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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From ANON - richon on January 29, 2013
happy birthday !!! I love your story, max's mother made a bad move ...she will propably not see his grandchildrens soon.love your story. see you soon
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From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2013
Just finished reading the whole story again. I love what you have created so much and I'm always fanatically checking for more. I can't believe that Ashleigh said that to Harry. She's been hurtful before but I wasn't quite expecting this. I was glad when Max found out though and also glad that he made it clear he choice was Harry. Its becoming obvious that Ashleigh only cares about baby. That's basically the only she talks about and is always her first reaction when something happens. I do hope that they work it out though because Max did love his mother and I don't want Myron and Richard to suffer from this. Perhaps something is wrong with Ashleigh and making her this way because even though Richard and her are both childish she is much more so and something about her just doesnt seem right sometimes.

Sidenote, this is the longest review I've ever written as I only review stories that I like as much as some of my favorite novels :)
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From ANON - foxykitsuneyouko on January 29, 2013
First off, Happy Birthday to you, i hope you had a good one(might be a bit late seeing as i just saw your two chapters.)

Wonderful chapter's i just read both 66 and 67 tonight and they were wonderful. poor harry hes been through so much already and now this all happens ouch. I look forward to reading the next chapters so ee what happens between max's mother and the family.
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From ANON - Lady Lachesis on January 28, 2013
Happy birthday darling!!! Hope it was a wonderful day. Whenever you get upset with those ninnywits that haven't learned patience or courtesy, please remember how many of us are simply happy and touched that you take the time to share your creativity, talent, and execllent character development with all of us. I know I adore this story, and all the characters you have introduced us to. I can honestly say that I, personally haven't read a better story on AFF. Will be looking forward to your future works, both fan fiction and original published works.
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From ANON - RyokiSawada on January 28, 2013
OOOOMMMMMGGGGG!!!! i started reading this story about two days ago and i am sooooo hooked!!! take as much time as you need to get your creative juices flowing to create another chapter!........but not tooooo long ;)
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From ANON - Oiseau on January 28, 2013
I appreciate all updates you put up!! I certainly anticipate each one greatly and am a little disappointed when I don't see a new chapter, but I understand you have a real life. Your writing is an inspiration in comparison to some others whose grammar and plot lines don't appear to exist. Thank you for updating when you can!!
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From ANON - yukiireaka on January 28, 2013
hello lovely, it's a little late but happy birthday! *holds out black forest cake*
beautiful chapter, although all of them are exceptional.
and now I shall wait patiently for the next chapter :3

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From ANON - uolexa on January 28, 2013
JOYEUX ANNIVERSAIRE!
I hope your birthday went well!

(I tried to post a reveiw a few minutes earlier but my computer turned off while I sent it. If you receive twice the same review from me, I'm very sorry, I'm not trying to harass you! :p)

First, thank you so much for the quick update! that new chapter was fabulous! I feel so disapointed by Max's mother's reaction. She was a character I liked so much, I hope everything will get better between the two families... I would hate it for Max to give up on his parents over Harry... So sad... Now I can't wait for another chapter! I reaaally want to know how things will evolve!

I have a little question for you though (if you do not mind answering of course): I understood drackens developped faster than humans. But I was wondering exactly how fast? Will Braiden look like 2 when he'll be 1year old? Will he look like 16 when he'll be 8? I have troubles understanding that bit... (are drackens developping in a similar way than Bella's daughter in Twilight, maybe?)

Anyway, I'm always fond of your story and impatiently waiting for the rest! You're an amazing writer!
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From djaddict on January 28, 2013
Hope you had a great birthday day!

The chapter title kinda freaked me out, so whew! Glad my assumption was wrong.

Really enjoying the story and I hope for Harry's sake he doesn't get preggers again. lol

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From ANON - LaffyTaffy on January 27, 2013
Happy birthday!! I was so excited when I saw another update so quickly after the previous one! Of course, then I saw the title of the chapter and started freaking out a little because I thought something serious would tear Harry's family apart and while it's horrible what Ashleigh did, I was also very glad that Max chose Harry and the others. Oh my, you give me so many mixed feelings with this story and I simply love every chapter! I'm sorry that people are being rude and demanding chapters when you're simply doing it because you enjoy writing this story. I am grateful every time you update and honestly the story is so awesome that I don't care if I have to wait a month or so before I can see what happens next (unless there's a cliffy, then I feel like I'm going crazy waiting lol :P ). Your chapters are always an impressive length and I've never been disappointed with a single chapter.
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From ZeoRegrediens on January 27, 2013
Happy Birthday!! I hope you had a great day. :)

A lovely chapter, as always. I feel like I say that every review, but it's always true.
And did you say you're working on a novel? You'll have to let us know if you ever get published because I'd absolutely love to read your work!
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From ANON - Feydra on January 27, 2013
Hey Star, After reading this chapter a lot of little things started to click. The first time Ashleigh holds Harry while he's pregnant she rocks the bum like he isn't even there, how she tried to keep her children babies for as long as possible, the way she reacted to the recommendation of selective reduction. All these things add up to her seeing Harry as a way to get babies in her life again. I wanted to let you know that some of your reders completely got it the way you intended. I'm a fan of yours on Facebook and I wanted to show my support this way. I enjoy reading and rereading Rise of the Drackens. Please keep doing what you do.
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From Tinkerbabe7 on January 27, 2013
I hope you had a great birthday :D
This was an awesome update just like all the others :D
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From ANON - Eli on January 27, 2013
This is one of my all time favorite fanfictions (even though it isn't finished yet...i kinda hope it will never end, cuz its just so good). I love the plot, i love the characters and i love how Harry, Blaise,Draco,Max and Nasta just fit effortlessly together like a puzzle. I also enjoy that you make some complications and strange/bad situations; because of those its not a story about just falling in love and then floating around on a pink cloud for the rest of the story, popping out a baby here and there. I also like how feisty Harry can be ;D
Happy 23rd birthday
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From ANON - Dreamer27 on January 27, 2013
I just reviewed but I just realised that at the end of every review I give you I write 'please update soon', I am so sorry.

I am not trying to pressure you I just write it for every story I review that I like.

Don't feel pressured to update, your story is great and after all I abandoned all of my stories. I just couldn't figure out what my characters would do next and then I had people get really mad at me in my reviews for not updating and just couldn't focus.

So don't worry about the people reviewing just to tell you to hurry up, ignore them. I know how stressful and upset you can get when people just don't seem to understand that you have a real life outside and it does not revolve around writing a story. Take your time writing it and if you want to have fun in the real world go for it. Your story is great and everyone who reads your story and loves it as much as I do will be happy to wait for an update when ever you have the time to write, so don't feel that you have rush.

Anyway I just wanted to say everyone can wait for you to update, your story is so great don't rush it just to appease some people who only review to complain or just badger you to update. They don't matter, this is your story take as long as you want to write it.
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