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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Alexalucia on February 24, 2013
    I have been a fan since chapter 19 on fanfiction.net and you are my writing icon. I love how you have developed Harry's chacter instead of making him a Mary Sue ( Or Sexy Bob ). I just want to say you rock!




    Your New Nerd
    Alexalucia
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  • From ANON - suki saron on February 24, 2013
    I was reading the story over again and was wondering about the quote Harry said when Rumes picked him up. Harry said he doesn't like anyone but his mates to pick him up, yet Matt's grandfather and father does it all the time?
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  • From ANON - bookworm0492 on February 23, 2013
    I really dont think you should bother with writing another heat scene. I mean, yeah sure theyre sexy and all but writing wise I really dont think theres too much more you can do with it, especially since you even admitted that this one was rubbish. These heats are a reoccuring thing in harry's life and unless something really important is going to happen during it I really dont think it should be included. I really think it'll help focus more on other plot points in the story.

    But, thats just me >_
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  • From BellixiesPixies on February 22, 2013
    tnk u
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  • From ANON - J on February 22, 2013
    I've been reading this story since I've recently came across it online. I'm enjoying this story very much and it's my first Draken story to read too! It's clever, funny and dramatic too. I'm just selfeshly hoping that Draco gives Harry more than one baby when Harry gives birth. At least with a mixute of both of them or that and their parents! That's just me hoping but your author! Looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on February 21, 2013
    poor Max and Harry!
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  • From Jan on February 21, 2013
    I don't blame Harry for thinking so, I would feel the same if two of my kids weren't breathing when they were born.

    Please update chapter 70 soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Seliki on February 21, 2013
    This is just an awesome story and I look forward to new parts and look lots and lots lol. Keep them coming honey you rock my world.
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on February 21, 2013
    I'm loving the two stories :D
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  • From LadyFreak on February 20, 2013
    Brilliant as always!
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  • From ANON - Patricia on February 20, 2013
    Yet another perfect chapter. Love it and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on February 20, 2013
    Finally got a chance to just read all the chapters I missed for this story (haven't gotten to scaldie bits yet) What can I say but, Amazing!!! You have really out done yourself with story and character building! I am a little sad about Max's mom but it's not suprising since she went through that horrible ordeal (wont mention it here for spoilers incase others read this before that chapter). Maybe she can get therapy like Amillia (did I spell her name wrong? Probably lol. i'm a horrible speller.)I have to say that out of all the characters that you created my favorite are the kids! I love how they all have different personalities already. Oh but I feel so bad for the baby that gets the diper rash :-( I just want to give him a big old hug. And little leo too. Q:How cute is he?! A:So cute!
    Also happy belated B-day! It just have to say that I'm stunned that someone as young as you are has such a wonderful gift for writing. Great Job :-)
    Well cant wait to read what happens to harry next. Although I'm always dreading the worst for him. (I'm such a sentimental Hufflepuff. I never want harry to have to suffer again.)
    Oh and please please please have a super cute draco/harry baby. He/She or they would be soooooo cute!
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  • From ANON - RyokiSawada on February 20, 2013
    omg! i couldn't wait till this chapter came out! another lovely, beautifully, well written chapter! i will be waiting on pins and needles for the next one!
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  • From ANON - yukiireaka on February 20, 2013
    oh my god!!! yay! new chapter...I'd actually checked yesterday if it had been updated but I am so
    glad that you updated!!!

    I liked the heat scene, different setting for smut is always nice. Loved all the table sex ;)
    it would figure that the one time draco gets in early the heats dry!
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  • From ANON - Dreamer27 on February 20, 2013
    This chapter was great. I love how Amelle is now. I didn't like her at first but once you heard her story I felt sorry for her and now I really like her. I also like how Amelle told Harry about how she had felt the same thing about Ashleigh and that Ashleigh had acted the same way with her. I hope that Amelle now keeps her children away from Ashleigh now to.

    For the next heat please give Draco a biological child, I just keep feeling sorry for him. He loves the babies so much, I want him to have one as well. He also needs an heir all the others have heirs now, Draco needs one and a baby with Draco's hair and Harry's eyes would be gorgeous or with Harry's hair and Draco's eyes.

    I also can't wait to see what will happen to the Dursley's and Ashleigh.
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