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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From ravenwinter on August 23, 2011
    P.S. Just so you know. When Fenrir wasn't around but worried for Harry I had foolishly thought for just a moment that he had been leaving during the day to look for the truth about what happened to Remus. Stupid men, I hope Fenrir pays, I hope they ALL pay and in a BIG way. MAKE THEM SUFFER!!!!!!
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  • From ravenwinter on August 22, 2011
    I understand wanting to fix and touch up, really I do, but PLEASE don't make us wait for the next chapter. A week is to long to wait as is but to extend it...
    I love this story and look forward to each and every update, I just don't think I can wait to find out what happens, my mind is spinning with thoughts of everything that can and will go wrong and bad. You know what they say about screwing with a mother and her young...! I look forward still to re-reading your fic but my hope is that you will give up life (and sleep) as you know it to do what you must and get the next chap out. Thank you*.*
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  • From KaylaAnn on August 22, 2011
    omg omg omg omg... please update soon, that was so sad... I am literally in tears :(
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  • From ANON - Rose on August 22, 2011
    OMG...and it stops there?!!!! Poor Harry, all that pain and no babies to cuddle afterwards?! Bad Alpha! I hope that the babies cry all night don't stop till they see their mommy, and yeah! Rawr! Anywho, thank you for writing a story that is just so engrossing it kept me in my bubble bath with my glass of wine for longer than i'd planned! lol... thanks for the good read! I will be impatiently awaiting more!

    Love, and Cookies,

    Rose
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  • From bloodshound on August 22, 2011
    well good. He'll deserve whatever he gets for not bothering to find out the truth. I feel sorry for the rest of the pack though. I bet harry's cubs are going to be unmanageable and harry will likely go into depression.
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  • From ANON - JtheChosen1 on August 22, 2011
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't leave us with THIS!!!!! Such a cliffhanger! Gah!!!! Please comeback ASAP and write out the pack's punishment, especially Fenrir's. I feel terrible for Harry, and even bad for the children because they'll never know a mother like Harry. Only the Healer and the apprentice should be spared from any punishment the wild/Harry deals out! Again come back soon, I can't wait for more!
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  • From Dreamer27 on August 22, 2011
    This is excellent, much better than what I could have done. I can't wait for what happens next and for what their punishment is going to be. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Audrei on August 22, 2011
    The chapter it's so sad. fenrir so idiot and blind. I hope Harry does not try something stupid like kill himself.
    Your story is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From xxjadedxnowxx on August 22, 2011
    I love this story, the plot is so refreshing and I look forward to updates!!!!
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  • From ANON - Myniephoenix on August 22, 2011
    I look for updates on this story every day just to be sure I dong miss it please dont keep us waiting long.
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  • From ANON - Helen on August 22, 2011
    I love this story so much, I'm so glad that you decided to carry it on. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - JtheChosen1 on August 19, 2011
    Another great chapter here! It's going to be terrible when Harry has his babies taken away, I expect his magic will lash out in the forest. And even worse, when Fenrir and the pack learn of their mistake, things will only get worse. Keep up the great job!
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  • From mrequecky on August 17, 2011
    Oh yay, loooved this update, and yes, the story flows well :D
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  • From wynja on August 16, 2011
    Hi! Just an edit note: sometimes you refer to the healer, Maya as "he" and sometimes "she". NIce story, though... dark with fluff potential! ;)
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  • From ravenwinter on August 16, 2011
    You wrote in past chapters that Remus, James, and Sirius were pack mates, Harry being James' son makes him pack cub, so the punishment is fitting in Fenrir's eyes. As for Voldies idea of Harry killed Remus it could be as simple as Voldie telling Harry to do something and Harry not doing it, the DE's kill Remus as punishment and Harry feels responsable, seems like a Harry thing to do.
    I am 'LOVING' your story, thank you so much for writing it, I hope you write MORE and update SOON! I just can't wait to find out what the truth is in all this and see everyone's reactions when it all comes out in the open.
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