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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From ANON - Lovelydoe on May 03, 2012
    Please continue this!!!!!! I'm anxious to know what's next! Harry and his pups are adorable!
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  • From Jan on May 03, 2012
    I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I can't wait for chapter 21 to be updated ^_^

    Can't wait to see all the wolves grovelling at Harry's feet when they find out that he never hurt Remus ^_^ {hehehehehe)


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  • From ANON - Najima on April 28, 2012
    Hi, I'm a new reader! or maybe I should say a new rewiewer XD last year I read the original story and I was pretty sad that it's was unfished, but you are doing a really nice job with this story! I also noted that the way in which you are "writing" has improved a lot from the start of the fanfiction. I love your original characters! I hope you'll update soon!
    Najima

    ps: sorry for my bad english, but I'm italian v.v
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  • From ANON - Lientjuhh on April 04, 2012
    I am glad you still continue this story.. I like this story.. It's different, but beautiful written.. I like it.. DO you think you can finish the story before tomorrow, because I want to know how it ends.. LOL:D Goodluck writing the next one.. :)
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  • From ANON - Heatie on March 22, 2012
    Another nice chapter, I like this story. I hope that things will be better for poor Harry soon...
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  • From ANON - Karas-chan on March 22, 2012
    Yay so happy for another chapter! Try not to listen to all the nay sayers out there. I thought your Dark Lord was spot on! I only hope that Harry snaps out of his madness soon. I mean I know that he's pretty messed up, but I think I'd like to see him and Namiell face off in the future. And plus I am missing Harry/Fenny lovey dovey time ;;
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  • From darkestmagic on March 21, 2012
    I just finished reading all the chapters and your alternate.Great job lve the story. I was very surprised at how much detail you put into it. I was hoping to find out what hapened to Luna in your story. Melium reminds me of her. Can't wait for morw updates.
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  • From magentah on March 21, 2012
    Don't let the jerks get you down! Negative feedback sucks, but helps you grow--even if it's only in how you take it. Truly though, this story is great and I hope you are proud of yourself! I know it's going to take more time, but I am ever eager for Harry to come back to himself so that he and Fenrir can start to do things right. ;D Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Raven on March 21, 2012
    Ive read your story since the beginning and I just want to congradualte you on keeping up with this amazing story. Writers block is a fickle thing. I like where this story is going. I love the pairing. I like how Harry's timid personality counteracts with Fenrirs brute self. They are perfect and I hope they settle things with aurel and nox. Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Makoo on March 20, 2012
    Hello! Your story is simply amazing! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From NAnderson on March 20, 2012
    Well I enjoyed that update :) well written! And I also want to address the author note you put on this latest chapter. I didn't say much about it because I didn't really need to be said. But I guess it really must. I have to completely agree with your rendering of him! I mean how else would a man who has basically traded his own life to try to make the world how he feel will be best for everyone, and finally gets his goal and finds out his number 1 enemy is someone he can relate to, is going to act? Wonderful rendering ^.^ I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From bloodshound on March 20, 2012
    so, har is something like a an elemental? don't worry about the story taking off by itself. the good ones often do that. just flow with it and see where it takes you. poor har. it's going to be some time before he trusts again huh.
    i wonder what voldi will do when he runs out of muggles, try and expand his territory?
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  • From ANON - W on March 20, 2012
    Don't let the negative reviews get you down. Use hem as constructive criticism or brush them off.

    I know it it easier said than done, but you are a great storyteller and you are passionate about what you are doing.

    I check for updates to your stories daily :D
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  • From hellangelhellina on March 04, 2012
    I really in joy the story though my heart aches for harry. I can not wait to see how they use their new found knowledge.
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  • From ANON - Heatie on February 27, 2012
    Interesting story! I look forward to next chapters...
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