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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From RikkaiDaiLove on January 24, 2013
I really enjoyed this chapter, even though Harry spent most of it mad at Max and Nasta!
I thought the scene with Braiden was the most adorable thing ever. I like that you put stuff in about the babies growing, because they become characters on their own, instead of just being 'the babies'.
I also love Richard and Myron. I think it's hilarious that Myron is always chastising Richard!

I hope Harry forgives Max and Nasta soon! Another good chapter and I can't wait for the next one!

Also, ignore all those who think this story is the center of your universe. They are probably the ones who have never tried writing a novel length story like this. Keep up the good work, and have a happy birthday!
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From ANON - Property_Of_A_DeadGirl4-25 on January 24, 2013
I had a squeal fit in the middle of class when I finally checked my email and saw the email saying you'd updated! I always love when you post a new chapter!
I keep imagining how the trial will go, and am excited to read your potrayal of the scene because it is bound to be absolutely fabulous like everything you write!
I think you update plenty, I'm an impatient person, I like immediate responses; but I understand the writing process and having a life outside of fanfiction. I appreciate that you take time to write, and I'm always recommending your stories to my friends who read fanfiction. I would be just as happy with your updates if it took you a year to update; and I usually appreciate the time it take for you to update, because I'm easily stressed, and the excitement I get when I see the new chapter makes me feel like all my stress has been kicked aside.
But, it is GLSEN's No-Name Calling Week, and I've worn rainbow every day this week! I'm proud! [Ha! Proud of my ability to wear craziness with a straight face and proud of my sexuality!]
And proud bcause I've ignored my evil name calling mind and didn't call this person-who-is-so_utterly-unpleasant-there-is-NO-euphemism-worthy-to-describe-her an "envious ratchet hoe-bag," even though she deserved it. She hates me because even though I'm...unique? her boyfriend likes me [I'm uninterested. My love is a doe-eyes Brazilian, who laughs like a hyena-car-alarm, and has homophobic parents, and sings jingle bells to me in Portugese continuously, no matter how many times in a row I ask her. She's short (4 feet 11 inches), and has long brown hair, and sings Disney songs like a child with me, and is a wonderful cuddler, and and is going to formal with me in March, and she always listens when I talk with her (and I'm a chatterbox on the days when I'm not being introvertastic), and yells at my twin brother when he makes me cry, but she's almost never mad, and I adore her so much that even if I would date someone who asks me out while his girlfriend stands right there, I would say no because I'm already emotionally attached to the most amazing, beautiful, loving person I could imagine.]
And she reads this fic with me when I re-read it, even if I've read it the day before entire way through.

Luvzeez.

Doctor: 8 hugs a day is good for your health, it extends your life and helps you sleep better.
Patient: You're full of shit! I get repeated hugs from all of my friends continuously, and I've been geting about 3 hours of sleep a night, and I'm pretty sure I'm keeling over at around the age of 62.
Doctor: That is awfully specific, you are only 22.
Patient: Ha! I wasn't at all specific, I didn't mention the number of days, weeks or months after my 62nd birthday I would pass away.
Doctor: Of course! I realize your purpose...
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From magentah on January 24, 2013
Happy Birthday!! Fabulous chapter, per usual. I always read them twice to give myself an extra chance to digest everything and already can't wait to reread it, haha. I'm so glad you stood up for yourself regarding impatient readers! I think people forget that you, as a writer, are just as human and busy with life as anyone else. Don't take their words to heart; all they mean to say is that they love your story and are eager for more. Your time and attention to detail are more than worth the wait, and the extra long chapters are a wonderful bonus. A story of great quality and quantity requires time--how that's a difficult concept, I don't quite understand. Sorry to jump on your soapbox ;) I have strong feelings about ungrateful readers of fantastic (and free!) fiction. I hope you have lovely birthday celebrations this weekend, and I look forward--without expectation or impatience--to the next update.
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From ANON - Me on January 24, 2013
I loved it it was wonderful
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From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on January 23, 2013
You had best take some personal time; if you do not have your health mental and physical then nothing else matters. To hell with those readers who do not know how to appreciate any updates that you chose to provide us. You're the author and sometimes REAL life takes precedence over the wonder of the literary world you are shaping around Harry Potter's universe. I love the anticipation of looking for my favorite stories but understand that some updates are weeks or months apart. You're not getting paid as a professional writer for your efforts except with positive feedback and encouragement from those of us who love your story line and do not mind waiting as needed.
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From ANON - Madam Coffee Kitty on January 23, 2013
Lol. I forgot to mention how much I love Braiden's development. I also love the other babies and I can't wait to read how you develop their characters. The ordeal with changing the "twins" outfits a few chapters ago had me cracking up! One hating to be naked, while the other hating clothes. So cute! Anyway, I enthusiastically await your next chapter.
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From ANON - LeSerpent on January 23, 2013
I absolutely adore this story. I am a huge fan of interesting polyamory fictions but I must say, this one is definitely one of my favourites. You have developed the characters in realistic and evolved ways that make them pop out of the page and I just can't stop reading until I put it down. I also love the insights into magical creature culture you insert quite naturally into the work, things only popping up when relavent instead of just slabs of information. Plus the babies are cute; normally babies creep me out so bravo, that is quite a feat.
I'm so sorry to hear people have been bothering you to write more or rushing you. As a writer myself I know how hard it is to force out work or to find time to write properly when you're living your own life. So as a fan and a writer, please do not let this story take over your life any more than you want it to. I would hate for you to end up resenting it because of the online pressure. Write when you can and when you want to, true fans will wait. I will admit to being excited for the next chapter, but hope you have a wonderful birthday and a great week off.
Thanks for making such an amazing story that you are willing to share with us all. I admire you a lot.

