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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - tkykitty on April 01, 2013
    WOW Great ending there. Really nerve racking! I love Myron and Richard so much that I wouldn't want anything to happen to them. The truly have accepted harry as family and family is really all that one needs (as long as their a good family and not like the Dursley's!!)
    Its so wonderful to see the kids all starting to grow and grow more each chapter. Braidan is learning soooo fast. I love that Baba Ca (to say that he did understand his brother was Calix.)
    Also I was just waiting to see harry find a microphone and be line "hey everyone I'm mated so back off me! And Don't even come near my mates or kids" LOL. Man some drackens can be so dense.
    I'm guessing that the dracken meeting is to continue next chapter so that harry can see those little girls? Or did something happen to them? Duh, Duh, Duh! (Suspense music). Also finals are coming up which i'm sure will be nice for you as a writer. Now you can move the family from Hogwarts and all those evil studens.
    Well Great Job as always! Much Praise to you.
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  • From ANON - Marie on April 01, 2013
    LOVE THIS! cant wait to see who betrays who - though my guess is either ashleigh or ron betraying harry . can't wait for the update
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  • From HeartStar on April 01, 2013
    I am assuming the richards scar is from when they went to save her from the poachers?
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  • From NinaSweets on March 31, 2013

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  • From Meechypoo64 on March 31, 2013
    This was a lovely chapter. Seeing the boys bonding and the changes in the babies is so adorable. I too will be happy for the school year to be over so the stress will lessened for the boys. However, I am now trembling in fear at the comments made about the next chapter. I guess I'll have to grab my tissue box, alcohol and chocolate in preparation.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Caro on March 31, 2013
    I love every chapter of this story, completly addicted! Everytime I see there is a new chapter up, I know I'll have a nice, relax time reading it!

    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on March 31, 2013
    I hope Richard isn't going to die o: I really like him
    and I wonder how Severus is doing, we haven't heard much about him.
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  • From Zx14ninja on March 31, 2013
    ahgggg! that tantalizing hint about the next chapter was utterly cruel! Just pure evil! Please post it soon and put me out of my misery!
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  • From ANON - Dc on March 31, 2013
    I just had a question about this story - which I absolutely love by the way. It may have already been discussed or explained, if so I apologize for making u repeat it. I thought that all Drackens - all submissives at any rate - could only conceive during a heat period. If this is so how did Ashleigh conceive Julinda in a boat as discussed in chpt 50ish.? She was not on a heat period as it was -according to story - a family outing.
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  • From Bickymonster on March 31, 2013
    Thanks for the update. :) Was interesting seeing the meeting with the unmated Doms present and loving the little developments the babies are all making. Poor Richard though.
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  • From ANON - AR on March 31, 2013
    Ack! Scary bit at the ending, and I don't like that creepy bit of foreshadowing. Certainly hope you aren't planning on offing Richard any time in the next hundred so-odd years. I like the darling!

    Love it when Harry gets all defensive of his mates and mateship. ^_^ I agree with Harry, though--it's annoying when others don't keep well-enough up with the gossip to know one or another is already mated. I'm actually a little surprised there there aren't special rings or bangles or some other accessory to denote a mated submissive or pregnant submissive.

    Nice slip-stream chapter that got us closer to the end of the school year. Yes, the stress is getting a bit much, but then again, being as it's almost April in the states, the teachers and students are all counting down to June here, too! Harry and the bunch are luckily already into May, yes? NEWTS are at the end of the month followed by another heat, correct? And two infertile heats--his dragon's being somewhat kind I would think, although, for how much longer one must wonder.

    "Betrayal"... that's rather ominous...and they're still at the meeting next chapter? I was rather hoping to finally get to meet Nasta's family in more depth. I understand they're not as large as Max's extended family, and not as close as Alexander's family influence, but I caught the impression that Nasta's family was influential for more than just his wonderful father...?

    Squee! What a lovely "Easter" treat for us here in the States. Thank you & Happy Spring!
    ~AR
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on March 31, 2013
    Ch. 71 is fucking awesome! XD
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  • From Lady_Arachne on March 31, 2013
    I love Dracken meetings, can't wait till the next chapter to continue the meeting!!! :DDDD

    And I wonder who will betray who, I know it won't involve one of Harry's mates betraying him, but the plot twist you mentioned has me a bit worried. Something tells me that it involves Ashleigh, but I hope she doesn't harm the children or Harry!!!! Wait! What if it's about Ashleigh tipping off the poachers about Harry and what he is!!! Oh, I hope that doesn't happen!!! But what if it's about a submissive or a dominant trying to do something to Harry or one of his kids!!! Gah, the wait is killing me and a day haven't even passed yet!!!!!!!!! DDDDDDDDDD':
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  • From PandaGaara on March 31, 2013
    I have a feeling Ashleigh is going to break out and try to either see the kids or take them, or at least take Farren. Man if that happens Harry is probably going to kill her. I wish Ashleigh would just get help but it seems like she's going to need a major reality check if she wants to see her grandchildren again.
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on March 31, 2013
    After that teasing little reveal i can't wait for the next chapter! I hope everything works out alright!
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