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Reviews for An Avian

By : christinegranger
  • From ANON - Rainbow12004 on June 21, 2011
    i love it
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  • From ladynightvamp on June 21, 2011
    hummmmm... how about the Twins as mate 2 and 3 or maybe one of the older boys, Bill might be a good choice.
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  • From mdevries08 on June 21, 2011
    I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! I have no idea who the other mate might be, maybe Draco? I guess Draco is veela but you said in the first chapter that they were similar so I suppose that's possible. Just one tiny little thing, you were spelling rogue as rouge. Rouge is the stuff to redden your cheeks n lips; it's not a big mistake but it is a little noticeable especially towards the end of the second chapter. Please update soon!!
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  • From hellangelhellina on June 21, 2011
    i love where this is going. keep it up.
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  • From bloodshound on June 21, 2011
    Somehow I'm not surprised. Sev is an old standard for a critter mate... though none the less one who generally makes things awkward when he comes back to himself. Glad Harry's got some protection now. Still, why didn't Harry hex the creep, was it a sub/ dom thing? Will there be an OC in the mix or will it be only canon characters?
    Here, have some questions. :P
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  • From ANON - mnfm on June 21, 2011
    YES! I like this story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on June 21, 2011
    Wow very nice I want more please thank you! thank you for the update...
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  • From ANON - JC Black on June 21, 2011
    MATE 2 DRACO!!!!!
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  • From ashleypenton2 on June 21, 2011
    would draco maybe be the second mate? or maybe blaise?
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  • From Jessica86 on June 21, 2011
    I like this story. A part of me is actually quite surprised that Snape turned out to be his first mate. But I like it :) I do hope that you'll update soon, cause I really want to know what happens next.
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  • From ravenwinter on June 21, 2011
    Your creature is a bit to like Jayde Alyxander's creatures in her story 'Dragon Kind' that she put up for adoption. You made mention that doms and subs both had claws then said subs don'thave claws, I like the idea of the sub having no claws, maybe just sharp nails if anything.
    Now with that said, I just love this story and can't wait to see where you take it, hope you update soon.
    Mates (not in order):Snape, Draco, Blaise, Viktor Krum, OG.
    Prefer: Draco/Blaise, Snape/Blaise, Snape/Krum.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on June 21, 2011
    Sounds Cool So far I would love to see more soon thanks.,
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  • From ANON - blackandsilver on June 21, 2011
    for my choice in harry's mates i would have either a) Marcus Flint/Roger Davies/Older male 'Puff/Harry Potter b) Viktor Krum/Older male Durmstrang/Harry Potter c) Marcus Flint/Viktor Krum/Twin Weasley/Harry Potter
    the reason for a) is harry pairing rarely has older lesser known students and it might be fun b) having the Durmstrang mates mean that harry is protected by darker lesser known and possessive people c) the twins are considered one entity (e.g. talk, walk, learn and love as one) and the other two might be interesting trying to be possessive with the twins taking harry away to make them show the love the possessive comes from.
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  • From ashleypenton2 on June 21, 2011
    mmm. i really like the way this one sounds. its interesting and i really love the idea of the avian. i cant wait for a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on June 21, 2011
    My choices for Harry's mates are as follows (in order of preference): Cedric, Draco, Blaise, Ron, Dean, Seamus, Neville.
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