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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre

From NAnderson on October 28, 2012
Ohhh evil chiffy! I'm dieing for an update here!
But aside from how amazing this most recent chapter was I wanted to take a minute and say thank you for writing it. I've been an avid reader since it was started forever ago! You always do such a smashing job. And I always read not only the chapters but also the responses at the bottom. It's sad that you have to not only defend writing your story your way when so many people clearly enjoy it and it's even worse that you have to explain things over again in notes when it is clearly covered in the story. So what I really wanted to say I guess is that, even though I don't review often since my reviews would mainly be "PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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From ANON - Cecilia on October 28, 2012
Hello,
I have to say, your story is like chocolate. Addicting sweet and melt in your mouth rich Swiss chocolate. I read through what you have up, walk away and read other things, find you've put out a new chapter or two, squeal and gorge myself, and repeat. Then, I'll get so tired of the small sub-par stories out there and feel like an extended epic read, and find myself drawn back again. I CAN'T SAY NO!!! So, just like heavenly decadent chocolate. I keep coming back for more. This is my 12th read through and I'm more in love with it than ever before. So, like with chocolate after a gorgefest, I must say, I hate you, but, thank you so much for being here when you are needed!
Much Love Eternally,
Cecilia Witty
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From xDAISUKIx on October 27, 2012
Hello

Just wanted to say that. This story is awesome!

-Even if i only read up to the chapter where Harry gave birth. At that point i realised that the story's pace had slowed down. Now i'm a unmarried uni student without children and though i find children adorable. The sheer amount of children Harry is having (i know its normal for a scath) is scaring me and although there is plot, right now it's more like 'Harry's Babies Fic'. this is all stuff i've gathered from reading reviews and by peeking at chapter 60. I know i'm being picky but really, people can only read so much about baby teething and whatnot.

This is Harry Potter slash fiction. and though fanfic is all in all mental- shouldn't there be more focus on other things rather than the huge amount of babies that Harry has?
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From RikkaiDaiLove on October 26, 2012
Oh my gosh, what are you doing to me??!! HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP THERE??!! Oh good gosh... Nott and Greengrass have a whole lot of hurt coming their way when Harry's 4 VERY protective mates find out what happened.

I love the updates! I enjoy reading about the babies growing up! I am glad that we are getting some Harry drama again though ^_-
And I can NOT wait to find out what Ginny got for Harry!! I loved the chapter where he teased his mates with the skirt, I can't wait until he gets to use the new outfit XD
I enjoy this story so much!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

P.S.: A quick update will get you great big hugs from me and lots of Harry and Mates shaped cookies ^_^v
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From ANON - bookworm0492 on October 26, 2012
Welp, looks like Nott and Astoria are going to get their deads ripped off. Good old violent fun. Well, I certainly am glad for this chapter, a very good break from the normal fluffiness. I dont think Ill be ever be happy with the Harry and Ron situation in this fic, but I AM glad that you had Ron come to his senses and apologize, as much of a moron he is alot of the time, fics and canon-wise he always comes back. I'll still hold out hope for them, but we'll see how that goes.
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From ANON - Nadine on October 26, 2012
AAARGH! My word! GEEEEEZE! >> Okay minor murderous rage over. I hate cliffies. But I LOVE your story, and I guess I'll just have to wait... But oooooooh its so cute and adorable mixed in with bits that are AARRGH KILL moments, and bits that make you melt... and then hot steamy sex... This is honestly one of the best stories I've ever read... and if you ever want a beta, let me know :D I speed read, and used to beta for my mate. LOVE IT Xxxx
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From ANON - Nikita Xanthe on October 26, 2012
Wow I can't believe Theo would do something so stupid! I really can't wait to see what Harry's mate are going to do to him once they find out. Because you mentioned Ron in the chapter does that mean he's going to be the one to find and rescue Harry? And when do Harry's friends finally get to see the new babies? I can't wait until your next update!
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From ANON - DrackenLover on October 26, 2012
Awesome story!! I just finished the last chapter you put up and I got to say haha that was cruel. The story over all is amazing, the plots and the drama, action and romance is done very well. I think you are very successful in your story, you keep your audience even without the delicious smut. You story can stand on its own with out the loving scenes so that makes it all the more to read. Your OC characters are wonderful, it feel like they have been in the books themselves and they have wonderful personalities that just pop out of your story, I love the little twist of drama you drop in, keep the story even more interesting, and I love the resolution you give when you start a drama. Over alI brilliant story, you are a very talented author and I can not wait for the rest, I am going to be very sad when the whole story will be done to be honest haha I don't ever want the characters to end :D

