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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - K on December 13, 2012
    I think men cry as much as women and I don't find it girly. I found it girly is where and what he cried over. Public humiliation? He has suffered much worse than that without a tear in his eye because it really isn't something he would cry about, this is Harry, he's a strong character, crying over people laughing seems very small and petty which it is and a stained shirt. He cries over people's deaths over what he think it's his fault but public humiliation? Harry? No, he's gone through much worse to cry over something as small and miniscule as public humiliation if he ever did face such public humiliation he'd get angry which usually happens. So it makes me cringe when he cried over it.

    Draco has been a Slytherin player and from first year since he rode his first broom with Neville's remeberall, Harry had admitted that he was a really good flyer so how and why Blaise got picked as a quidditch captain is beyond me. Even J K Rowling has admitted that. But I guess I shouldn't have been surprised the fic has always been biased to Blaise anyway. And I've seen other reviews realising that too.

    Love this chapter but even if you're the writer, please don't be blind to your own character flaws.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on December 13, 2012
    Aw man, is he going to have ten babies or were you just pulling our legs!?! I hope he has ten babies, it'd be another interesting point in the story~!
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  • From ANON - S.S.-B. on December 13, 2012
    Staaaaaar xD
    You let us going crazy on facebook about the decuplets and now it's really a joke -.-
    YOU ARE EVIL! xD
    But it was a very good chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on December 13, 2012
    love the match in how braiden want his mama . star i have two of my sons living with me my 21 year old in my 23 year old its because of the economical system today unless your rich or have a high paying job its hard to live on your own besides their a lot of cultural people that have the whole family living with them i myself two uncles, my new-pew as well as my husband an sons love this chapter hope harry gets with draco's babies this time
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  • From ANON - steve on December 13, 2012
    thank you for haveing ron say he sorry, are you going to write ron talk with hermoine, is there anyway they could get back togther, or at least be friends.
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on December 13, 2012
    Yea, I didn't like Smith either xD
    but I'm curious of what is wrong with Harry, so I can't wait to see next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Hannah on December 12, 2012
    I LOVE this story!!! I don't mind having to wait longer, so long as you keep writing as marvellously as you do!!
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  • From Sullen-Faythe on December 11, 2012
    Lol drunken harry is hilarious! And blaize forgot how to speak english >_< I love this story I can't wait until the next update. I want to see harry in his new outfits!
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  • From ANON - Jeda_Lovegood on December 11, 2012
    *sighhh* I tried soooo hard not to read it thru too quickly but I cudnt help myself. I love this storyy sooooooo much. I'm usually not one for a long story but I said ill take a chance and I'm glad I did. There is never a boring chapter. Everything is just simply perfect in my opinion. All the ups&downs and the drama. Oh an I love Nasta. *teehee*. You really are an excellent writer. I'm seriously captured by this story. I'm gonna check out ur othr works while I wait for another update. Hope life's treating you well!

    Jeda :)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 10, 2012
    Don't worry about updating dear the suspense just makes each chapter that much better :)
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  • From Nene on December 10, 2012
    That was an amazing chapter. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Paendorah on December 09, 2012
    Yay an update!! I don't care how long you take to update the story as long as you don't abandon it!! This story is absolutely amazing!!
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  • From mommy_flaw on December 09, 2012
    Your health and life are more important than a story, no matter how good the story is. I hope all is well.

    I loved the chapter. I'm so glad I came here from ff. As always your descriptions are amazing. Another reason I like this story is how young Harry is with his children. I've said this before, but it helps me deal with mine while I'm in college and working to read about somebody else going through the same if not worse. That bit about Harry loving them but wishing they hadn't came yet? Gorgeous and made me feel less guilty for thinking that during finals.
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  • From ANON - Jeda_Lovegood on December 09, 2012
    Omggggg!!! This chapter had my heart beating so quickly. That quidditch match was intense! Lol! Cnt wait to see blaise an dray's reactions. I absolutel loove this story!
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfBeyond on December 09, 2012
    Fabulous chapter as always! Take the time you need to look after yourself, because there is no one and nothing more important. Besides, it makes the times when you do update more special - a special treat of a Dracken chapter to savour.

    ~Spiritxx
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