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Reviews for Matters of the Heart

By : strawberryf1re
  • From SpiralBreeze on August 18, 2011
    A cliff hanger no! I have been enjoying this story from the beginning. This is a fantastic read, I love the ones where Hermione is sneaking behind her friends back. I'm assuming the wine was the Pregnancy potion and now Albus knows about their relationship, well I think he's known all along really. Ah the suspence!
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  • From Divinit on August 12, 2011
    Got pretty far into this story last night, but had to stop because I find it unrealistic.

    Sorry, it's not a story based on how the characters are, more how you want them to be.


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  • From kattniptwo on August 03, 2011
    As smart as they both are they are truly stupid..what happened with snape and hermoine was potion induced or some other outside factor.he has never done something like that to a student..and even he did not know what was up until it was done..however when they do find out what happend and who it was I hope retribution is swift and painful!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2011
    Re: Chapter 13. Ooh, this is gonna be good!
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  • From amazingenthusiasto on July 18, 2011
    This is an interesting story so far. It's so weirdly in-character for Hermione, and yet the story itself is so sad and twisted. Keep it up!
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  • From AineSnape on July 18, 2011
    Hi K Marie!

    I have read your Harry Potter's fan fic and I really love both of them. I like the way you describe and develop your stories, I think you do well ^^. Unfortunately no everybody can enjoy English-written FF because of that I ask you for permission for translating your 2 HP stories to spanish and post it in this page. Of course I would specify that the stories are yours and you have let me translate them.

    With nothing left to say I apologize to you for write all that thing in a review.
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  • From ANON - shell on July 13, 2011
    Why do I have the feeling that the initial actions of Severus was the result of a potion and a plot by the Malfoy's? Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - elh on July 02, 2011
    chap 4...his appetite was extinguished not DIStinguished lol implying it' avery posh appetie
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  • From slygriff21 on July 02, 2011
    Great new chapters! I'm loving your story and can't wait to read more! Post more soon!
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  • From winter748 on June 26, 2011
    Thank you for the new chapter. I guess Severus wanted their next time to be somewhere totally different. Can't say I blame him. Hope no one else is taking a walk in the forest. I still think it's something about that botched potion that got on them that had Severus losing control. Maybe not. Still really like how you write and am interested in where you will take the story.
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  • From slygriff21 on June 22, 2011
    Okay, how the hell did I miss this story?!?!

    I love the angle you're going with and love the flow of the story! I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From winter748 on June 22, 2011
    Wow, what a place to leave it. I don't usually say this but "update quickly". Your writing is excellent and I'm enjoying this story immensely. Could it have been her botched up potion that caused Severus to lose control of his desire/attraction?
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  • From ANON - lechaton on June 22, 2011
    I agree with the previous poster, but I am really enjoying this story nonetheless. Can't wait for your next update! Thanks so much.
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  • From ANON - cowbane on June 18, 2011
    Really good, I'm very much looking forward to the next installment. Snapes ooc-ness is a bit off-putting, but it works so far for the story. I wouldn't like to see him too much sappier than this though. Great story over all though, i cannot wait to see what happens next.
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