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Reviews for Sweet Surrender

By : witch
  • From ANON - SnapesWoman1980 on September 02, 2011
    I was so captivated by this story that I verbally cried out in frustration at the lack of further chapters. More please, madam.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 21, 2011
    Your writing of her pain, confusion and anger was perfect. I could "see" her clearly in her anguish. I wonder why no one else can? Sigh... I am glad he finally answered a question for her. But, considering it had all the clarity (for her) of a Dumbledore answer, and he immediately reverted to form with his snappish snarkiness, I don't know how much progress was made. lol She seems to have started on the way to wondering about him, but he doesn't seem to have any feelings... full stop. lol I can't wait to see him break and be actually helpful to this poor girl. She needs something to lean on, depend on; someone to talk to her and not at her. She has lost everything (parents, friends, freedom) and he's treating her like she's upset over a broken nail. Ugh! He is frustrating. But, I am still enjoying this story and look forward to more. Thanks!! HG4eva
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  • From kattniptwo on July 19, 2011
    Awsome story so far. Sorry to hear it was lost to cyberspace..looking forward to more more more! poor hermoine she will now truly be alone hopefully soon she will have sev at least
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 02, 2011
    Hello. I know this is supposed to be a Hermione/Snape love story, but right now all I cna think is "Oh Merlin! Poor Hermione! They left her. They just left her with Snape. SNAPE?! The man who's so far been so frackin' open, accommodating, and generally sweet to her. What the he!! were they thinking?!" I am sure you have a plan and that by the time it unfolds, I will be fully on board. But, right now, I am simply horrified, saddened and scared for her. She now has no one. Even McGonagall's not been there for her. That poor girl. Sigh.

    Otherwise, thank you for a lovely chapter. :-) I do enjoy your writing and this story and look forward to more soon. HG4eva
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  • From GlassesandWhatnot on June 09, 2011
    Looks so promising so far! I cannot wait to see how you end up getting Hermione and Snape together in this fic because I cannot see it, even if they are living together. I am prepared to be amazed and dazzeled by your mad writing skills when it begins. I dislike telling people to update soon because they have lives and other obligations and stories and what have you but I am going to hint by saying that I am very eager to read more
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  • From winter748 on June 09, 2011
    This story too? You poor thing. Glad you were able to repost as this was a story that I was following. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks
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