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Reviews for Ashborn

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Sablesilverrain on March 21, 2012
    AWWW!!!!!!!

    LOVE IT!!!!!!

    *worships*
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on March 18, 2012
    Another great story finished. But plenty more of yours to read. I'm glad that in the end the woman declined Draco's offer. Hehe. Though I suppose he could find someone else to marry in the future but that wont be in this story. ;) Anyway, great story. Please keep writing!
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  • From Sablesilverrain on March 18, 2012
    WHAAAAAHHHHH!

    I hate that it's over.

    ...Oh, wait, I have chocolate ice cream bars in the freezer...

    Loved the story, will probably read it again more than once, and now, I go to eat my emotions, LOL!
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  • From bloodshound on March 16, 2012
    blinks... i think this is one of your most open ended series to date. they have a lot still to sort through, but now they have each other to lean on so it's all good. I think it was a good place to end it. cheers and kudos.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on March 14, 2012
    A but tickling you is at least fun for me and not hurtfull for you, as opposed to slapping.

    I vote for a sequel! I've really come to love this odd setup in potterverse. Of all our stories the characters are not the most believable but on the other hand the allience and the setup around it where realy nice. Plus I still have great affection for Corners, I suggest to let him slither in another story!

    Cheers

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  • From Shadowdog85 on March 13, 2012
    Aww! I'm going to miss this story! I love it soooo much, this is one I'll probably come back to read again later, perhaps a few times. Thank you so much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on March 13, 2012
    Wha? That's it? Aw man. I was hoping Draco would have kids and stuff. I thought this was going to go much longer.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 12, 2012
    That ending was rather anti-climatic and abrupt. There's so many things that you could have wrote about 1) what will Draco do now about his reading of the future and the part about marriage/kids now that he was refused? 2) severus and his part in the alliance 3) harry and his school 4) merfolk and other groups eventually becoming part of the alliance

    is there any plans to do a sequel?

    good story but the ending threw me off
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  • From Sablesilverrain on March 07, 2012
    AAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!

    &$^5&^#$@&#^#$@&$#@&^$*#!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *worships Lomonaaeren*

    I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy!

    LOL, I love it! Wonderful, and I do believe I'm going to need to give my brain a few hours to un-explode. Plus, I think my laptop is acually SWEATING.

    Hot, sexy, and the yummiest thing I've read this last month, if not all year so far. Mmm... Severus... *is craving a good Snarry*
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on March 07, 2012
    Damn right you are!
    Slow build up make sit all that more intense.

    But I wont hit you, that might impair your writing ability ;)
    I might just tickle you instead, much more fun!

    Thank you dear.
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on March 03, 2012
    I rather hope that what the centars said about Draco's future doesnt come to pass, at least not all of it. I dont want him to get married to some women and then have Harry and Snape on the side and I dont think they would like that either. I know you most likely have a plan already about what will happen but heres hoping that Draco doesnt marry anyone that isnt Snape and Harry. :) Anyway as always I love your writing. Update soon.
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  • From bloodshound on March 02, 2012
    this is really fascinating. each is continuing with their own thing and learning new things about themselves and their future plans while still coming together and building a life together. I wonder if malfoys wife though, will be okay knowing that his lovers are equally and in some cases more important to him than she is. if she's accustomed to the way the alliance lives she might be.
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  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on February 29, 2012
    I've been reading your fics for years now and to date, I think Laughter is my favorite original character you've come up with that my sleepy brain can think of right now lol. Something so charming about him.

    I liked the fortune that Draco was shown. That would be nice to see. Little Draclettes running around.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on February 28, 2012
    Well in that case I will stay around to read the next chapters when you've written them!

    I like it how you have Harry get his own place. Just like Severus and his big space.

    Plus I secretly hope that you continue where you have left this chapter instead of skipping to the next morning or so *angelface*
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  • From Shadowdog85 on February 28, 2012
    Thank you for the update! It seems Severus is still snarky but Harry knows how to handle him now:> I can't wait to read more.
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