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Reviews for Ashborn

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on July 12, 2011
    I've read your story from the very first chapter and I'm always impatient for the next chapter. Please keep writing, I like your consistency and I love your story. It is truly unique.
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  • From bloodshound on July 11, 2011
    Yeah, that's what Harry does to him. He makes him feel, react, think... basically he's making him come back to life... and that's usually hard and painful when you've shut yourself off.
    Draco is a scared little boy atm, but hopefully, he'll grow a bit more of a back bone and be better for it now.
    For a cfharacter who frustraites you, you are doing a good job on him. Looking forward to more.
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  • From CodyMThomas on July 07, 2011
    There's just something about this story that keeps pulling me back in to read more (Awesomely long) chapters, even though at the same time there is something about this story that makes me want to pull out my hair in frustration.

    What I like is the Draco/Harry interactions and the general plot of the story, I can't stay away because it's interesting and unique. and Harry, Gods above I love your portrayal of Harry. What's bugging me is surprisingly enough, Snape. I just want to beat the man senseless, bludgeon him with the heaviest potions book I can find and then drown him in his own cauldron. It's mostly because he's acting like he has brain damage and walking around half conscious and not acting a bit like his usual self. In fact he's acting like he's a zombie under his own damn brainwashing spell and I want to beat him back into ranting, sneering, snarky coherency. ARGH!

    Seriously, at this point I'm far more in favor of just a Harry/Draco pairing (Which I normally don't support) because I seriously don't see how it could work out for the three of them. But I'm gonna hold out hope for redemption on Snape's part, mainly because of the fact that this is a very good story that has been well written, and also because you have managed to redeem Draco in my eyes already, and I had expected him to be the difficult one. So you've (for this fic only) turned my Snarry fangirl over to Drarry or Harco or whatever it's called. Gods only know where that will lead me in times to come, but for now I'm willing to be like Harry and just go with it. ^_^
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  • From YamiBakura on July 05, 2011
    Chapter 6:

    My first reaction was 'ai, no, not the centaurs! What about Snape! What about the relationship? How is it going to work?' And then I stopped whinging and read it, and loved this chapter. I love Snape's reactions to Harry, and Draco's reactions in general.
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  • From bloodshound on July 05, 2011
    booooooooooooooooooooo. Well, i guess it's not everyones flavour. Sort of like liquirce tea. An acquired flavour. ^^
    I like it though. It's putting a different spin on things.
    I do wish more people would review though. Even if it's just to say it's not their thing. This story deserves it.
    *goes back to re reading some of your older stories/ ones shots for the sixth time.
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  • From bloodshound on July 04, 2011
    Things are starting to really move. Though I imagine unlearning for sev is going to take a while... a LONG while. He's a very stubourn man. It;s going to be amusing watching him deal with the centaurs on his doorstep, and Draco try and explaine their presence. Then there's the snake automaton. lol. That was great. *snickers. he can wind Sev up without even trying. I'm surprised Sev doesn't remember how badly Harry reacts to threats. Even if his percption of Harry as warped as it was he should have remembered that much.
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  • From themaidenlyra on June 29, 2011
    Didn't care for it to much it was very cold and emotionless sorry.
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  • From bloodshound on June 27, 2011
    Now were're getting somewhere. Draco is starting to think outside the box. Though it's going to take something pretty magor to wedge sevs mind open. aminable to change he is not. Nor has he seemed to notice that his pet isn't a kid anymore and when he does its going to smack him hard.
    will harry have more of a role? atm he is just the instigater and the one who'll introduce the two parties to the other.
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  • From bloodshound on June 21, 2011
    Lol. harry you little reble rouser you. :P
    Still, a man, especially a captive man, needs a hobby and they will likely be better for a bit of constructive subversion. I go6tta admit I agree with Harry. The life of a leashed dog isn't much of a life, especially for a free thinker. Sheould be interersting to see what Draco does with his new subversive thoughts. ^^
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  • From ANON - AlterEquis on June 21, 2011
    keep it up!

    (im)patienly waiting for the next monday ;)
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  • From ANON - Emma on June 21, 2011
    This is my favorite story right now. Honestly, every single Monday I get a random "Woohoo!" and I go on to AFF. I love the way the characters are developing and for some reason, this story is feeling more Draco/Harry right now. I don't know if that's just because of that chapter? Anyways, I love this story and your writing is so fluid and easy to read. Can't wait till next Monday!
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2011
    Sigh. This comes of having no to argue with, no one who will stimulate you through bringign other world views and ideas into the light with you. Ultimately i think Harry will be good for them cause a closed society stagnates. You need change, new ideas based on a solid foundation to grow and be dynamic. And Sev and Draco both need to realize that this ISN'T schoolo boy Harry (and even him they might not have had a realistic impression of. This Harry fought a war. Of course he's going to think and react differentlllly to what they know. should be quite a shock to the system when they finally face that thought ^^ fun fun
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  • From SweetChimes on June 13, 2011
    Omg! once again: FABULOUS!! just loving the story! i really am already angsting over when severus will figure out that not only draco, who he sees as a mere "child", but BOTH of them got played by harry! hahahaha! eek! sooooo exciting!!
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  • From ANON - Emma on June 08, 2011
    This story is going to be amazing. I feel it already. :) The setup of the place, the characters, the story are all amazing! I want to be in the future where I read the next chapter. I love Harry's adult character and the idea that all of them have flaws. Severus can't always be right. Anyways, I'm going crazy for this new story idea!
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  • From worriorbookwyrm on June 08, 2011
    i cant wait to read more
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