Reviews for The Rise of the DrackensBy : StarLightMassacre |
Happy Birthday! Are you going to go back to the trial soon? Do you have the whole story planned out? I liked this chapter and how they celebrated the birthdays. It seems the mates actually learned and didn't get mad at Harry for holding news of his pregnancy back.
Thank you for the update ...it was so cute to see harry have fun !!!!!! BTW Happy Birthday to you !!!!!!!!! your not old, your to young still :):):)
Wow, just picturing the bounce house with the giant slide, makes me wish I had them right now in my own backyard, my children would just love that... not to mention me too, sounds like great fun and a bit of good exercise, with all the jumping and climbing😄
Altought I know it's rude, I would of still told those women that if they didn't want to be there to begin with, and were content to just let their own child suffer like that, then they should just leave, that was just beyond cruel, poor children.
Please update chapter 109 soon.
Hueeeeee I've been waiting for this update for so long XD All that baby time was SUPER CUTEADORABLEEVERYTHINGTHATYOUCANRELATETOABABYAAAAACUTE so I am deeply satisfied~~
Happy Birthday!!! I loved the birthday chapter!! I recently went back and re-read this and the scaled bits. I'm so glad I did because I picked up stuff I missed and or saw it with fresh eyes. Like Ashley's behavior and the things she was doing to make Harry so wary of her. I love this story so much. I hope you take it far enough to show all Harry's babies born and maybe even mated because I'm going to be so sad when it's over!! And was that foreshadowing of what is to come with the fairies?? That's scary. I hope if it comes to that Harry shelters them and fights with them and the drackens against the bad fairies. Can't wait for more.
I'm kind of surprised we didn't get a chapter for Christmas this year. Anyway, Happy Holidays!
I really really hope Ezra and Lathen get a place beside or close to Harry!! He should have people he loves and trusts close by.
Yay!!!! Glad everything's alright! But seriously, the citizen faes make me so angry!!! *sigh... can't wait for Harry's and Braiden's bday and when the time comes when Harry uses Ginny's 'gifts' XD iykwim~ Please update soon, I'll be on standby!!! 😡
read all the chapters in about 3 days now I'm gonna be following this story cause I love it so much
Silly question but since Leolin is Fae does that mean he will have no Dracken traits at all? It interesting because that would mean that Dracken is not a dominant gene. I never really thought of it but it is clear as day. They are both Recessive genes and due to Nasta having both in his bloodline there would be a way for him to have them but it's been hundreds of years. So would Harry have to have some Fae as an ancestor as well? or is it that this is a gene that can come about under special circumstances, such as having a poweful wizard as a momma?
This chapter makes me want to rip out my soul and feed it to an infant. So conflicted right now.
I didn't like this chapter all that much. Then again I don't date, but he went to everyones parents to tell them something. Something that had the potential to piss all their parents off. It would have been ok to rant to one person, but all of them...really? Yes he didn't go to everyone but aside from Draco, every is getting chewed out.
To me that seems a little petty of Harry. He never told someone that it was ok. Never told anyone that he could handle it but thanks for the offer. Nope he just went on marry way. I feel like this will come back to bite him.
Side note*
I am sad that draco will not be able to father anyone this time. Considering he is the one that needs to father a child the most. His dad being so disapproving of his relarionship... still children should not be used as a bargaining chip for someones love. So while it does seem a little sad that he will not be a biological father it could be for the best.
I do know that he will still be a father but not one by blood. By blood seems to matter most to his father. Draco doesn't seem to care. They all love their children regardless of who fathered them
I know that this story has been out for ages but I can't help but write when something comes to mind. I adore this story though some parts make my insides ache. I love how you approached many of the harder situations.
The only thing I am confused about with this is why he won't tell me about his past and why the freal frack haven't they questioned him about it. Especially Max, people are nosy and love some gossip. Now I may be a single pringle but even I would question my SO when they freak out. Heck I would question if they thought I was strange every day. When I was pregnant I just wanted food and didn't really want to let others know how I really felt....I think I just answered my own questions.
Goddamnit stop making me cry ;_; ;_; Little Leo..........
. . . .
This chapter was kind of funny in a weird way. I love the parents but I don't understand Myron. I want to root for him as a parent but I also would love to see his face be ripped to shreads.
GUAAHHHH my poor heart and soul.
While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
All works displayed here, whether pictorial or literary, are the property of their owners and not Adult-FanFiction.org. Opinions stated in profiles of users may not reflect the opinions or views of Adult-FanFiction.org or any of its owners, agents, or related entities.
Website Domain ©2002-2017 by Apollo. PHP scripting, CSS style sheets, Database layout & Original artwork ©2005-2017 C. Kennington. Restructured Database & Forum skins ©2007-2017 J. Salva. Images, coding, and any other potentially liftable content may not be used without express written permission from their respective creator(s). Thank you for visiting!
Powered by Fiction Portal 2.0
Modifications © Manta2g, DemonGoddess
Site Owner - Apollo