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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SParker on July 03, 2011
    about #5...

    Well, the good thing about this..Draco gave Harry
    something to think about, so what else can Harry
    do that would be worthwhile? DOES he have any particular
    skills...maybe a bodyguard?
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  • From bloodshound on July 02, 2011
    It will be interesting to see how harry handles himself from here on out. and why Robards was so very fraantic to bring Malfoy in. I also doubt Draco will leave it at that. Keep your friends close... kind of thing and the best place to ensure Harry doesn't do anything dramatic would be under his watchful gaze. paranoid much. ^^
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  • From SParker on June 26, 2011
    Ha...I gotta laugh. The words 'less temperamental' did
    NOT apply to my bird, he was a dominant bastard and I
    think I pissed him off when I got him. I think I took
    him from his bondmate or something... :-/
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    about #4...

    *does the giddy dance..in a chair* Oooo...that WAS
    hot. Sexual foreplay is ALWAYS a good thing, I just
    hope Harry gets a chance to do it right the next time.

    ...and now he's a bit 'tied up'. Well, I'm sure the
    Auror in Harry will think of...something? O_o

    Btw, how is the title of this story going to apply
    within this story, especially with its meaning?

    PS: I still want my game, I'm not going to let you
    off the hook on this one, so get ta' thinkin'. :-)
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  • From bloodshound on June 25, 2011
    Good grief... Harry just screwed him silly and he still has the strength for spells. I thhink i have a new respect for Draco... He's not as easily lead as harry might believe. It's like, so he knows huh... what next.
    And harry thiinking about his job so harshly, maybe the sitch is bring out or bring home a few home truths.
    Going to be interesting to see if Harry can talk his way outta this one.
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  • From ANON - Zip on June 25, 2011
    Wow, this was intense. If I am not mistaken this is fourth story of yours which I like. You work with two characters, but in each story, I feel like they are somehow different.
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  • From YamiBakura on June 25, 2011
    Chapter 4:

    Eeeeek! I didn't see that coming! I've been immersed in making fun of Twilight today, and the abrupt change to Harry Potter threw me a little, so I don't have anything useful to say here beyond I can't wait for the next chapter!

    The scene was good, and not just because it was sex; I enjoyed Harry's reactions, how he's totally open with Draco and then Draco shocks the shit out of him. (Aha. I managed *something* pertinent.)
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  • From Freada749 on June 25, 2011
    About Ch 4:

    This just gets better and better! I'm incredibly glad that Draco is going to put up a fight, I had my doubts for a whlie there. I can't wait to see how Harry gets out of this one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2011
    wow has harry in any slash fic been so composed and rational?
    i think no.It's almost sociopathic.'I want him'why would he taste nice with the fish?LoL
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  • From YamiBakura on June 19, 2011
    Chapter 3:

    First of all, I love Draco! I'm so glad he's the other main character, because I most definitely want to see more of him here. I'm not sure about Harry (I don't hate him, but I prefer him in context with Draco) and Fovea is becoming a favourite character.

    I hate Robards. I think he's behind it, with a personal grudge against Malfoy being the reason he's so set on Harry arresting him with a guilty verdict.

    Overall, I like the set-up too. Its unusual, but so far, handled well, and the little dribs and drabs of information you're handing out are keeping me interested.
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  • From SParker on June 19, 2011
    about #3..

    I just had an idea, ever thought about Harry playing
    a game with Draco called 'Can You Catch Me?' That would
    be something to think about in a future chapter, if you
    haven't gone too far in writing.

    ..and the game can be as playful and/or sexual as you
    want it to be. :-)

    Oh, and make the chase count, none of that one or two
    paragraphs stuff. :-P
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    forgot to mention in last review, I did have a cockatiel,
    it's not the same as having a cockatoo though or an African
    gray...
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  • From refugerena on June 18, 2011
    Love the story, wish the chapters were longer!
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  • From bloodshound on June 18, 2011
    Smooth Harry, very smooth. Still, what crawled up Robards but and died? he really must have a LOT riding on this and it'll be interesting to find out why. ^^ The fact that Draco is gun shy and there fore harder to suduce makes it all the more interesting.
    I'm glad Ron and Mio are understanding ish about Harry's job... though who woulda picked Neville to go off the moral deep end about it. :P
    anyway. I'm enjoying very much. Look forward to the next enstalment. ^^
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  • From Ikippiki on June 15, 2011
    This story is very original and fun to read. I love the playfulness (and sexyness) of your mature Harry.
    Can't wait to read more.
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  • From SParker on June 12, 2011
    about #2...

    YES, indeed! This story DOES sound like it's going to be fun. :-)
    It's been a while since I've seen Harry play any coy & mischievious
    roles in your story and Draco is wanting to play seducer, but will
    wind up probably as the seducee. :-)

    By the way, ur cockatoo is QUITE the scene stealer, I was close to
    getting one 8 years ago, but couldn't afford one at the time. It's
    a little late in my life to get one now.

    Anyway, loving this...
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  • From Freada749 on June 12, 2011
    About Ch 2:

    Hahaha! I completely agree with Harry here. This is certainly going to be fun! I really like this dynamic so far. I also rather enjoy the fact that Harry has a rather bossy pet cockatoo. I wonder if Fovea will like Draco when they meet. Sidenote: My captcha has the word "hogshead" in it, haha!
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