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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From Marble on January 05, 2013
Hi,
at first, i want to apologize for any language or gramar mistakes that i
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From ANON - Sam on January 03, 2013
Hi :) First off I love this story, I really do but I keep wondering about laws. In the story Harry is considered an adult when he is with his mates but not in real life, there are lots of fanfiction that have a younger harry with an older partner but is it allowed? It would make me feel a lot better if I knew. Thank you :)
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From ANON - Shyanne on January 02, 2013
Ok First can I see if I have some terminology correct?
Dummy = Pacifier
Nappy = Diper
Draw = Drawer
Right? I am sorry I must confess that I am only an American, yet I would love to have been Welsh or just plain Brittish, But alas, A Womans Dreams Just Remain Dreams.
Ok Now I can gush about how amazing of a writer you are, and how you just perfectly create the scene of whatever is happening in your readers mind. I have NEVER read such a brilliantly worded... Actually more like Crafted... Piece of Literature.
Never in my life Have I read somethimg so amazing as this extrodinary gift you have givin us.
And I have 23 full years of non-stop reading to compare it to I might add.
Take as long as you need Love. Update When its Convientant for YOU. Not us, the carnivorous readers.
I will say though that I will await that day with want and Anticipation... As one does not just simply read A Fanfiction as great as this... One Devours it. As It takes over ones thoughts and dreams. Hell Last night I had a nightmare that I had Eight children at one go...
I killed my Four mates (heh. I wish. Right now I'm stuck with my one amazing Boyfriend) Two of wich were Dominant Females (I cannot help my sexual prefrances ;) ) And The Babies killed me. Seven Out Of Eight of them were girls. five Were Drackens.
Weird.
So I must just say how much I love this...

Oh... And One more thing

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!

I couldnt help myself xD
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From annabellaalyssmaressa on December 31, 2012
just so you know ice cold peppermint schnapps (my preferance as a baby but my mom also used wiskey so id immagine that any liquar would work) is great for teathing just stick a bottle in the freezer and when it is cold dip a q tip in it and rub the q tip on the babys gumms it also has less alcohol content than the baby teathing gell if you use enough for it to actualy work that is
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From ANON - Ren on December 30, 2012
Thank you for continuing to update! I'm really enjoying it! Of course Harry's life would continue to have drama after the Voldie has been defeated. I enjoy your writing style, and the balance of family time/relationship development, Dracken details, and dramatic events. If you keep writing like this, I'll probably keep reading! I can't imagine Harry being happy if he has more kids before the others turn 3- can you imagine more than 6 kids under 3? I'd check myself into a mental institution for peace and quiet. I'm curious to see if you'll give Harry at least a part time job- maybe even volunteering his time sometimes- and see how all their Draken sides deal with it. I'm also wondering how long Aneirin will stay mad at Nasta. And maybe Harry can lead a cultural revolution in the Draken society with reforms for submissive behavior, dominant-submissive interaction, and submissive-child interaction. Well, I look forward to more! Thank you!
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From FaeChild on December 30, 2012
Needless to say, I have finally finished all 65 chapters that were up when I started. I love it so far and can't wait to read more.
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From annabellaalyssmaressa on December 30, 2012
LOVE THE FAN ART BUT I THINK HIS NECK NEEDS TO BE A LITTLE SHORTER (sorry my caps lock was on and im lazy) love this story by the way it is realy good i keep meaning to review but i forget the only time i rememberd was on the chapter before you reveald sev's mate to be RAB i just get so wraped up in reading i have to go to the next chapter asap so i can find out what happens next
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From Morbid_and_Sexy on December 29, 2012
Ooh!!! I can't wait for ch. 66! I love how your story is coming along! My story is being kinda hard to write right now...
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From FaeChild on December 29, 2012
I just finished chapter 46. I almost woke my daughter up when I shouted 'wtf'... Thank you very much for that. I'm just kidding. Going back to reading now.
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From VincentMeoblinn on December 28, 2012
Ok, so this is a bit embarrasing, so please don't mock me for it. This story has meant a lot to me. I was pregnant when I 1st started reading it, and as circumstance would have it, had a pregnancy very similar to Harry's. Right when he nearly had a miscarriage, so did I. It was terrifying, and I read your story to get away from it all and have someone to sympathize with since my mother is not a part of my life. My baby was much more of a handful then Harry's, but of course I've only got 1 man helping me out! Thank you for being such an intense writer.
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From Kupowrath on December 28, 2012
It pains me to find out that I cannot 'subscribe' to this story. I suppose I'll just have to check every day? How often do you usually update?

