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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From JtheChosen1 on July 15, 2011
    Great work here! As much as you build up the angst, it isn't over the top, just a nice slow crescendo. After the crest of angst through, the downfall is going to be pretty bad - Fenrir and the rest of the pack are going to tear themselves a part when they learn of Harry's innocence. Can't wait for that part haha!
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  • From PandaGaara on July 15, 2011
    I love this story. I read the other authors story but i guess they stopped updating it. Though I love the angst I just hope you don't do what some authors do and have nothing but angst for 20 chapters before giving Harry a tiny break and then throwing him back into another 20 chapters of angst.

    Hope you get plenty of inspiration and I can't wait to see how it is revealed to everyone the true situation with Remus and Harry. I also wonder if Harry is going to reject his own cub(s) after not being able to be with them like some mother animals do. Ha I'd like to see Fenrir try to fix that!!
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  • From Cinder1013 on July 15, 2011
    Poor Harry. The angst is wonderful. After all, the more you up the angst factor, the better the comfort is at the end.
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  • From ANON - MoonWhistler on July 15, 2011
    Would Harry be allowed to know his cubs -;and have them back;- when/if the truth is ever discovered? Would he be able to connect with them? Or with the first babies taken, would he somehow lose that vital first connection?
    How long does werewolf pregnancies (male and female) last for?
    Is Remus really dead? (Sorry, only hoping that Remus would suddenly show up; that he survived.) If he is really dead, who killed him; the Dumbledore/Order or Voldemort/Death Eaters?
    What would happened if Fenrir took and marked another mate, but when/if the truth comes out, would he later deeply regret it; would that new mate tolerate Fenrir mating with Harry?
    Does wolves' mate for life? And would Fenrir have to allow the other doms a chance at taking Harry as their mate?

    There are so many questions running through my head, SO SORRY!
    But I love your story, it's great!!!
    I'm a sucker for sad stories with hopefully happy endings!!!

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  • From bloodshound on July 15, 2011
    i haven't reviewed for a bit cause i wanted to give the story a chance to develop some. Harry has always been a bit self sacrificing but i wonder what drove him to these extremes. Can't wait to find out the back story.
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  • From Dreamer27 on July 14, 2011
    This story is excellent and I give you permission to use some of my story.

    I have complete writers block with my story, so it's great that you've taken an interest and come up with this story.

    It's also great that I could help to inspire someone else.

    I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next, so please update soon.
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  • From mrequecky on July 10, 2011
    Oh wow, loooved this chapter as well :D
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  • From on July 07, 2011
    It was a nice chapter, don't stress :) Though there was very little action, the rext was pleasant to read. I hope the situation with Remus will clear up soon. I beg you, don't make it more cruel than absolutely necessary; it would spoil the whole story. There is a fic around here, very similar to yours (the same plot idea) and it's alwfuly violent :/

    So far, the story is good. It has a potential, now it is up to you how you will proceed, and I understand that, but be cautious, don't overdo it.

    Best regards and a lot of ideas!

    -tacita

    PS. I would so much like to write myself; however, I lack the patience and stubborness to slowly introduce the plot and not rush into things. All the more I admire you for your work :) Be well!
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  • From mrequecky on July 01, 2011
    Oh wow, loooved! So, Harry actually killed Remus? Or is it this typical Harry self-blaming thing, where he was not the one to actually commit the crime? Like with Sirius?
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  • From Cinder1013 on June 30, 2011
    Please don't ever apologize for angst. This is great!
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  • From bittsweetmis on June 30, 2011
    I hope that Harry isn't treated as harshly as in A Mate to two Wolves. Your version of Fenrir seems a lot less cruel, so I'm hoping that he eventually sees Harry for Harry and an actual mate rather than just Breeding fodder. Am also hoping that there is no child rejection. The post-natal depression that the other Harry went through made me really sad, so I'm holding out for a more sensitive Fenrir, and a stronger Harry with a happier outcome
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 30, 2011
    I know you have to build up the plot of the story - but I cannot wait until Fenrir and the pack learn of Harry's innocence after they use/abuse him for a first round of pups. Call me an angst-leech, I don't care! Great job here!
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  • From Cinder1013 on June 23, 2011
    I'm so glad you've picked up this story. The original was always one of my favorites. I love what you've done with it so far.
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  • From NAnderson on June 23, 2011
    Oh wow. What a powerful start! I can see so many wonderful things coming in this story :) I hope to read more soon.
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  • From wynja on June 23, 2011
    Love it, love the darkness of it!
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