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Reviews for Ashborn

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From YamiBakura on November 16, 2011
    Chapter 25

    I sometimes don't have the time (or internet connection) to review everything, though I try to keep up with reviews on Business Meetings (because it's so short and lovely and I just love it!) so you know I'm out here. For some reason, I really enjoyed the letter-writing. I have no idea where you're taking this (which is what makes it such a joy to read) but if you're ever struck by the urge, it'd be interesting to see a story written completely in letters. You're quite good at it, and as I just said, for some reason the letters really stuck out as the bright part of this chapter.


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  • From bloodshound on November 15, 2011
    awesome. it's simply awesome the growth these three are showing already. it's amazing. though i think it might take a while for har to be comfortable in his own skin and possibly longer for his friends to adjust to that. is it bondage if you are there willingly and could leave if you wanted?
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on November 15, 2011
    Whoa! I really loved this chapter! I love how you always update every Monday. I don't know how you do it. My stories always fight me, I think your a great writer and I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on November 15, 2011
    Yeeeh it's finally Severus. Or close to that.

    I'm still very fond of Corners and his snake-wisdom
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on November 09, 2011
    Yay some more of the ashborn-story as a cure for the flu, or at least a distraction!

    And a non-angry Ginny plus a not-so-homofobic-Ron Wow. But what will Hermione think?

    Snape/Draco/Harry all seem to think the same thing, but no doubt it'll still be a hard road to get there.

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on November 04, 2011
    Whoop Whoop! A kiss!

    but even better they are all thinking about eachother!C
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  • From bloodshound on November 01, 2011
    Now, THAT was most interesting. Har has a bit of breathing space but i don't think he's going to be able to 'run' for ever. It's a lot to think about and those vows... Well, something sure seems to have crawled up Mio's but and died. I hope they don't expect Har to just pick up where he left off.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on October 25, 2011
    Things seem to go so wel that it makes me wonder when it'll crash again.
    But maybe they'll start to come together.

    I still realy like Corners too!
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on October 25, 2011
    I really love blushing Harry, although it makes me wonder. How much experience with relationships does Harry have? What with the war and all. Should be really interesting to see how he handles both Draco's and Severus' desire for him. Great story, love it!
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  • From bloodshound on October 24, 2011
    Harry stared at him.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on October 21, 2011
    So they are starting to come around to each other hmmmm nice. Things are slowly developing on the personal level

    "Potter's grin widened. "Are you instructing me in Legilimency or in sex?" Brilliant!
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  • From bloodshound on October 18, 2011
    wow, that's a lot to chew on. Har's going to have quite a bit of mental digesting to do.
    Heh, on the way there Har seemed almost manic. Almost scary even.
    I'm with Snape on this one, I don't think Har is quite ready to know Snape is attracted to him... and I don't think Draco is quite ready to share either.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on October 11, 2011
    Thanks for another chapter!

    One hell of a way to uppen the stakes, Harry in Snape's mind.
    I'd liek to see how that part works out.

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on October 11, 2011
    This chapter was great, it really pushed the story forwards and I can't wait now to read what happens next when Harry ventures into Snape's mind. Thank you for the update!
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  • From bloodshound on October 10, 2011
    YES and progress is being made! harry seems more sure of himself now. Nice turn around on Ron. Har will make a hell of mind doc want's he gets his bits sorted. I think it'll be good for snape to find out that Har won't go blurting his secrets to all and sundry.
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