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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Chiari-Piper on November 17, 2013
    I wanted to ask a question about the heat periods. I'm to chapter - actually I can't remember the chapter number but it was called a "secrete society" . I should probably finish this before asking but I have THE WORST memory and I know I'll forget. So please forgive me if you do answer this later in the story - which I absolutely love - but back on track. The question I had was I thought only submissives went on heat so why did Marianna go on heat as she is dominate Dracken? I also want to say I love some of the names in this story - I like unusual and there are plenty! Thank you for taking the time to write this story not to mention the reviews you have to read through (& answer) - it takes dedication. Thanks again.
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  • From Woodlandspirit on November 16, 2013
    Hello! So I was rereading ROTD AGAIN when I found myself upset Not with the story! I love the story! But with the fact that it is just a story and that I couldn't invite them all over for dinner or to offer to babysit for a few hours, or something like that. When I told my sister that I was upset that I'd never be able to meet these people she looked at me like I'd lost my mind. She just doesn't understand, so I just thought I'd share with someone who might know how I was feeling.

    Thank you for all the time and heart you put into this I really appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Lyoness on November 15, 2013

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  • From ANON - Lyoness on November 15, 2013
    well I personally dislike this twist - because I think Draco / Blaise would have been enough. And if you had to ad another on in the mix it should have been one that we already know. Although I think the warnings should contain violence and gore - what they did to Dominic mad me almost throw up. I read further but I am reluctant to be honest.
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on November 14, 2013
    WOW! That was amazing. So much info about fairies in that chapter. My head was spinning so I can only imagine how poor harry feels! Max is such a great guy, holding down the fort while Nasta was gone. And Nasta has sooooo much to think and worry about as top Dracken. I never knew. I just want to give him a big hug. I often wonder what it must be like to be a character in this story. The world you created is so realistic that I just want to pop in there and find out for myself.
    Also I wanted to send you some kitty hugs (I just had to put down my cat Joy who was fighting stomach cancer. I know you lost your kitty not long ago and I'm so glad to see you back to writing again.)
    Can't wait till the next wonderful chapter.

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  • From ANON - phoenixreal on November 14, 2013
    I have got to commend you. This story is fantastically well written, has enough adult content to be real without over the top pure smut (nothing wrong with that but you know I like plot), and just great. I will be reading this and maybe grow up some courage to start some of my own HP fantfics. This, honestly, is brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Galya on November 13, 2013
    I hope that CM and the author has some more things to say to each other. So please continue, I already has some popcorn.
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  • From ANON - CM on November 13, 2013
    Oh please! Stop with the bs. That's normal? The fact that harry said it in a VICIOUS manner is what got to me. Like it was some kind of sickness Draco had to get rid off. Did you even get what I was trying to say or the moment I offended your precious Harry everything in your head stopped.(Yes, this fic is sickeningly biased to Harry, it's like he can do no wrong.) Nervousness or not(the fact that he would say something about someone he loves over nerves, only makes it worse), it's the EXTENT of what he said that got to me. Yes, everybody has something they may want to rant about their lover, but the way he said it made me sick. If that's venting a 'little', I'm afraid what happens when gets really angry. Ranting to someone was only HALF of what got me angry. It's the fact that Harry actually said that Draco should change as though if he didn't he would always be ANGRY with Draco. He has accepted Max neurotic ways but he actually WANTS Draco to change himself? The fact that Draco has already changed as much as he could is not enough(told by Nasta himself) and he expects more? What does that actually say about Harry's love for him? That he would actually prefer Draco to be the way he wants instead of loving him for his decidedly annoying quirks?
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  • From ANON - Slytherin_Ravenclaw on November 11, 2013
    I love your story. it almost seems to be apart of the Harry Potter series. It is so good I can imagine myself apart of the story. i love your story and I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Christine on November 11, 2013
    I'll keep this fairly simple

    Loved the chapter. Very much enjoyed seeing the interaction with other supernatural creatures, and that they have failings too. It was fun seeing the further interactions between the mates and how Drackens are prepared for the future. It's always fun to learn more about their culture. I'm so glad that you continue to work on this fic, I know if takes a lot of time and effort and I'd just like to say how much I appreciate it. I always eagerly await the next instalment and when you do decide to finish, I will probably go back and read the story entirely, loving every word.

    No matter what, keep writing professionally or online, because you are amazing!
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  • From ANON - Leigh on November 10, 2013
    I absolutely love this story... it's one of the best fiction pieces related to the Potter Verse... Ever :) At first I was a little unsure about the whole 'creature' thing as I've never read one I liked, but I could tell how much thought and work you put into this lovely piece. I didn't like the submissive/ dominant thing either, but it's grown on me... plus, the doms in Harry's life are awesome!

    I did like that Harry chose some older doms... it's nice to think that not everyone thinks you have to be in a relationship with someone only a year or two younger or older than you to be 'appropriate'. I really like that Harry is so strong... and yet so gentle with everyone... he's like the perfect man- haha. I love all the babies in this story and how you integrate them... most people just mention them a few times or just leave them out once they were born... you put thought into each individual child and they all have their own quirks and likes and dislikes and their all feeding differently... they smile at different times... I love it!

    Well, I can't wait until the next update, as I've been checking back for a week to see if there was anything new and almost squealed when I saw there was! But, I'm much to lady like to make such a noise- haha. Take care!
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  • From ANON - Yami_Red_Uchiha on November 10, 2013
    I kept coming back to this story over the past year to catch up. I like the way you took the HP-verse and pretty much flipped it on it's arse and made it your own. I love the concept, love the characters, and I enjoy what you're doing to it. Normally I don't read WIPs, but I'm glad I decided to read this one. Keep them coming!
    Red
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  • From ANON - Jiya on November 10, 2013
    I just want to say that this is one of the best fan-fictions I have ever read. And I love, love love this story. Go Drackens!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2013
    I just wanted to say that I love this story and I'm always on the edge of my seat ready to read the new chapters! Don't stop writing.
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  • From ANON - Emma on November 09, 2013
    Omg Awww thank you for the birthday wish!!!!!!!!!!!! It really means a lot!!!!!! *(^o^)/* and I love the new chapter! It was great as always! I especially loved the look inside Nasta's top dominant mindset. It just adds even more depth into your characters. ;) anyway, thank you again for the birthday wish and update! I eagerly await your next one. （≧∇≦）

    -Emma
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