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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From bloodshound on January 05, 2012
    gah! that sucks... and it does make it hella hard to read. will fen swallow his pride and go to the wizards? Even if he did, he'd have to get a hold of someone like snape whose been in har's head to get a clue.
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  • From ANON - Lady Date on January 05, 2012
    Getting a little anxiousv for the truth now... also the it was hard to read because the text was all one big block.
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  • From PandaGaara on January 05, 2012
    Still love it but I'm a bit irritated its taking soooo long for the truth to be revealed.
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  • From ANON - cookies_B on December 19, 2011
    Congrats on winning!
    I'm so happy you updated!What a great chapter!! It's so exciting to see what will happen next! When will the pack learn about Harry? What really did happen to Remus? XD Please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - RikaGray on December 16, 2011
    Yaaaay! You're back!=D Congrats on winning btw!!! Awesome chapter, hun!I adore the fact that Harry finally has his babies back now^-^ Oh, and I dunno why, but I love it when Harry freaks out. That scene got me all excited. And when Fenrir's eyes started to water cuz he couldn't help got to me a bit,really you almost got a sniffle outta me. Lol anywho good luck on the next chapter,darlin'!
    -R.G.W
    P.S Possible baby names: Altair,Aidan,Bhaltair,Caine,Ceres,Clove,Dante,Deka and Makan.^-^ Hope you find some good names from your reviewers. Lol you're probably going to be flooded with suggestions,doll.XD
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  • From ANON - whompty on December 12, 2011
    Is Harry pregnant again?!!!!!!!!

    Great to you have you back by the way :] So glad that you motivated me to finally review a story on AFF.
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Labyrinth Mind on December 11, 2011
    Hello!

    I just wanted to say congratulations on wining the NaNoWriMo! I am glad to have you back!

    Labyrinth Mind

    P.s. I am on FF.net under this name if you want to contact me!
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  • From TibbytheWitchy on December 11, 2011
    My Names: Remus (for obvious reasons) and Romulus (because if you have one why not the other). Sebastian and Kylar, Gabriel and Mikhail, Gregori and Lusan, or my favorites - Arimas and Desidrew :)

    Congrats on winning Nano! I was a few thousand short unfortunately :/
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  • From Sheireen on December 10, 2011
    It's so good to have you finally back!
    And congratulation for winnig the NANOWRIMO.

    I only have a name for the twin with the fair hair but maybe you like it. It's Aurel, short for Aurelius, which means 'the golden one'.
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  • From Cinder1013 on December 10, 2011
    Yay! Update!

    Congrats on winning Nano! That's a huge accomplishment.

    Hmm, names for the twins ... how about Tokala and Nox? Yeah, I'm shamelessly borrowing from a story I wrote years ago, but I always liked those names.
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  • From ANON - K-chan on December 09, 2011
    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on December 09, 2011
    Excellent work! So glad you updated, and I'm glad you wrote an epic piece as well for November. Can't wait for the next chapter as Fenrir and the pack spiral even worse out of control
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  • From ANON - Marta on December 09, 2011
    Yey, new chapter :)Good to see you back.
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  • From xxjadedxnowxx on December 09, 2011
    I am so glad that this story is back! I can't say enough good things about your writing, and the progression of this story!!!
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  • From bloodshound on December 09, 2011
    ... well, that went well. It's like har has been nearly catatonic for the duration... As for baby names, perhaps after something to do with their looks or the month they were born in. there are plenty of attribute names out there, like the ones that mean fair or dark haired and so on.
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