..........on another tangent....I am weird and I like to look at other reviews and what not......really Sera12, what the hell does a car loan have to do with the plot??? Sure Max has a car but he had it before he met harry so I'm pretty sure it is paid off if you want to be technical. And if you read the story and understood, they the second pregnancy was a surprise because that day they all had sex was when the temperature for that day was a record high and all the boys were outside, he wasn't in heat, the weather just made it feel like that, and yes it raised the temp up that much because again in the story the writer clearly states that dracken temperature is hight than humans normally. So no he would have 10-20 kids on purpose every heat, and even if they did, I think that can afford it. If the author stuck with the Malfoy's are sticking rich then I'm pretty sure Draco's inheritance will help and so will blaise.....you are bringing up problems that would happen in the really world sweety...this is a FAN-FICTION so hence not real life. And to Serria_Silver12 (or Ser12) which ever you prefer.....really??? I haven't been on the the authors facebook but yes spoilers are a big thing, and with such a big following of the story some readers do and will get angry. If she get a big head then that is her prerogative not yours, and I clicked on your name and I see you haven't written any stories yourself, sound like jealousy to me. Why don't you write up or shut up yes? Yes.

On that note again wonderful story and please please please ignore the two twats and keep writing your wonderful story!!
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From PeriLover on October 26, 2012
First let me say that I am very happy you have continued this story beyond Harry giving birth. Too many people leave it there. I like how Harry is growing up! Sera21 needs to get a life. Its obvious that the babies are important to the story!! We have to know about them to understand some of the subplots going on. I can't wait to see what you do to Theo and Astoria!! Hmmmm, sounds like jail time to me. After all, they attacked the "Golden Boy", the Boy-who-Lived-to-be-a-Draken! Thank you for all your hard work. It is appreciated!
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From ANON - kyuubichild717 on October 25, 2012
I hope that you will write what happens when Harry's mates find out who attacked him and why. Poor Harry is gearing towards a heat isn't he? the grain intake has started and he is thinking of more children already. what will the reactions be to this? I wonder if the In-laws will help get revenge for hurting Harry. Nott and Astoria both need a reality check and wands snapped before it is their necks. When Harry tells the others what Theo spewed at him, his dominates are not going to be happy at all. Not only did Nott say and tell things to Harry that do not bare repeating but he also dragged not one but two of the four doms into it. Nasta, Blaise and Draco toss up as to who is most murderous. The poor babies are going to wonder where mommy is and poor Harry is never going to so much as pee alone ever again.
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From ANON - Sera21 on October 25, 2012
I do presume that there will be *some* sort of further education after Hogwarts. Afrter all I don't belive that an internship would be enough to cover a job like say being a healer or an unspeakable. I am presuming that some sort of programme would have to be followed with theory and practise invloved and that is what I meant with "student" loans. On the contrary, there seems to be some evidence as to the fact that several wizards have cars. * see the end of the Harry Potter series where Ron is driving a car* . Also yeah, not quite sure why I continue reading either but I seem to have grown fond of the characters...not sure if I am going to continue as they really do seem to good to be true at points but meh, you have a good writing style and u are claerly a first language speaker of English. That already puts you in the top 20% of this site I would say :P
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From heartshappedsunglasses on October 25, 2012
Ooohhh Draco and Blaise are going to kill them~~~ well maybe not kill, but I'm hopping for severely injured! And are Harry's stomach pains signaling that he will have another child soon? A blonde one perhaps? ^_^ I love the all the children and can't wait to see Harry with more, although for all their sanity I hope he doesn't get pregnant until they take their NEWTs test.
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From Lady_Arachne on October 25, 2012
Why? Why would you leave a cliffhanger!!!!! *weakly smacks author* WHY!!!! *sobs*

*sniffs* I love that Ron has grown up, but I guess it was getting kind of old of him to be holding some kind of grudge for so long about something stupid and untrue.

*sniffs again* I really loved this chapter, just wish there wasn't a cliffhanger!!! *cries and weakly smacks author*
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From ANON - Lory on October 25, 2012
That is the meanest thing you could have done to me! Pleaaaase update soon, I'm dying!!!!
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From Aline on October 25, 2012
Oh god, someone is going to die, and with Blaise so stressed he might be the first to go into the killing path, the others following close.
I love the babies!!
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