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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Susan on December 28, 2013
    Wow, that was a hard chapter to read. Cried at the end. I would ask you to consider not letting Leolin pass but I am sure you have your mind set on where you want the story to go based on your author comments. I have more to say but as my grandmother said if you have nothing nice to say, do not say anything at all.
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  • From ANON - mokuren8 on December 28, 2013


    Do not kill Leolin please fairies will say what if he dies? they would have to have added retired baby, that beasts like drakens could not lebantar a baby fairy, they are very delicate and blame, making, perhaps, if Harry has another baby fairy it removed to lift them, but I hope not. No, you can not do that, you have to prove to these fairy stuffy drakens that can lift a fairy without being killed. Leolin has also draken blood, could not make that small percentage of blood draken save him?
    Anyway thanks for such a good story, and I hope not too long to upload the next chapter







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  • From Leowardelf on December 28, 2013
    I can't believe you left us here. A truely heartbreaking chapter and I hope for the best outcome but so is life and it is not always as we wish it, I will be looking for the next chapter daily. Hope you will update soon but family does come first.
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  • From ANON - ArtemisEarth on December 28, 2013
    Wow, just wow. I'm sitting hear balling my eyes out. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. I just can't imagine what they must be feeling. The thought of losing a child terrifies me. Just wow.
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  • From ANON - Choman on December 28, 2013
    Oh you horrible, bad word, nasty person! You can't make me cry like that! Poor Leolin. *sob*. Please post the next chapter before you go on vacation! Or at least tell me that leolin will be ok! Please! I promise not to call you bad names anymore.
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  • From ANON - Yami_Red on December 27, 2013
    You, Star, are truly EVIL!! I don't know if I should fly through the internet, find you, and then personally glue your butt to the chair and demand that you write and post the next chapter ASAP or just sit here and glare at my monitor until I see the next update. Hopefully Leolin makes it (I love him to death, no pun intended), but I know that it does happen. I won't like it if he does, but I'll accept it and read on anyways. I won't give up on the story just because I don't like what happens every once in a while. Please type as fast as you are able and post as soon as you can. :D
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  • From ANON - Me on December 27, 2013
    It was a good chapter even if I cried though most of it. I am now going to read something happy so I can stop with the tears. Cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - AP0412 on December 27, 2013
    Omg.. Chapter 83..... I was reading it and it really brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my throat seriously!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 27, 2013
    No! Please no! Don't do this! Please Please Please don't kill Leolin! I'm begging you on my hands and knees while crying in a corner! Please don't, Please!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 27, 2013
    I'm surprised that you thought Max only got a slap on the wrist! It seemed like a very thorough reaming out to be honest. In any case, I totally expect that Nasta will be physically punishing Max (as you mentioned in your author's notes) since his instinct as top dominant won't allow anything else.

    So sad! But hopeful that Leolin will pull thru. I know you said anything can happen next chapter and what happens in Scaled Bits doesn't mean it'll happen in the main fic... but I still have hope!

    Great chapter. Enjoy your holidays!


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  • From ANON - lilly.n.g.k on December 27, 2013
    until almost the very end i thought 'oh,not as bad as i thought it be...not happy by any means but-not so bad...'
    and then i was crying so hard.... i finished a pack of tissues...i don't hate you! but my heart is hurting for little leo.....
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on December 27, 2013
    Even though you warned us at the beginning and the chapter is titles "Poison", it doesn't seem to really sink in until you've read it through. God that is hard. I can't imagine what it would be like to actually lose a child, but to watch one slowly fade away from illness or disease and to have the doctor's tell you that you'd better say Goodbye now while you can has to be devastating. I would hope that I would be like Harry and not give up hope until the child is truly gone, but the realist in me says I don't know if I would. Harry is stronger than anyone ever gives him credit for but even he has come to realize that his past has affected him in a myriad of ways he never knew. I can only imagine that Nasta will take Max to task for not being there for his children and ultimately Harry no matter what the situation, so I'm sure that will be a hard read too. Knowing that the next chapter is titled "Goodbye" and that the "Scaled Bits" can only be possible futures, not necessarily what happens in the true story, makes me cringe. I know it's your story and it will unfold as you will it, but can I start a "Save Little Leo" petition now!?! I don't know if I could handle reading that he doesn't make it since he is one of my favorites. I can only hope and if not be prepared for Harry's devastation and the damage it will do to his relationship as the other mates reel from heartache. Hopefully, we won't be kept in the dark for too long because I think the not knowing is sometimes harder to deal with than the actual event, mostly because there is no moving on to deal with the reality.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Bamarose on December 27, 2013
    A cliffy seriously? Poor Leolin the goodbyes made me cry ;( I hope you update soon cause I so hate being left hanging like this as to whether Leolin lives or not and I hope he does cause if he don't I will squall like a baby lol
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  • From ANON - richon on December 27, 2013
    love this story, I am so sad at the moment, poor harry, poor leolin, Mak was a jerk. craving for more, harry will do something to help his son. see you soon
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  • From ANON - lollotjoff on December 27, 2013
    please please don
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