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Reviews for Ashborn

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Sablesilverrain on February 27, 2012
    YAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *dances around room singing "next chapter, next chapter, next cha-"*

    *falls*

    Ow.

    Ok, so I will SIT DOWN and wait patiently for the next chapter.

    ...

    I don't see it yet... Damn...
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on February 26, 2012
    Hi there!

    You might have wondered where did that chick go that left reviews most of the time for a while. Well she went on holliday for a month and is still adapting to have electronics back in her life. So I'm slowly reading up again starting with the ashborn.

    I really like the progress in the story although there are so many things stilll unanswered.

    What did Percy do?
    What about the body?
    Is the ministry cowed enough?
    Will teh alliance work out?
    What about corners?
    What about more Severus/Draco/Harry?
    What about more of this awesome story?

    Anyhow I'll content myself with reading your other stuff!
    Thanks a bunch for writing all this and sharing!
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  • From ANON - Amethyst on February 19, 2012
    the first time a saw this story it did not grab my imagination. but i cam,e back to it with more patience and it paid of. I really like how it has evolved. but i would like to see snape be more active in the allegiance.
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  • From Sablesilverrain on February 17, 2012
    Wow, two freaking days of reading to catch up with this fic. LOL.

    I love it, and now that I'm all nicely caught up, I should be able to follow it pretty easily, seeing as how I look for updates on all the fics I'm reading only about, say, five times a day. *blush* Yeah, I'm hopelessly addicted to fanfic.

    Anywho, this is really engrossing, and I love the alliance interplays going on, it's all very complicated and entertaining to no end, LOL.

    I can't WAIT for Harry to lose his virginity, I'm sure THAT'LL be absolutely smoking hot, if your past fics are any indication. So, I need to fix my son some dinner now, or he may scream in my ear again, and I've been deafened enough for the time being, so...

    Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on February 14, 2012
    I think this is my favorite fic you have going on currently. I'm such a Draco fan lol, and this is probably my favorite take on him. I'm amused Harry seems a bit jealous of Laughter, did laughter even have thoughts like that for Draco or was he misreading?
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  • From bloodshound on February 14, 2012
    wow, draco's really coming into his own huh? Poor sev got hardly any screen time this time out. ^^ Getting used to not being the centre of attention indeed. *smirk.
    I don't think har can help his self sacrificing nature, but hopefully, his slyth partners can balance him and keep him from painting himself into to many corners.

    I know i found it when i decided to re read some of your stories.... mind you, it'd help if i didn't have to wade thru over 20 pages to find it... >>
    i know, not your fault. still, it'd be epic if the site had a way to allow you to put 1 shots 1 place and bigger length stories in another. ah well, i can dream. :P
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  • From bloodshound on February 08, 2012
    boooo, only a few chappies left, but it seems like there's still so much to resolve.... but then again, you and i both know a lot can happen in a few chappies.
    so, har's had his first proper taste of a 3 some, sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. you can bet he'll be doing that again. ^^ and his friends know and accept... sort of. >> so that's sorted.

    btw, did that one where harry was an auror with a contract to the MoM and draco finds out and works to get him out of it get completed? I lost track of that one for a bit. *wonders off to re read vampy drarry goodness.
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  • From Shadowdog85 on February 06, 2012
    Normally I'm up here as Shadowdog85, but oh well. I really loved this chapter! I like how they're taking it slow. I can't wait to read more! Thank you for the update.
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  • From bloodshound on January 31, 2012
    i envy you your smut imagination. you'r lemons are always fresh and engaging and never repetitive or dull.
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  • From bloodshound on January 26, 2012
    it's sad that har has to learn to be 'selfish'. title of saviour or not, har's done his duty. he doesn't have to carry the weight of the world on his shoulders anymore. while i can appreciate him wanting to free the brain slaves... he doesn't HAVE to fight for them if it's decided to shuffle them off to the clink. Though they were probably more useful as brain slaves, when sev perfects his potion, they'll know which are safe to release.
    I think Sev and Draco are very good for him. It's been a long time since he was able to take time or anything else for that matter for himself.
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  • From Darkless on January 23, 2012
    Another excellently told story...but unfinished. Well, now that I have found this fic (and read to its current chapter), I will eagerly await futherance of this tale. Nicely done.
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  • From bloodshound on January 18, 2012
    yes indeed, what will they do with him now. the man is obviously a fanatic and utterly nutters. I'm glad har is learning that sometimes a thing is done for a reason... tho perhaps yaxley wasn't a good choice to release. maybe har should defer to sev as to who would be good choices to release and who is best to stay under control. ... though, he dis suggest yaxley. :/
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  • From Pennfold on January 16, 2012
    Oh, I'm so glad you updated, I've been on pins and needles wondering what the aftermath from the ministry would be for the three of them. As always another fine installment.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2012
    It'll be interesting to see what they do with Yaxley since he's clearly not like the other freed Death Eater.

    You've got my interest piqued with the spell that Harry used to kill Voldemort now! haha

    Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on January 03, 2012
    I loved this chapter! I wonder if the ministry will leave them alone now? And I love how close Harry is working with Severus and Draco. Thank you for the update!
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