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Reviews for Matters of the Heart

By : strawberryf1re
  • From ANON - Alchemist on April 04, 2013
    Rape? Honestly? This is OOC for Snape. Hermione's reaction is also completely unrealistic. I cannot suspend my disbelief here.
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  • From ANON - Alchemist on April 04, 2013
    Snape was only ever referred to as the Potions Master because he was such an unlikeable teacher that his students referred to him in a more formal manner. In other words, he was just a grouchy school master. It never had anything to do with him having more specialized education than his colleagues, and certainly nothing to do with apprenticeships.
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  • From Remarkable on July 10, 2012
    OMG I just love how this has evolved, despite the wrongness of teacher/student, it is just so RIGHT with these two! Love love love it!
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  • From CanadianGinger on June 01, 2012
    Unfortunately, I only read up to chapter six before I decided to stop. This story is a little too unrealistic for me. I work with women who have been sexually abused and assaulted, and no one reacts the way Hermione did in this story. If the storyline progressed a little more slowly, I think it would be more feasible that she begins trusting Snape again, and in turn becomes attracted to him. The way you portrayed it where she is almost immediately attracted to him really irked me. Guess everyone has their pet peeves when it comes to fanfiction, and that's mine :)

    Despite the unrealistic reaction that Hermione has, I think you did a pretty decent job of keeping other people as in-character as possible. I also enjoy your writing style in general, so I'll definitely look forward to reading some of your other stories in the future.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 22, 2012
    That was a very emotion-charged chapter! Whew! I know he's upset, but if he's not willing to talk at all, I completely get her need to find answers. I know it will be difficult for him, but he needs to open up some and let her into his head, not just his heart. I hope the find some peace with each other before the rest of the world crashes in on them. Thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on April 22, 2012
    I am really enjoying this story, i hope you update again soon, i can't wait to read more
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  • From anyesha on April 22, 2012
    amazing story
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  • From Madamdragon on April 21, 2012
    Something tells me he is gonna end the relationship this time. Hope he doesn't. Good update, hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From onecelestialbeing on April 01, 2012
    Dunno if I reviewed this yet, but I love this story.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 02, 2012
    Yay! What a nice way to start the year. :-) I know they have a lot to face still, but now they will do it together. :-) Happy New Year! HG4eva
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  • From DB1 on January 02, 2012
    @25 amazing story. The malfoys sent her the wine right that was spiked with the fertility potion?? Can't wait for an update!!!
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  • From Gabby0515 on November 05, 2011
    Just thought I would say how much I'm enjoying this story so far. It's really good :)
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  • From Madamdragon on October 29, 2011
    Whoot! He popped the question. I hope she says yes. Please update again soon. This is getting torturous. Update again like now. LOL
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 29, 2011
    Wow, I am so sorry for her pain, but so happy that they have one another. And, that he stepped out on that limb. Lovely. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - MidnightKat on October 27, 2011
    I have really enjoyed your story. I am looking forward to reading more. Great job!! Kat

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