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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From ANON - Ann on December 09, 2011
    How about Siri and Remy as names for the twins (well at least if Harry gets any say in it at least) with Jamie as a possible third option.

    Maybe for next year's NaNo, if you're posting a story then, just suggest that a good way to pass that month long wait for your return would be to join in with NaNo too. The time passes quickly then (far too quickly).



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  • From Samibear on December 09, 2011
    Lol just the other day I was thinking about this story, I'm glad ur back. I loved the interaction with harry and his babies. Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - Sivy on December 06, 2011
    Any news on updates? been almost a month! Either way, its a nice re-make of the original. Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on December 06, 2011
    Really really love this fic! It made me cry so many times! The love and angst are portrayed perfectly! Keep up the great work.
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  • From petralucie on November 05, 2011
    Good story! I look forward to next chapters, I hope that poor Harry will find some happiness finally...
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  • From ANON - Justice. on November 02, 2011
    Is It possible to update at all faster? It's an amazing story, and I hate having to wait til the next chapter comes:(. Please?!?!?!!????
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  • From ANON - Althydia on October 30, 2011
    It's not only Fenrir I want to see punished - it's the whole pack! But most of all I want to finally know the truth about Remus's death...
    That chapter was a sweet moment, and I'm glad that Fenrir is caring for his mate (at last!), but now I'd also like Harry to come out of his traumatised state enough to bond with his babies... They need him!
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  • From ANON - Tempest on October 30, 2011
    After a drought filled night of insomnia I was ecstatic to stumble on to this story...okay not stumble i specifically started looking for some fenrir/harry goodness but still this story oh this story it tugs at my heart when will fenrir finally find out the truth about what harry meant? gods i was so aggravated when i found out you hadn't written that far yet. while i admit i mean aggravated in a good way i still feel the urge to threaten to kidnap you and feed you coffee and chocolate chip cookies until your done . will the light/rebels be punished? did voldemort purposely mislead the pack?! when harry recovers and takes his rightful place as head sub will he finally crush namille?! (she slightly aggravates me...okay not slightly she irks me loads and loads) and tempur(sp) will she accept Harry after she finds out the truth ... i have such a wee bit of a soft spot for her since we have similar names XD As for the rest of the subs good on them for excepting harry!! urgh!! i'm getting the shivers just thinking about an update this story will not leave my mind i just know it!! GREAT JOB lovely i cant wait to see what you post next... i hope its the pack finding out they've been stupid jerks >>humph like Harry would ever kill remmy!! oh and please knock the other doms down a few pegs as well *rolls eyes* they annoyed me as well. I mean they didnt even have a real trial no questions were asked!! talk about judgmental anyways i think i'm beginning to ramble so i'll say once more i cant wwait to see an update frome you and brilliant job so far even with all your evil cliffys!! keep up the good work xoxo Tempy ps could you drop me a line on how to figure out when your story updates i dont usually use aff so i have no idea how to figure out when you would have updated again except to stalk the story x.x
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  • From Cinder1013 on October 27, 2011
    Yay! Update! Finally! Those two are getting together and Fenrir is getting some sense. About time.
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  • From PandaGaara on October 27, 2011
    I'm not gonna lie it kinda sucks that Harry so quickly made love to Fenrir again. Though I'm assuming Harry only really let it happen because he wasn't totally himself and his wolf was more in control and craving the warmth and love. Because truly I think in his right mind Harry would reject Fenrir quite a bit because of the abuse.

    And who's to say he'd take his pups back? Would they smell too much like Lemmy and not him and not accept them? Oh I just can't wait for the truth to come out!! Hurry the suspense is KILLING ME! *dies*
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  • From JtheChosen1 on October 26, 2011
    Oh we know Fenrir will be punished! Once he and the pack learn of Harry's innocence will he truly realize what they have done >:) Maybe even Harry will awaken completely and realize how cruelly he was treated too! Bwuhahaha!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 26, 2011
    I thougth that is was a good, chapter. Its nice to see when I check for a update, it one. Keep up the good work,love the story. I can't wait to see what happens with Harry and his pups.
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  • From helga1967 on October 26, 2011
    So charming sex and love.
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  • From bloodshound on October 25, 2011
    I;m just glad he;s finally giving Har what he needs. Har's been isolated and pretty much disconnected from the moment he was turned. Now, he might actually be coming back and he has parenthood and his new instincts to deal with besides. No wonder he's such a mess.
    At any rate, I'm not hanging for fen to be punished though actions do bring consequences and he nearly lost his mate over this. I just wanted him to get his head out of his arse and try asking Har for his history rather just assuming. Rumors are rarely right and never accurate.
    with the up dates, take your time and don;t stress yourself over it. I'd rather see a good chappie that took a bit longer than a rushed one that feels rushed (i saw a typo or two in this one) We appreciate your efforts either way but you should be enjoying it too, neh? You're the writer after all.
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  • From ANON - Betty on October 25, 2011
    Ohh poor harry!! Wheres his babies?!! Please update ASAP im dying here
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