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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Marie on December 11, 2013
    Re-read the entire thing staring last week - I forget how much I love this until another chapter is posted. I don't have any real criticism (most of it is just a word missing here or there). The flow of the story is great. The character development is fantastic. My only question is you mentioned Severus's funeral. Ummm what the heck? When did Snape die? I was kinda blindsided by that.

    But really awesome fic. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Nicola on December 11, 2013
    LOVED IT!!!! Such a cute chapter, and i loved brandens first tantrum and leolins first word. :D
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  • From ANON - ChrisVags on December 11, 2013
    Love the story and as always can't wait for the next chapter. Just a quick question. I was re-reading a bit and was at the part where they talked about languages an speaking to snakes. Draco had raised the question if any of the kids will be able to speak it. Are they ever going to touch on it?
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  • From ANON - 'razur on December 11, 2013
    Hello - Love RfoD. When I saw you had updated i just had start reading form the start to refresh my memory. Still love it. Sorry I have not reviewed before I just get tried of saying "love your story, wish you would finish it at some point to" or not finishing the story 'cause it is so badly written I can't stand it. BUt that is not your story so I will get back on track.
    Love your OMC's especially Max and Nasta. I like your story development and How you have brought Amela (nora's mum) more into the story and got her talking to Harry rather than attacking him and his babies. Aggressive Harry getting himself some action is so cute. I just can't get enough of this story and of course scalely bits.

    Just something to note. Never put Red wine on ice! White wine sure, Champagne yes but not the red. It should be served room temp. Opened to breathe and for better taste decanted as well.

    Keep letting this thought bunnies out to play.

    "Razur
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  • From ANON - Arian on December 11, 2013
    I really loved this chapter, its exiting how much Leolin is developing.
    One can really tell how much he is attached to harry, as he is mirroring
    him. I just realised how much i spoil my baby boy (9 months) when
    i read this chapter, he is also a furniture cruiser :)
    Thank you for a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Bamarose on December 11, 2013
    Loved it! I can't believe Leolin said his first word squeee!!!
    Braiden's birthday was sweet and I thought his "tantrum" was hilarious
    I was wondering if you gonna have anymore individual dates anytime soon? I don't think Nasta or Blaise have had much alone time lately with Harry. Loving how its going though so no complaints from me just anticipation for whatever is next :)
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on December 10, 2013
    Loved it i know how Harry feels, my baby girl is only 5 months old and im already dreading her first birthday. Time goes way to fast for a mother, it just slips through the fingers like sand. I know that when you write about the funeral I'm gonna cry, no death in that book was sadder than Severus's and your version of his death just got me right in the heart. Can't wait to see more about a newly pregnant Harry too, I wanna know whos got babies now lol
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on December 10, 2013
    A lovely and fun filled birthday party. Of course it wouldn't be a party with some form of angst even if it was a mini tantrum thrown by the birthday boy! I have tons of stories from my mother-in-law about my husband as a kid and how he spent hours playing with the boxes his presents came in while ignoring the actual presents! Still wondering what's up with Remus and I feel sorry for Harry. I'm just happy he's got his mates to comfort him.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Lica Schmidt on December 10, 2013
    I can't belive that Braiden is one year old, he is so adorable even when he is in a tantrum... You are a mean writer, such peaceful chapter and then... The promise of suffer and tears... O my god! But I am waiting for the 83th eather way, hehehehehe. Kisses
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  • From ANON - mimesis on December 10, 2013
    En verdad amo tu historia todos los d
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  • From ANON - daithi on December 07, 2013
    Not sure how I missed this story but am glad I found it. I love Harry/Draco pairings but I have also always had a soft spot for Blaise as well, so having all three in one story is perfect. Am looking forward to seeing how this all works out.
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  • From BAFan on December 07, 2013
    Ch. 81

    So happy to see a new chapter, and what a chapter it is. As usual, lots of stuff happening. My heart almost stopped when Regan went missing, though it also went out to poor Draco. It didn't take him long to realize the baby wasn't there, and they all need to accept the reality that enclosed space is a must when there are mobile babies around. Especially that many babies, lol.

    "'How are you Regan?' Harry asked him happily. 'Are you enjoying yourself? I bet you are. I bet you
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  • From ANON - Jannette on December 06, 2013
    I almost died from all the baby cuteness! They are growing so fast! Is it normal for wizards to be able to do magic so young? Or is it because he was scared and Ragan is part Draken? I can't wait for more babies :3 I absolutely loved this chapter although I am wondering if they know that Snape died? I believe it's been more that a month since that happend. But anyways brilliant as always ^_^
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  • From dime on December 05, 2013
    Alright, can I just say I envy Harry his four gorgeous slaves? XD Great fun!
    Leolin's copying is adorable. ^^
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - Nicola on December 05, 2013
    I LOVED this chapter. Can not wait until the next!!! Thank you so much Star!!!
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