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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From ANON - PandaGaara on August 15, 2011
    I LOVE this story, but I also feel my stomach sink whenever I see that it has been updated. The story line and plot pulls me in, but just knowing the pure angst and sadness Harry is going to feel makes my stomach twist (in a good way though). Though I can't wait for the truth to be out. Will Harry be unstable after all the neglect he's been dealt? Will he reject his cub(s)? And I find myself how Lemmy will feel once the truth comes out. No doubt Harry's babies will feel more connected with him than their biological mother.

    Ohh I just can't wait. I hope you update quickly so I we all can find out!! *bounces around happily*
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  • From bittsweetmis on August 15, 2011
    I'm seriously torn about this story, you have no idea. I read Dreamer27's version and found that I was emotionally responding to the storyline, but nowhere near the level that I am to this story. It's gotten to the point that whenever I see that this story has been updated, I get a giant pit of dread in my stomach but I end up reading anyway, because I am hooked to it despite the fact that I need to read a disturbingly large amount of fluff to feel better from all the angst. Your writing is so powerful and emotionally engaging, but because of Dreamer27's story I know that this fic is going to get a lot worse. However I can't tell whether this is going to head in the direction that A mate to two wolves was and whether things are going to get better for Harry eventually. I know that Harry will be permanently changed by his isolation from the pack and probably his kids for the worse, but I believe that if Harry's situation doesn't improve and he isn't allowed to heal mentally or emotionally etc. then Punishment will become a true tragedy. I don't think the term angst can truly cover the pain that Harry will be going through. I can only hope that things get better given time,
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  • From ANON - MoonWhistler on August 15, 2011
    Your story is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    I wonder how damaged-mentally would Harry (and Harry's wolf) be by the time the truth comes out? Would it ever? Being separated from the pack, and also eventually the babies, would be a major factor.
    Would the bond between daddy-wolf and babies be too strong to separate the pups from Harry?
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  • From bloodshound on August 15, 2011
    poor Harry. If they take his cubs he may go mad.
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  • From Cinder1013 on August 10, 2011
    I love, love, love this story. What happened to Harry? What were they doing to him? Your phrasing implies that he was sexually assaulted. Or were they just taking out their anger physically? And what really happened to Remus?
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  • From mrequecky on August 10, 2011
    You're absolutely right, no problem with longer chaps :D Loved this chapter a lot and loved the flashback as well!
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  • From ANON - Fenixkitten on August 09, 2011
    Loved Dreamer27 version and I love yours too! Please keep it up. I totally agree with reviewer Varjo, Harry totally needs to go slightly insane when his cubs are forcibly taken away from him. If Remus is truly dead I hope it's his "spirit" that is trying to protect Harry when things go wrong. Maybe the cubs won't settle for anyone,but Harry maybe an empathetic bond?
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  • From Zirconium on August 09, 2011
    Poor Harry. He really doesn't seem to be getting the whole 'not going to get to keep the babies' bit right at the moment.

    I rather like the fact that the success of the hunts seems to be linked somehow with how caring Fenrir has acted towards Harry. I can't help wondering if the pack will notice it at all (especially with their intended actions for just after the birth).

    Fenrir seems to be being a little obtuse about Harry's supposed crime. He is completely ignoring the fact that Harry already said that it was a mistake of some kind, not to mention that fact that he told Harry (violently) not to even so much as mention Remus, combine that with not one wolf actually bothering to interrogate Harry, and yet he holds the lack of explanation about Remus's death as being signs of Harry not caring. I forsee much more angstiness and misunderstandings from those conclusions.
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  • From bloodshound on August 08, 2011
    So, Harry iis being excessively guilty again? His actions may have got Remi killed but he didn't do it? i have a feeling if they try and take Harry's cubs, there is going to be hell to pay.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on August 08, 2011
    Awesome work here! Loved the long chapter, lots happened! And I am excited for when Harry's children are born! Cuz the drama will be epic when Fenrir tries to take them away and maybe he'll realize Harry is innocent. Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on August 03, 2011
    Loved the updates, and also, I like that you are introducing the other wolves of the pack :D
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  • From ravenwinter on August 01, 2011
    I have such a HARD time reviewing here but I'm going to try AGIAN and hope it goes through. I think the story is wonderful you've done a fantastic job with it so far. Of course it's sad as well as a range of other emotions that will go with what the entire pack is going through. I have to wonder what happened with Remus and Harry and what hand Voldie played in it, Harry wouldn't just haul off and kill Remus, and it wouldn't matter the reason Harry would feel guilt and responceable no matter. I'm always looking forward to your updates and am eager for MORE.
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  • From bloodshound on August 01, 2011
    seems fen is only hurting himselfv and his pack doing this. Wonder how long it'll take him to realise tyhat. Hopefully no as long as the dom pair in the other story. Is it Harry causing their trouble and if so, how? Will we get another chappie from harry's pov?
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  • From Aalto on July 20, 2011
    I expect Harry to be at least slightly insane from the packs treatment of him when the truth comes out. If not completely insane from loosing contact with his cub(s). I hope Fenrir will have to work damn hard to bring him back.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2011
    Just thought I'd let you know I'm really enjoying this story!
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