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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From bittsweetmis on September 08, 2011
    Oh God, this was a really good chapter, but really awful to read for me emotionally because of all the angst. So many negative emotions! At least Fenrir is beginning to see the light. Hopefully he'll be smart and will re-unite the babies with Harry before the damage becomes irreparable as ultimately the twins will also be punished by Fenrir's action. I'm also curious about when the truth about Remus'deth will come out, but we'll just have to wait and see.
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  • From mrequecky on September 08, 2011
    Oh oh, this sounds really bad... And you would think, that after Fenrir got so much more connected to nature during his lonesome trips that he would feel what was right from the beginning.. stubborn Fenrir :(
    Loved the chaps!
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  • From Samibear on September 08, 2011
    I'm glad u posted this cuz I have to admit I was one of the desperate people who were dying for a new post. I'm so glad that fenir is starting to see whats going on. Although I hope harry won't forgive so easily, I know I couldn't trust my alpha if he took away my pulse. Lol anyway this story rocks and I can't wait for the next post : )
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  • From ravenwinter on September 03, 2011
    I love the little but important things you added to the story, it was worth waiting for, but there seems to be more spelling/grammer errors now (or maybe it's just something I didn't notice the first read through). Who cares, I still love the story and can't wait for more.
    I'm a mother of 7 and have aided in the delivery of 2 others, if you have questions I would be happy to help answer when/where I can (can't help with c-sec), karasufuyu@yahoo.com is where you can reach me. PLEASE update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2011
    OMG!!!!! I won't survive this suspense!! Marvelous job
    On this chapter, but great balls of fury I think you just gave me indigestion
    From the frustration.
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  • From bloodshound on August 30, 2011
    oh, no. you IDIOT Fen. This is going to come back to bite him, hard. I hope Harry still has his link with the cubs.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on August 30, 2011
    I can't believe that Fenrir doesn't understand that by doing this he is also punishing his own innocent cubs. Because with how strong the link is between them and their 'mother', it is obvious that the cubs will also suffer greatly from being separated from Harry. I hope Fenrir realises his mistake before it's too late, and yes, I hope that their Goddess will punish them for their screwed idea of 'justice' and punishment without getting the whole story first...
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  • From inkiepinkie on August 27, 2011
    Oh dear sweet god tell me you will update this!!!! I MUST know what happens next!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2011
    poor harry
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  • From vanessaclarke on August 24, 2011
    Dude, this is intense...
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  • From ANON - Shadow Summers on August 23, 2011
    poor harry! that was soo cruel! i actually cried! I hope Fenrir will come to his senses and let Harry hold his twins. so sad.. *sobs*
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  • From ANON - Bob on August 23, 2011
    OH WOW i think this is one fic i will never forget, hope to read more soon, and i hope harry gets the little ones back or that they give fenrir hell untill they get back to their daddy.
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  • From ANON - tacita on August 23, 2011
    Nooooooo! Don't stop posting! Please! And at such moment, too - you are positively evil! The fic is better than I thought it would be - you are going at a right pace and keep it realistic (no excessive cruelty or brutality). And your style improves little by little with every chapter :) Don't keep us waiting long for the next chapter. It's just cruel, it is! ; )
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  • From ANON - Helen on August 23, 2011
    As much as I love this story I hate what Harry is going through. I can't wait for them to find out the truth and feel guilty.
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  • From helga1967 on August 23, 2011
    Beautiful. So intense and heart cried.
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