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By : christinegranger
  • From ObsesiveReader on June 28, 2011
    It was hot. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on June 28, 2011
    Ooh, I like.
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on June 28, 2011
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on June 28, 2011
    Yay for Severus, for being one of Harry's mates!
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  • From ANON - Rissy on June 28, 2011
    I really like your story. I was kind of hesitant because its a plot that is so overdone but it was actually really good. But there is one thing that I'm confused about. Is Harry only going to have Severus and one other mate?
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  • From magentah on June 28, 2011
    I really like this! Goodness, I love a well-written submissive Harry story. :) Can't wait to read the next chapter--thanks for sharing this with us! I'm going to go ahead and vote for a collar (perhaps not visible to others, if it's supposed to be more subtle?) for the sign of ownership thing. I also like the idea of another thin leather cuff to compliment Severus', maybe on his other wrist.
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  • From bloodshound on June 27, 2011
    lol. No need to beg. I review willingly. ^^
    1, yay for slashy goodness. 2, the idea of something physically on him (besides the mating mark) is a sweet one and would likely reasure him no end. Will Harry alway be so helpless and needy? If so, then maybe his mates should give him something to protect himselff as well, maybe linked to their gift items? Like a port key that will bring him straight to them or some succh. Feels a bit of a waste though cause harry was pretty gutsy when it came to dada stuff and noww his confidence comes only from him mates yeah?
    woould their kids be human or chicks?
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  • From ANON - mnfm on June 27, 2011
    Well, I think its very good. Please update soon!
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  • From AngelPegasus21 on June 27, 2011
    I like this story so far. Its what i have been searching for for awhile as far as plot goes and i think its great. I love creature Harry fics. Anyway i hope you keep updating and ill definitely keep looking for your updates! Thanks for writing!
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  • From Jessica86 on June 27, 2011
    I liked the chapter. I just wished that it would have been longer so that there was more to enjoy. but those two are hot together. who will the second mate be? I'm very curious...and a present like that would be perfect...or Harry could get a nice silver/gold bracelet with something ingraved on it...just a thought.
    Can't wait for the next chapter to come. I hope that you'll update soon
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  • From AquamarieneStardust on June 27, 2011
    You officially have me addicted. I love this and I can't wait to read me. I really want to know who Harry's other mate is! I like the idea of the other one giveing something to wear as a sign of ownership, maybe a mettle bracelet with anciant writing on it? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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  • From sazsazzel on June 27, 2011
    loving this story so far. cant wait to see who the next mate is... Lucius maybe? hmmmm? cant wait for more :) keep up the good work.

    Oh btw i think that gifts are a great idea and i really like the idea of the cuff from Sevvy, maybe some sort of hair decoration? just a thought :)

    thanks for writing :)

    Domina Noctis
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  • From ObsesiveReader on June 27, 2011
    Please Update! I've been checking this fic daaily for updates.
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  • From Ecks on June 25, 2011
    Very good so far! I cant wait to read more!
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  • From krissybear on June 24, 2011
    please email me when you update this is interesting angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com
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