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From ANON - Madam Coffee Kitty on January 23, 2013
This was a wonderful update! Sorry for the impatient, inconsiderate berks. You actually update very well considering how long the chapters are and all your other RL obligations. I was once reading a story where the author wrote wonderfully long chapters but they updated like once every 4 to 6 months. Now that was frustrating. But one never knows what is happening in the lives of others. I love this story and I hope you never lose your enjoyment of writing. Have a wonderful birthday and break from work!! I wish you good luck, good health, and happy writing!

P.S. Sorry I don't review more. I have been reading our story from your very first post, but I have only review maybe five times at most. Just know that this is one of my absolute favorite stories and you are a fantastic author!
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From ANON - Chelsea on January 23, 2013
I just wanted you to know that I throw a mini-party every time I check and see that there is a new chapter.
Seriously, there is a little dance involved.
I've read through the whole story at least three times and I'm constantly checking to see if there are updates.
This is, hands down, my favorite fanfiction ever. I love all your writing, but this is my favorite.
You do such a wonderful job.
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From dark-huntressmoony on January 23, 2013
I very much enjoy this story and i look forward to reading more when you up date. this is the longest story i have read and your attention to detail is impressive and immaculate. theres a story here and not just a smut fest. granted i love a good smut fest as much as the next fan girl but this story is beautiful and engaging. i really am looking forward to the next update, i hope harry can forgive poor Max and Nasta soon!
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From ANON - Wolfmistress on January 23, 2013
Early Happy Birthday.

Please ignore the reviewers that are ignorant to the life of a fanfiction writer. At least you do update rather regularly, I have had to wait years sometimes for a writer to update at times. I do not, and probably will never, have a Facebook account, so the only reason I would ask at any time would be out of concern (one writer passed before she could finish her stories and they were taken down without warning or notice by family). You do have a life beyond writing and should take advantage of it.

I enjoyed this chapter. The doms are all going to have a major talking to by the parents and Albus for leaving certain aspects out about the fight, right? Afterall, the reason Harry became really angry was the destruction of the playpen where Braiden had been just one hour earlier.

Waiting patiently for the next installment.

Wolfmistress

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From ANON - unicorn53 on January 23, 2013
I myself look forward to each installment of this wonderful story. It does not matter when it arrives just as long as I get to read it when it comes out. Life and work take a lot out of us and sometimes have to come first before we can relax and enjoy the fun parts like writing, drawing and such things. I have several hundred stories I read on different fanfiction sites. I look forward to each and everyone of them and I don't complain when it takes a while before the next chapter comes up. So those out there who gripe and whine, get a life of your own and a hobby. Give this wonderful writer a break and cheer them on not yell at them for taking part in their own life. Please author keep up the great work and catch you next time for chapter 67!!! :)))))
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From ANON - ladilyn on January 23, 2013
Enjoy your holiday and birthday! Tell those complaining about updates that if they'd just go ahead and write their own stories the time between updates would pass so much quicker. I love this story and would love to see a new update every month, er, week, um, hour, okay as soon as I finished reading the chapter. However, I'm grateful for the time you are giving to write this story and am happy whenever a new chapter to this or Scaled Bits comes out. It always makes my day.

Now, to the story. I so enjoyed how Harry reacted to all that was happening, particularly the not really wanting to go home and deal with thing. I also liked how Blaise stood up to the others regarding the cot and told them off. Blaise and Nasta vie for being my favorite dominant as they both understand Harry in ways the other two do not and consider Harry and what he feels/wants while Max and Draco are still too caught up in themselves, still to spoiled yet, though Draco seems to be getting better.

Thanks for all of your time and effort and enjoy your time off and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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From ElmMidnight7591 on January 23, 2013
Dear Star,

Happy Early Birthday to you Happy Early Birthday to you, Happy Early Birthday to YOou Happy Birthday to You!

Thanks for a wonderful chapter! I started off reading on FF.net and am now closely following your Facebook for updates. you are an amazing author and the world you have created is A.Mazing. i hope that you have a great birthday weekend!

Sincerely,
~A.
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From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2013
happy birthday!
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