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By : TheDarkWonker
  • From ANON - lurker#17 on November 07, 2011
    I'd read a filthier Harry, but I also like the current first chapters. If you kept the gloryhole, self-deepthroat, and cum-digestion, that would be perfect. Otherwise, I'd like to see a return to the fact that the only thing Harry can eat is cum- maybe another Harry-centric "feed the slave" chapter. It was a gloriously filthy and slutty plot point that could use a little revisiting.
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  • From ANON - chocolate on November 07, 2011
    Loving the story, I would love to see the forsts chapters rewritten to make an even more depraved Harry
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  • From ANON - Petal on November 06, 2011
    I vote for a re-write of the first chapters,wold love to see an even more depraved harry
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  • From jamescun on November 05, 2011
    plz writ more
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  • From ANON - Shauna Dreelan on November 03, 2011
    I would like to see some more Harry/Snape moments, there haven't really been any since the begining
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  • From ANON - damien on November 02, 2011
    well i wouldnt mind a filthier and depraved harry but please no scat. what i would love to see in maybe a one shot or another story is a filthy harry enslaved then made a girl.
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  • From ANON - djaddict on November 01, 2011
    Personally, I would prefer more new chapters rather than a rewrite!

    Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Colfenor on November 01, 2011
    the twins with Harry is awesomely hot!

    I wouldn't mind you expanding the first chapters so we maybe get to see Harry being taken for the first time.

    Firenze could be a future acquisition to test Harry's limits
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  • From Darkserpentcat on November 01, 2011
    I know I have said before and before but PLEASE, PLEASE use Hagrid I want some gay bear/Harry action soon so rare to

    By the way have you already decided on what to do with the Dursley's?

    Ever considered a Hagrid/Charlie/Harry scene or a Aragog with Drider form/Harry scene maybe a beast scene where Hagrid watches before fucking the victims ow or maybe Hagrid and Harry could have a soul connection like Ginny and Harry Harry being Voldemort's Horcrux would difinitly give him something similar as well

    If you do a Hagrid scene soon how about doing it where Ron and Harry are having sex out by the forbidden forest and get caught by Hagrid who has been crushing on Harry for a long time or who is Harry's mate and reluctantly joins in?

    Sounds like Nev will be the one to turn Seamus and Dean by the way

    Oh here's a thought what if Neville creates a type of plant that has cock tentacles that Severus uses for potion ingredients and it needs to feed off of lust by penetrating people in sex?
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  • From ANON - slut on October 25, 2011
    I would love to see a scene where one of the girls gets gangbanged, dont care which one I just want to see her get used in all of her holes.
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  • From ANON - sha01001 on October 08, 2011
    Wow this story just keeps getting better and better. I have to disagree with the people voting for Master harry though for several reasons. Harry is a complete cock-slut and wouldn't like to be a Master as you have spent a lot of time portraying Harry as 100% happy as Severus's Slave. In fact he showed mild jealousy at having to share his master. Which clearly shows that he doesn't want to be a Master and has no intention of changing his circumstances. In turn for you to actually do this means you have to completely change Harry's personality as well as the reader having to disregard everything they have read so far.
    In my opinion it would be best to keep Harry the way he is, though I wouldn't say no to seeing him in even more depraved situations. Sorry for the rant, but I really love the direction your story is going in and don't want to see it changed :)
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  • From ANON - Chao on October 02, 2011
    Gunna throw in my vote for eventual Master!Harry as well, since it seems he's a lot better at this than Snape is (considering it took him weeks, and Harry just one session).

    And this is seriously my favorite thing on this site. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nitisha on September 27, 2011
    This is so brilliant! God it gets me so horny every time I read it! Pleeeeeaaase update soon! I want so much more!
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  • From oronochi on September 16, 2011
    Mm, this is getting so yummy; what a wonderful, dark way of breaking Padma and I can't wait to see her and Parvati preggo with multiple Dickgirls for Master Snape. I also can't wait to see Lavender subjected to the dominance of Mistress Minerva -- hopefully with lots of torture and many kinks. Ah, once you have those students, then who will be the next ones? I hope they get their just desserts. I'll be anxiously awaiting each and every update. Keep up the excellent work! :)
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  • From Darkserpentcat on September 16, 2011
    Are you going to get back to some men soon because I feel like you have been mostly focusing on females lately and I would prefer some more men

    Oh and maybe Harry's reward was that he gets to pick out a man who will be his own slave but one that will do him or be done by him I would really appreciate a big person like Hagrid not many slash of him and Harry
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