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By : TheDarkWonker
  • From Tesgura on July 13, 2011
    OMG your comment about other professors got me thinking about how much Hagrid loves animals, maybe Snape could get him to bed over for Fang? God that would be hilarious! And Flitwick is supposed to be so incredibly short, he's 'fun-sized'! Otherwise I think the idea of Minerva going wild would be pretty funny. Really enjoyed this chapter, looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - lovers hatred on July 13, 2011
    I was thinking that Neville, rons dad, and Remus would make really good sluts.
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  • From Nadine21 on July 13, 2011
    How about Neville I mean Snape would to make sure they don't use Neville as the hero convert him as well. Maybe his kink could be beastiality? Look forward to the next chapter have fun writing!
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  • From ANON - djaddict on July 13, 2011
    This story is wonderfully depraved and Hot! Would hope that we will see more of submissive Harry though!
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  • From Tesgura on July 11, 2011
    Damn, I can definitely see Ron being an exhibitionist with the way Harry looked at it. So I know Snape is making all these wonderful sexy slaves, but are they ever going to get their own masters? Or is Snape going to keep all of them to himself? *rubs hands together* So looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - J-Lee on July 11, 2011
    I love your story !!
    I so hope that Hermione's getting pregnant by Harry !!

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  • From Tesgura on July 10, 2011
    Wow, I didn't think Snape would be willing to use Hermione like that, being a mudblood and all, but that was hilarious. I can't wait to read the next chapter with Ron in it too. Is Ginny going to be next? I know she's technically pureblood as well, is she going to be a brood-mare? As much as she fancies herself in love with Harry, wouldn't it be funny if Snape made Ron impregnate her? Anyway, looking forward to more!
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  • From itachiblood on July 09, 2011
    wow that was great. i can wait for more.
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  • From Lunarsempai on July 09, 2011
    Yay! thank you for updating! I think Ron should get an exhibitonist kink... just jerking himself off at random...
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  • From ANON - Tesgura on July 08, 2011
    Can Ron be a kind of toilet? I mean he is a blood traitor and all, just maybe only able to come when he's inside a nice pureblood girl his master approves of or when a pureblood is using him, either as a cum-dump or a toilet. Awesome story, great chapters, cat wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Draconia Lesoto on July 08, 2011
    This is so wrong on so many levels that its great. Very nice if you want a lot of smut with just enough plot to keep it interesting.
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  • From ANON - blackrosedraco on July 07, 2011
    a cock slut and a cum dump
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  • From Colfenor on July 07, 2011
    I would love for Ron to become a cumdump and maybe have his cum production increased to ridiculous levels, for pure-blood breeding purposes of course and to be able to give Harry the meals he deserves =)
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  • From ANON - Invictus2040 on July 03, 2011
    Good job so far. Can't wait to see more students become Severus' and Harry's playthings. Have you thought about teachers or adults like Tonks or Remus? Or even Sirius if he's still alive...
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  • From ButterflyBullet on June 23, 2011
    I tried to send you an email earlier but I don't think it worked properly. If it did, great. If not, here is my original idea plus two more:

    You asked for suggestions for the candy and after reading your story & it's vein this is what I thought:

    Remus & Sirius
    Why: They postulate loudly like alphas yet they act like what they really want is for someone (Severus, not that they'd ever admitt that with the house rivalries being what they are) to come and dominate them.
    How: I'm not sure if you've indicated when all this might be taking place, but you put it after 5th year (and as Harry is too busy being a cum slave, the debacle at the DOM never happened, therefore Sirius is still alive) you could have Severus slip them a candy and begin their training during the summer holidays. At the end of the summer he could somehow smuggle them back into Hogwarts to 'step up' their training.

    James & Lily
    Why: It would be the perfect revenge for both Severus & Harry with the state of mind he's in at the moment
    How: Dumbledore, wanting control over the 'power the Dark Lord knows not', knew Peter was a traitor & tricked Sirius into changing Secret Keepers with him knowing he would betray the Potters to Voldemort & that he would go after them to kill them. Not knowing if he would need James & Lily at a later date he visited them & put them in a magical coma, creating simulacrums to raise Harry and to be cannon fodder for Voldemort(he already had Harry going to the Dursley's as part of his plan, but they weren't a definitive factor so if they weren't treating Harry as bad as he needed him to be treated, he could wake the Potters up, giving some excuse that the Powers That Be graced them with a second chance to help their son through the difficult destiny that had been placed before him, and manipulate them into treating Harry badly). Dumbledore, foolishly trusting Severus, told him about the two being kept in his summer house. Severus, seeing the chance to get real revenge on his childhood nemesis, goes there, slips the potion the candy is spiked with into them, & starting their 're-education' before waking them up and smuggling them back into Hogwarts with Sirius & Remus to continue their traingin.

    Albus Dumbledore
    Why: I think this one is self explanatory really but just in case - You can't tell me Voldemort & the Death Eaters wouldn't love anything more than seeing the great & wonderful Albus Dumbledore crawling around on his hands and knees being to suck someones cock or to be fucked? Even if it's to constantly refuse him, it would be the ultimate crash for the master manipulator.
    How: Switching his sherbet lemons with the spiked candy just before the summer, using the summer to train him. You could either keep him as Headmaster by day & cum toy by night (all under Severus' control of course) or you could have him retire & have Severus hand him over to Voldemort at the same time he hands over Harry.

    Hopefully one or all of these ideas gets some juices flowing for you (hehe - I've had about six hours sleep in the last two days & I think it's catching up with me)

    Anyway, Happy writing
    Cadyffoz


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