken save it, Harry would need a lot of therapy to get over so I think leolin not die because you said the author notes that the anguish / emotional distress in the next chapter would last only half and if not hope you change your mind, loved her oc's (max and nasta mainly ashleigh is a bitch but I love myron and richard, alexander is fun and nicodemus a pervert grid, and like amelle she is a strong woman though somewhat futile) there is a high chance of twins being draco? would be cool if one were blaise draco and it is good so I'm looking forward to the update meantime I torture myself rereading old chapters and having nosebleeds reading your lemons, especially harry / nasta, I love them, there alhuma chance to make harry more naughty things with gifts ginny would be very hot and delicious to read!
    That is until the next o /
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  • From ANON - Freak M on December 29, 2013
    There is very little that can prompt an emotional reaction from me, that being said, I cannot stand the thought of Leolin dying. Please, I beg of you, don't let him. Use that creative genius that gifted him to us, the readers, in the first place and write in something that saves him. A Dracken trait, Phoenix tears, SOMETHING. But please, don't let him die. I wouldn't be able to read that chapter, I would have to skip over it. And Harry needs a serious break. That poor boy has been through entirely to much hell.
    Have a Happy New Year.
    -Freak M
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  • From ANON - Sinly on December 29, 2013
    I think I hate you for this chapter. Please update soon, and I really do mean it for this one, you can't leave things off like this. :_:
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  • From magentah on December 28, 2013
    Oh I'm nervous! I'm so afraid Leolin won't make it. Then, in considering possible plot twists coupled with the chapter title, I started to worry that it would mean Leolin pulls through, but perhaps has to go off and spend time surrounded by more faeries (goodbye to his family), or that Max is outed (goodbye, darling mate Max), or that Harry perhaps goes and spends some intensive time with the mind healer (temporarily goodbye to his children and mates). Eek! This chapter sure was a heart wrenching, but I have to remind myself that it merely shows your skill as a writer to have your words pull at my heart like that. :) Thank you as always for writing this wonderful story, for sticking with it, and for updating! Looking forward (despite my fears) to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Marie on December 28, 2013
    Ahhh. I thought when you wrote and Severs didn't wake again, it meant he slept through the night. I went back and reread it and I got it. Probably didn't read it that way because Snape is my favorite.

    Not a fan of this one, you made me cry. Leo line is definitely my favorite or Harrys children and I really hope he gets better. But other than the tearfest, great chapter
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