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Reviews for Complications

By : Holly
  • From on June 27, 2011
    It's a little boring so far. I mean, they fuck all the time and nothing else. I would suggest writing longer chapters and not basing the whole story on sex alone; slashy scenes are good, very good but not when they take up most of te chapter. Then you give the reader an impression that all the story is about is fucking fucking and fucking...

    Good luck with the next chapter, I am anxious to learn what is going to break the boy's paradise :)


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  • From bloodshound on June 27, 2011
    *does my best mechanised voice. 'Your slashy scene was succsesful. Please write more and update again. thankyou'.
    seriously though, Harry's gonna end up knocked up, I betcha. Not sure how Draco will handle that, but since this is Snarry, probably badly...
    Going to be interesting to see how Sev slots into the mikx.
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  • From yaoilover08 on June 22, 2011
    awesome story i can't wait to read more! sorry but can i ask you a question? i'am new here and i don't know how or if this site does it but how will i know if the story is updated? do you send it to the people's emails or is there a thing you can do to like the story or something? anyway i loved it and i can't wait for sunday!!
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  • From bloodshound on June 22, 2011
    yeah, I'm betting that potion did more than just give him aa belly cramp, huh.
    Looking forwaard to the next chapie.
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  • From Orkchild on June 22, 2011
    Let me guess the potion was to make the drinker fetted not a ferret. (male fertility potion)
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  • From fatladysinging on June 20, 2011
    I like what you've written so far. Your style is clear and correct. Are the Gryffindors, Harry's friends in particular, going to have a role in this story? I'm really interested to see where you go with everything!
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  • From hawkswench on June 20, 2011
    I think your story is going well, I do wish I had waited for it to have a few more chapters before I had started to read it. I am one of those that whimper at the end of chapter because they have to wait for the next one when they want to keep on reading.
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  • From curious123 on June 19, 2011
    good fic!
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  • From on June 13, 2011
    I find myself intrigued by the summary. The first chapter was uite ok, too; though, I'd like it to be longer. I wish you good luck with this story and hope you will update soon. I cannot really say much as I have to base what I say on sth, and one chapter is not enough.

    Good luck!
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  • From on June 12, 2011
    i like it. cant wait to read more.
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  • From bloodshound on June 12, 2011
    so is this a repost? not that i care since I haven't read the origial :P
    At any rate, i hope Harry is Draco's only atm or he's going to be heart broken. Can't wait to see where the potions accident comes into things. ^^
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