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Reviews for Punishment

By : Holly
  • From inkiepinkie on September 18, 2011
    I'm always looking forward to an update to this story. I've had so many stories that become abandoned due to personal issues. I really hope that that is not the case with this one! I look forward to an update as soon as you're able!!
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  • From mrequecky on September 15, 2011
    Oh yay! Good luck and lots of fun on your weekend away :D
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  • From ANON - calicat on September 14, 2011
    Hey, I don't normally review on this site cause I have to log in, but since I don't for you...here I go.
    I love the story, it has just enough angst and tension and plot and everything. I love what you are doing. So take your time, but pls don't forget us fans, cause I am always excited to see a new chapter.
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  • From digiron91 on September 13, 2011
    Take your time. Most people would probably prefer the better quality chapter compared to a quickly made chapter that would probably need to be reread after it was reposted. Also, keep up the good work. I read the "original" story and have to say I like a lot of the changes you made. I especially like how you made it so Fenrir's wolf seems to be like "I love my mate" while Fenrir himself is trying to be a "good" Alpha and punish the "murderer". Wow I used a lot of quotation marks didn't I? Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From SinfulMind on September 13, 2011
    Take all the time you need :) I wish you a happy anniversary!
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  • From ANON - Myniephoenix on September 13, 2011
    We all understand. This story is one I am following with great attention. I look forward to an amazing update as soon as you get the chance. Have a lovely weekend.
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  • From Cinder1013 on September 12, 2011
    I think it's a great update! Poor Harry. I hope he has a happy ending.
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  • From inkiepinkie on September 09, 2011
    I am on the verge of tears with this update! I must know more! And quickly! This is turning into such a wonderful and developed story! I'm so pulled in by the way you've written it! I can feel Fenrir's conflicting emotions and his duty as Alpha! I can't wait until you update again!!
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  • From ANON - BlackAngel on September 09, 2011
    hehe, one more thing...can't wait for Fen to discover the truth and really, Namile is really getting on my nerves, but that's beside the point. I'm hoping, since I don't think Harry ever saw the body, that Remus shows up and kicks some ass and takes some names to protect his cub! This way, Fen learns his lesson, Harry gets his father figure and cubs back and then Fen and Harry can have a proper courtship and wooing living happily ever after...or something like that! lol Tata again!
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  • From ANON - BlackAngel on September 09, 2011
    A couple of things: First, I love the story and the idea behind it. I'm a sucker for angst and (hopefully) happy endings :) Now, I know this might be hard, but I'm hoping you wait to do another revision until after you have finished posting the story. It is just too crazy to go back and reread the changes you make over and over again, not that they aren't good. I do plan on rereading it each time, but it would definitely be easier on everyone I think if you just revised after finishing. Now, on to my couple quibbles. There seems to be definite disagreement early on regarding Maya being addressed as both he/him and she/her. When you do go through for a rewrite, hopefully you will clear all those up. Beyond that, they are some issues with general mistakes, whether they are typos, wrong words or whatever. Obviously these will get cleaned up with every revision you make. I speak from experience with that issue. It seems like every time I recheck my work, I'm finding another mistake I missed the last time.

    Hopefully you won't take any of this the wrong way. I am in love with Punishment and check daily for updates - just in case. You gave me an awesome 22nd b-day present (all hail Sept 8) so thank you and I can't wait for more so update soon!


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  • From bloodshound on September 08, 2011
    wow, everything is indeed coming apart at the seams. He really, REALLY needs to bond properly to Har and find out the back story before his pack completely disintegrates.
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  • From helga1967 on September 08, 2011
    Impressive! I love how ignores the need for care, physical and psychological treatment for Harry. Please make, Fenry pay dearly for not take care of his Mate
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  • From ANON - Draconia Lesoto on September 08, 2011
    So we still get the next chapter on monday right????!!! RIGHT??!!!! Goddddeessss waiting for this story is pure torture to me, i loooove the angst but i want Fen to realize that he was wrong already! I love this story, can't wait for the update!
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  • From curious123 on September 08, 2011
    i am curious about when the truth of reamus' death will come out and hp's treatment by the order.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on September 08, 2011
    Awesome work! I cannot wait for the next blow, when Fenrir realizes that Harry is innocent! That will truly strike the pack and cause more mayhem.

    You did an excellent job and I cannot wait for more!
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