I have read the entire story thus far, I just thought it prudent to backtrack and attempt to post a review for each chapter.

Let's start by saying that this story is so amazing. It's odd, I came here, looking for a bit of romance/porn to get a little flustered, and I randomly clicked on the first link I came across. It happened to be your story. I became so engrossed in it, I've done nothing but read it for nearly 4 days. I cried, I laughed, I got giddy and flustered. I cannot express how amazing this story is! Not to mention there are very few grammar and spelling mistakes, and you are an excellent writer, with an amazing imagination!

I will, eventually, review each and every chapter, but that will require another readthrough! Haha So from here on out, I'll pretend I haven't read any of it, and that I do not know what will happen. By the way, I hope you like long reviews.
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Hi there! Love your story so far! I love the idea of Drakens, and I feel like I've heard it before, or perhaps you just put so much life and thought into their story that I feel they MUST be real. I'll be honest, I felt the first chapter was kind of off. You did say it was adopted, so I assume pieces of it, if not the whole thing, were also adopted.

I do love the mystery when Harry doesn't realize there are more Drakens at Hogwarts! Then there's Snape, being kind of (who are we kidding, REALLY) creepy, as always. I'm hope this doesn't turn out to be a sev/harry fic, because, while I love Snape, I feel he should be a mentor/father/brother someone to protect and care for Harry, not sleep with him. Ew.

BUT OH MY! WHAT A CLIFF HANGER! I wonder who the strange man is that Harry met! Obviously a Draken of some sort! I hope he's there to help our little Harry! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter. (So I guess it's a good thing it's fully updated to chapter 65!)

Great story!
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Also, I apologize for my... how do I put it.. craziness? On the bright side, you get more reviews. On the down side, it's just me rambling on and being dumb.

Til next chapter!

Kupo

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From FaeChild on December 28, 2012
-looks around guiltily- I did not, did not under any circumstances have a spaz attack when I read that Fred and George were there...... It's 3am here and I just finished ch. 33... Hehe, 3 am, ch. 33... Sorry, I get weird the later it gets. Had to say that I'm in love with this story, again... And be weird I guess... GOOD NIGHT!!!
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From FaeChild on December 28, 2012
Okay, just finished Ch. 29, not giving input, just wanted to applaud you -pushes a button and what sounds like a stadium claps for you- not just for your wonderful story, but also for the take-down of that... -cough insert bad word here cough- reader. Obviously not paying attention. I once devoured a 35 chapter fic in less time than those 29 chapters took me, but I also stayed up for well over 30 hours to do it, so I apologize, it will take me two or three days to catch up. I also wanted to ask you to kindly accept my FB friend request as I have a writer-to-writer request that sounds confusing even in my head. Take your time, I'm going to plan with my original idea until I hear from you. But I really hope you are receptive to my idea, or that the original creator of the idea is... That sounded confusing. I apologize. I give you 5 STARS!!!!!!!!
Just so you know that I'm in love with your story and that I hope my own story earns the same approval from others that yours has earned from me, even if I'm not great at writing smut... Thank you for reading my ramblings. I'm kinda tired, but I can't... stop... reading!!!!
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From annabellaalyssmaressa on December 28, 2012
idk if im right and i know u have probly already wrote it in later chapters but i just have to guess is Rrgulus arcturus black severous's mate? (sorry about my spelling i know it sux)
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From FaeChild on December 27, 2012
Hi StarLight_Massacre. I actually just picked this story up. I love picking up completed works. Or fics that have a lot of chapters, because by the time I catch up to the last chapter posted when I started, the Author has usually added a couple more chapters. I'm hardly ever left wanting! Anyways, I'm on Chapter 20 as of right now and I just wanted to let you know that so far I love it. I'm not gonna give input to the story line until I'm closer to the end, because you've already written so much and my opinion will make no difference to what you've already written! I'm getting ready to post my own story soon, so far I've only written the prologue and part of the first chapter, which are kind of boring for what I have in mind, but every story has to start somewhere, right? Anyways, part of me wants to steal your dracken idea, even though I have one of my own for Dragon Descendants... And I'm rambling again. I apologize!!!
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