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Reviews for Ashborn

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From bloodshound on August 29, 2011
    wow, serious and major turning point of turning point i ness. Maybe Har can start thinking of the pair as something other than 't enemy' Snape especially. Interesting that there were no lingering vampy effects.
    The Dursleys should be brought up on charges of child abuse and it's a pity dumbles is dead as he should have been as well for leaving harry there in the first place and not checking regularly to see that he was cared for at least physically.
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  • From Idunn on August 26, 2011
    I had to make an account in order to properly review this story.

    I love the depth you've given each character. The way you've altered what happened during the war, the character definition, the relationships between Harry and his friends, and then the way Severus, Draco, and Harry all react together, it's just...
    It comes together in one really breath taking story.

    I usually avoid chapter stories like the plague. However, I really am glad I took a chance on Ashborn.
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  • From bloodshound on August 22, 2011
    Wow. *winces on Harry's behalf. Not my idea of fun. Still, Gooooooooooooooooooo Draco! Nice timing man. Well done. And now Snape is going to get a crash course on all things Harry... good luck with that old son.
    looking forward to the next chappie.
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  • From AlphazSlut on August 22, 2011
    This is your cruelest cliffhanger yet. T^T
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  • From bloodshound on August 15, 2011
    Well, that adds complications... though Draco got one thing he wanted... sort of. I think Harry's hero complex will hold him there though or at least influence him greatly to stay. Sev making the kitty bot is interesting. I hope Draco likes it.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on August 10, 2011
    "not as dangerous as when they will involve the vampires"

    But but :O that's what they are doing, well almost but still.

    I guess I'll just have to wait and see what'll happen. . .
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  • From mrequecky on August 10, 2011
    Oh wow, loved! Can't wait to see the vampires getting involved :D
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  • From bloodshound on August 08, 2011
    interesting... so they will get the vamps involved then? Were politcis sounds damn scary. If Harry won't just accept the gifts... is there some way he could earn them or something else he could do? After all, he does need new clothes. It was good to hear Thera speak up. I think it's fine if Sev and draco want to get back together, as i don't think they'll be treating each other as they did previous.
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on August 02, 2011
    Whiie!

    Thank you!

    The wherewolves eh, dangerous games they are playing.
    I'll stay tuned for the next chapter.

    cheers,
    Alter
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on August 02, 2011
    Thank you for the update! I wonder what Snape is planning for Harry? I can't wait to find out! Looking forward to next Monday!
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  • From bloodshound on August 01, 2011
    well that sounds kinda ominous. Other measures indeed. I'm glad draco is getting his confidence back. He's going to be magnpificent when he's full of true self confidence rather than second hand and haughty pride.
    snickers. He CAN be taught. lol. That was a good idea Harry came up with. Seems to work so far too.
    like the review before mine says, it's a good feeling when stories you like up date. So ty Loma for the weekly good feelings. ^^

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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on July 31, 2011
    Yay!

    After a long vacation there where multiple ashborne chapters waiting for me!

    By now it's way past bed time here and I hope for another chapter soon!

    Sleep well,
    Alter
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  • From bloodshound on July 25, 2011
    well FINALLY! It ceertainly took Snape long enough to pull his head out of his but. Maybe now Harry can see as other than 'the enemy' and maybe together Snape and Draco can do something about that suicidal urge of Harry's. Bring him back to proper feeling again.
    It's interesting about the magical being alliance and hopefully this will help Draco to grow up a bit to. harry had a point there. He did do an aweful lot of swinging back ward and forward emotionally. Now that' they've hashed some things out, Harry will be able to treat him differntly to.
    though if the other M C's also send representatives, where are they going to put them all.
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  • From ANON - Missy on July 21, 2011
    It is a pity that Harry did not think to build into his imprisonment the need to have his food provided to him by his own people. Japan does not provide food that is fit for human consumption to people incarcerated in their prison system. Most foreign nationals have their food provided by their own governments just on the hope that they might actually survive the harsh conditions. Cruel and unusual punishment is not a phrase they understand, even if it were to be translated into Japanese.
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  • From bloodshound on July 18, 2011
    Snape is bbeing a twat. If he knew anything, anything at all aobut Harry's childhood home life, he should have realised that withholding food wouldn't work. ( and he should considering all the legilemons 'training' he put Harry through.)
    It'll be interesting to see how Harry dodges the potions.
    As for draco, you're right about that anger. he's got to make it start working for him rather than against.
    It's a pity Harry couldn't ask Ron and Mio for a care package.
    It was really clever to usee the snake like that. Harry is a real surviver.
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