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By : TheDarkWonker
  • From ANON - Fossil on September 16, 2011
    Very nice indeed! However, the same thing has cropped up that bothered me before: Harry seems to have taken over doing the real work. He now seems to be revelling in his domination of new targets, but remains a slave of Snape. I would love to see Harry become unsatisfied with his current level of perversion , and begin to plot and scheme against Snape and, by extension, Voldemort. This could also give an opening for Dumbledore's enslavement, since it was him that, by leaving him with the Dursleys, condemned Harry to years of misery. You wrote that he liked being dark, and I would love to see him go even darker, in a master position.
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  • From ANON - Damien on September 14, 2011
    hey I love your story candy. you kno where i can read more stories like it?
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  • From Ravenheart on September 10, 2011
    ewwwwwwww what did you involve Ginny for?!
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  • From Ravenheart on September 07, 2011
    Can't you kill Snape and make Voldemort take his place? Or at least make Snape Voldemort's whore.
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  • From PsychoticRose on September 04, 2011
    Nice chappy! I'm REALLY looking forward to Harry's time with the Dursleys. I suggest a really steamy Harry/Petunia rape scene with Vernon and Duddly tied up and being forced to watch. THEN Duddly and Harry can rape Petunia together.
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  • From Muramasa616 on September 04, 2011
    I am adoring this story, the action and plot are excellent and it's very rare to find this kind of story and it's even rarer when it works. Do me a couple of favors though, although I am loving the gay action, I'm missing both lesbian and straight action and secondly, can we see tonks soon? Imagine what you could do with her!
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  • From Darkserpentcat on September 03, 2011
    I really hope you put Hagrid in soon also have you considered Firenze after all a centaurs ability to see in to the future alone would be valuable but then there are those who like furry's
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  • From ANON - djaddict on August 30, 2011
    Glad to see a new chapter after a long wait!!

    My favorite person to see in this is definitely Harry being abused but the others have been interesting to say the least.
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  • From wolfey141 on August 28, 2011
    ok I love this story. just as much as pushing up petunias. But on your next chapter could you make harry a girl and have him in a gangbang? (and your next slave would be cool as molly weasley)
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  • From on August 28, 2011
    What will happen when they find out their master is a half blood? and a half blood of lower standing than Harry
    since he father was a muggle!
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  • From ANON - Fossil on August 28, 2011
    This story is fantastically depraved! I love the Harry/Hermione dynamic best. However, after these later chapters a thought occurs to me. Harry has been doing the predominant amount of footwork for Snape's little harem, under the belief that purebloods are superior. What would happen if he found out that his precious Master, not to mention his "god" Voldemort, are both halfbloods like him? Perhaps the last remnants of his old Harry self would fight his Whore persona and from their conflict a new "Master Harry" would spawn. He could then Rise up and challenge Snape, maybe submitting him to become a Slut in the Harry harem. I don't know, just a thought.
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  • From ANON - Axl on August 22, 2011
    Oh wow, this story is FILTHY! Can't believe I write this, but I totally approve :-) I also enjoy the dry asides and one-liners you put in that make the whole depraved mess a bit more than this total PWP. Some are totally hilarious.

    I second the remaining Marauders finally getting theirs by serving as Snape's slaves: I'm sure he'd especially enjoy training, humiliating or using them to work out his frustations as his whipping boys. He could train them as his personal set of tame dogs too (as they're already halfway there with animagus and creature-forms), boot slaves, human furniture ect. Something properly humiliating to make up for his own torment at their hands!

    Uhm, with the Chosen One, and so many students, teachers (+ in future the politically powerful headmaster as you foreshadowed) as his personal slaves or loyal followers (the Slytherin students) it makes no sense for Severus to follow Voldemort anymore!
    His side is getting much more powerful than the few dozen DEs (+ their children serve HIM already!), why wouldn't he size power himself?! He has no advantage from being obedient to Voldi when he becomes now much more powerful, is much cleverer and a proven better strategist. Especially since Tom is insane and has lost most of his brains along with his humanity in his quest for immortality.... Severus should easily be able to keep him in the dark before disposing of him (using loyal to only him secret weapon HARRY perhaps?) to rule himself.

    I guess the pureblood-superiority isn't really Snape's own religion as a very powerful half-blood? Sounds more like he uses a well-known belief and concept for his own gains, smirking inwardly about himself controlling muggle-, half- AND purebloods. Not unlike snake-face: only more cunning and sane ;-)

    I think in order to secure his powerbase, influence and later control the ministry he should enslave Aurors Tonks and Shacklebolt. Perhaps finishing with LME-head/Minister Scrimgour? He could either let slave!Scrimgeour be Minister to fool people or take over himself openly. I bet after he'd finished Voldi the population would be grateful and awed enough to beg him to rule them even without candy-influence.

    Snape should definitely get Lucius! Not just for the hotness ;-) He's easily controlled by more powerful wizards despite the facade, not very good at plotting, devoted to his family and would probably even without candy be grateful to get away from Voldi or Azkaban (depending how you play it in your fic. Either way by now Severus looks probably a better Master even without being mind-controlled once Lucius realizes how powerful his friend is becoming - and that Draco is already loyal to him!) And it would be a delicious irony if the older, socially higher-ranking acquaintance of Snape's youth would now serve as his own personal slave, getting his kicks from being used as a cock-slave and totally dominated by his younger half-blooded Master, THE ultimate Slytherin.

    Uhm yeah, this super-filthy tale of yours is clearly spawning kinks ;-) Looking forward to read more!
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  • From wolfey141 on August 07, 2011
    Ok I love this sotry. It would be cool if you turned harry into a girl or something to be breeding stock as well. Maybe do it then have him in a gangbang.
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  • From ANON - LKK on August 05, 2011
    I vote for either the Patil twins or the Greengrass sisters next. The smut you write is really good and I'm really looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - sha01001 on August 02, 2011
    I love your story, my only fault with it is Ginny, I really hate her so seeing her in a Dominant position over Harry is really annoying, however I shall persavere as I love the rest of you story. Can't wait to read more.
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