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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From Nikte on October 25, 2011
    LOVE YOUR STORY!!! LOVE YOUR STORY!!! LOVE YOUR STORY!!! Is it clear? lol. Can
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  • From ANON - Marta on October 24, 2011
    I really like your story. It's one of the best HP/FG fanfics I've ever read. I can understand that you may not have so much time as to publish a new chapter once a week, but I really hope you are not abadonding this story. Best wishes :)
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  • From ANON - Bluumberry on October 17, 2011
    First off I have to commend you on the beautiful story you're writing. I've been in tears since the beginning basically and am anxious to see it continue. Only thing that you could improve on is correcting your chapters on mispelling Fenrir as Fenir constantly.

    But I have to bring up my grievance of you participating in nanowrimo. I see it as a waste of time and effort so to see it cut off into this and so many other brilliant stories makes me hate the thing even more. In fact just reading that in the AN made my mood in reading drop to where it wasn't as enjoyable anymore. I know I'm only a reviewer but I'm still gonna speak my mind, even if it isn't worth crap.
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  • From Recordkeeper on October 13, 2011
    I totally love this story. I laughed and cried. mostly cried but i like to over think everything, you have a few small errors but nothing terrible. I hope we learn how remus died soon. and i hope the pack feels awful for treating harry that way. Please update when you can. I cant wait to read more!!

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  • From bloodshound on October 10, 2011
    interesting... is nature reflecting Har's state or vice versa? What'd Har do to get beaten bloody i wonder... weird thing to do if they want him to beat Voldi.
    I spotted a typo or two.
    Anyway, good luck with your writing comp and we'll look forward to further updates when you have time. ^^
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  • From llyoung on October 03, 2011
    I really enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the update.
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  • From PandaGaara on October 03, 2011
    Aaah! When will they find out what really happened to Remus?! Maybe its just because I love this story so much, but it just feels so drawn out. Plus I want to see Namile put in her place and have to apologize as she's way out of control.
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  • From bloodshound on October 03, 2011
    finally, they're getting wise. That was a very mature decision on Fen's part I think. Now, all they need is for Har to wake up so they can get some proper back story from him... and possibly names for his cubs? >>
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  • From mrequecky on September 28, 2011
    yay, loved the new chapter :D
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  • From Cinder1013 on September 28, 2011
    Oh, I hope he figures it out. Harry deserves some cuddles and love.

    Great update!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 26, 2011
    This is a great story! Hoping that Evans' sharing of his story will help Fenrir into doing the right thing!
    Keep going!
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  • From bloodshound on September 26, 2011
    Dah, you fool, go find out the freakin back story! seriously, alphas! tch.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on September 26, 2011
    Excellent chapter here! Can't wait until the truth about Harry comes out, Fenrir will suffer even more! Bwuhahahahahaha!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on September 24, 2011
    WOW!! This story is SOOOOO GOOD. I am so sad to see this happen to Harry and the pack, I want to cry. This story is amazing. I love it. I can't wait of a update. I will be checking back everyday. It is so good, I wish I could find more Fenrir storys.Keep it coming PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - history on September 23, 2011
    Your story is amazing please keep writing. It is the best story I have read so far.

    Thank so much!!!!!!!!!
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