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Reviews for Vita vel Mors Mortis

By : lokifreak420
  • From ANON - Impatient to read more on October 10, 2013
    hello um we haven't met but I just wanted to say that I like what you have written thus far. It has only just started to get interesting and I cant wait for more now if you wish me to give you a review in order for the story to be continued then I will be more than happy to. Cant wait to read more of your story.
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  • From lokifreak420 on June 15, 2011
    First as i have done extensive research into the time turner and JKR DOES NOT specify weither or not you can go forward using a time turner and she deffinately does not specify the time limit on it. everyone just assumes that you cant i am taking advantage of that other possibility arrising out of what was clearly omitted in both book or movie. secondly it would defeat the prpose to end a story in so few chapters. just because harry goes back in time doesn't mean that the future is changed immediately. he won't miss the money anyways considering the fact that his parents left it to him when they died. so if they by happenstance lived he would still have the money and they would not be worse for wear. as for the change of identity. as stated in the story he doesn't want to be recognized of being in relation to lily or james. I really wish some people would think before posting a review like the one you posted. i am not some ignorant child that is writing her first story i have several written but not posted on the internet for the scrutiny of someone who clearly does not take into account " hey maybe the writer ment to do this. maybe the writer planned to do this." please reestablish your questions and comments and think about things before posting them for all to see. Maybe posting your own story and getting a review like the one you left will make you think things through
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  • From pervyfaerie on June 15, 2011
    first don't time turners only go back 12 hours? i could be wrong but i was pretty sure about that..I am positive that it cant bring you forward in time, thats why in the books/movie after saving buckbeak they had to just sit around and wait until the next event happened. however thats all besides the point because its kinda redundant to use a time turner anyways, he is going to go back in time anyways what dose it matter if he takes 2 extra days todo it? on top of that he will be permanently going back in time and changing the future, there is no point to leave his friends money, as soon as the timeline changes they wont remember him like that and there wont be any money for them. its not like he is going outta country or to a different dimension after all. the story itself is a good idea(and im looking forward to reading it) but those two aspects are pointless add-ons that just make it more complicated and confusing then needed.
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  • From bloodshound on June 11, 2011
    well, its a good idea guys. And I'm glad he's letting Slyth caution and plan ning balance the Gryff need to jump right in there. It'll be interesting to see what time he makes for and what name he takes... I'm betting on him being a black...or completely unrelated. ^^ Can't wait to see what you do next.
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