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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From NAnderson on February 15, 2012
    Wow talk about a stunning update. That was the most well written chapter so far I think. I LOVED how you portrayed Voldemort. Near crazy, near sane, and nothing straight. I'm already looking forward to more :)
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  • From ANON - Karas-chan on February 15, 2012
    I love how you made Voldemort all loopy, its pretty hilarious! I hope that Harry goes back to being Harry soon, I'd like to see him be a strong Beta that gives Fen a run for his money, eventually! Keep up the good work!
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  • From TibbytheWitchy on February 14, 2012
    OHMYGOODNESS! Voldemort acting like a total two year old with Millie as his Mommy! AWWWWWWWWWWW
    Def. My favorite chapter now, and just AWWW and AWWW and OMG WTF didn't I think of that first? *pouts*
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  • From ANON - SinfulMind on February 14, 2012
    I really like this story and I usually await each new chapter with impatience, but you did a very crappy job on Voldemort in this last chapter; for a while there I had an impression that I read another cheap and juvenile fic - it is completely not what I expected from you, and I am sorry to admit, but I feel totally dissapointed. Very un-Voldemort Voldemort, horrible and painful to read the dialogue.

    Hope you'll get back on track soon :)
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  • From ANON - makoslits on February 14, 2012
    Great story!! I love Harry and his pups. The're so adorable. Please update soon :)
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  • From Kalendral9 on February 05, 2012
    Can;t wait for more ^_^ K
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  • From NAnderson on February 03, 2012
    Wow :( poor harry, he had enough reasons to snap even before he was thrown to the wolves. Dammit now I want to see him getting snuggles from his alpha! Ah I hope to see more soon :)
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  • From iheart801 on February 03, 2012
    Just wanted to let you know that chapter 3 is chapter 2 repeated. I liked chaps 1 and 2, but I will wait to read anymore till chapter 3 is no longer showing as the same as chap 2.
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  • From ANON - Chipmunk-on-Helium on February 02, 2012
    Thank you for writing this story! I read A Mate To Two Werewolves a long time ago and was sad the author never finished. I'm glad you picked it up and am really enjoying the changes you made to the story. I also wanted to let you know I think AFF messed up your formating of some of the chapters because when I got to them the chapter had been smashed together like one paragraph. I makes reading this story very difficult at times :/ other than that I just want to tell you that you are doing an amazing job with this and to please update the next chapter soon :)
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  • From Sheireen on February 02, 2012
    Yeah! An update! :)

    How mean of you to let us wait so long. But the chapter was great so you made it all better! :D
    And I don't mind that you have shortened it. To tell the truth the name Aurel fits a werewolf cub much better than Aurelius. It sounds more wilder. ;)
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  • From ANON - avid_reader on February 02, 2012
    can you please re-upload ch 16 and 17? they are still one big block of text and it hurts my eyes to read like that. thanks
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  • From ANON - CJMasters on February 02, 2012
    Just wanted to drop you a line about two things. One is good and the other is a nuisance. I very much enjoyed the way the story has been progressing. The bits of backstory from Harry, while horrifying, are fascinating. The nuisance is that your formatting has been lost on several chapters. When I view them there are no paragraph breaks. This error is repeated in the first chapter of The Right Choice and as of right now is preventing me from reading it. It is too difficult. Unfortunately this formatting issue greatly detracts from your writing and makes it nearly impossible to read. I hope you can fix it.
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  • From bloodshound on February 01, 2012
    well, we all know bad stuff had happened... i just hope ron got a nice, messy, painful death.
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  • From ANON - breath_of_fire on February 01, 2012
    can you please fix the formatting of ch 15 and 16? they are just big blocks of text and therefrom unreadable
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  • From ANON - Iza on January 27, 2012
    It's such a shame that there is so few stories with this pairing. It has so much potential. That's why your story is so wonderful, seeing as it's not only HP/FG, but also well written and interesting. I was overjoyed when I found it.
    The only thing that I don't like is that male subs are breast feeding and their breasts are bigger. I like mpreg but I usually draw a line at things like that. But it's of course my personal opinion and I guess that it shows the quality of your story that I'm able to ignore my usual squick and still enjoy reading it.
    I'm waiting impatiently for next updates. :)
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