Reviews for The Rise of the DrackensBy : StarLightMassacre |
I loved this chapter. It made me smile and yet cry at times. It's one thimg to hear someone tell anothers story, but when you finally get to meet that person and discover their personality. i don't know . ..it brings it all home.
I know that those who lost children or a spouse feel loads of pain, to see them happy and smiling over their childrens mate and future child makes me want to weep outloud.
I am single mom to a lovely toddler. I made a lot of mistakes in my past.This made me look forward to the future, her future. Even if my life goes to hell I will do everything possible to make her happy and safe.
This chapter goes to show that people can overcome so much and still look towards the future with hope
I have just started reading this series and I have to say, it is amazing!!
So far on chapter 10 but I Hope Nasta stays around. He is a doll ^-^
SEV!!!!!!!! I'M CRYING UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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Lololololololololool That Henley guy? He has the same birthday as I!!~ XD
And also when the realization took over when it was Dray in the end like looooooool I shoulda seen that coming because of the description BUT STILL XD
Ahhh! I have only just found this wonderful fic! I'm so happy to have found such a well developed story, thank you!!
I can't even begin to describe how proud of you and pleased I am with the pacing of these chapters.
You've been able to give us readers twists and turns without leaving us feeling blindsided by a character's decision or opinion. And I am supremely impressed!
I have laughed heartily and I have readily cried and I have been immensely angry. Thank you for writing such an expressive and captivating story!
I look forward to reading your A/N's and you and your family have my many sympathies for the hardships and loss you've experienced over the course of this fanfiction. I send much love your way!
I applaud your dedication and ability.
With my any thanks,
~Silentxxdreamer
Normally I don't write reviews, but I just had to find my AFF login so that i could get on and tell you how much I love your story. I started it just a few days ago and it completely consumed my life! I am all caught up now and while I excitedly wait for the next chapter I will start reading The Scaled Bits.
Your characters are amazing. I am so attached to all of them, even the minor ones.
Like almost everyone else reviewing I am so looking forward to when Draco has a baby, not that he treats any of the kids as not his. I am hoping that Dracos child will be a dracken. I imagine his father will be a bit fussy about that, but I can see Harry reminding Lucius how many children drackens have so if his grandson is a dracken there would be plenty of Malfoys in the future!
Again I just wanted to thank you for your great story and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
Star I found a mistake if you want to fix it. I normally read on FFnet but I wanted to read the smexy times and since FFnet doesn't allow multiple reviews for the same chapter if you're signed in I figured here would be the next best option. :) Anyway it's this sentence;
Those blue eyes closed. “Yes.” Max moaned lingeringly, closing his eyes
How can Max close his eyes a second time if they are already closed? I'm not trying to be a smartass or anything just pointing out that you need to revise that sentence. Good Luck with your upcoming writing projects!
hi!
I've Been reading for a while now, taken me ages to finally finish what you've written, but I've really enjoyed it so far! I was wondering if you were still doing the email updates thing? If so, sign me up please!
Rosie.linehan@outlook.com.au
Yoooou sneakily went through and updated the old chapters! I've been rereading to celebrate Dracktember, and imagine my delight to find all those little snippets and details. The birthdays will be fun, too!
Is there any way to request scenes for Scaled Bits? Because I would love to see Eva and Ave's meetings, especially if they end up doing them together as you've been hinting. That, and the final wedding at some point! <3 I love all the little details you find to add into this story, and to bring the characters to life.
The story is great as always. Is the next baby/ one of the babies going to be Drcao's? He the only one without a biological child.
This was sweet, it was nice to see that they are growing as a couple but also as parents, it's not easy to trust others with the well being of your children, please update chapter 108 soon.
Just so you know, I read this so often and have just read it through from the beginning again, it's such a joy to read and your work is amazing!! I hope Draco has a chance of biologically fathering one of Harry's new babies that he's pregnant with! Maybe a blonde girl called Maia or a boy with a derivative of the name Thubon! ( I totally love the girl name though!!! Look forward to reading the next chapter!
I'm happy that thing are getting back to normal for the guys. The sex scenes were HOT.. Please update soon. I want to know what happens next. I really like this story.
Thanks for the chapter! I'm sad to hear the roll is over but hopefully inspiration will hit again soon!
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