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Reviews for Flare

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Talltree-san on August 24, 2011
    Ah, the infamous outstretched hand. Usually in any other story it wouldn't really mean anything. But between Harry and Draco it means EVERYTHING!
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  • From ANON - semaphore on August 24, 2011
    I did not expect the turn this chapter took. Guess that's a compliment to you, I'm not an easily surprised reader but I was, and in a positive way :P Now I wonder if Draco really told Harry everything about his interest in him, I could be off but I thought 'huh?' when he asked if he was happy after the potion worked (btw great description of the taste) as if he's got another interest.
    And the 'Malfoy grunted. Malfoy nodded.' lines cracked me up. I also liked that his sneer had no force and that you have him say 'wanker' really quietly- that way his realisation of what Harry is implying is way more effective than an outburst.
    And yay for Ron.
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  • From SParker on August 23, 2011
    By the way, if the next chapter is the last one, then
    let me say you created a wonderful story..and my fav
    scene without a doubt was the flying scene.
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  • From SParker on August 23, 2011
    about #14...

    Well now, it sounded weird, but that was DEFINITELY a
    convincing way of getting the wings retracted. You are
    the [wo]man!

    Now, it's time to work on this fragile relationship that
    Harry & Draco are trying to start.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on August 21, 2011
    It looks like Harry is sofening up to Draco, at least just a little bit...I hope lol!
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  • From SParker on August 20, 2011
    about #13...

    That was a nice ending to the chapter, no drama...just a
    subtle/subdued atmosphere.
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  • From ANON - semaphore on August 20, 2011
    Really liked this last chapter. Though I enjoy the back-and-forth pushing and shoving between Harry and Draco, it's nice to see some progress ;)
    especially liked the "you're mutilating yourself" and the mirror bit, it rings true beyond this story; sometimes you need someone to show you things you can't or don't want to see yourself. Really well done!
    and I giggled a bit at Harry smugly thinking to himself that Draco finds the wings annoying as well sometimes when he tells him not to knock over anything.

    Waiting for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on August 19, 2011
    Man Harry is a jerk. This is one of the nicer versions of Malfoy you've written and Harry is pretty rude.

    Interesting about the huge fire. Was Draco trying to subtlety make the room comfy or did he develop some sort of pyromania at some point lol.
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  • From SParker on August 18, 2011
    about #12...

    1. You know, I think I understand what Draco was trying to say.

    In a way, Harry has always been the image/example Draco has
    inspired or wanted to be, i.e better in quidditch, standing up
    for what you truly believe in, etc..

    Also, never give up, don't let the world get the best of you.

    2. Well, despite what Harry thinks, Draco will get that privilege
    of seeing Harry fly, as much as Draco hangs around him.

    3. Oh, and another thing, if you somehow come up with a convincing
    way of 'retracting wings into the pouches???' then you will DEFINITELY
    be the shit, girl!
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  • From ANON - behindthelights on August 17, 2011
    I love where this i going but i'm really not sure why Harry is being so callous and aweful to Draco. It's like the more honest and heartfelt Draco is, the more vicious and hurtful Harry becomes. I don't get why.

    anyway, get writing. the idea is inspired.
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  • From bloodshound on August 17, 2011
    I luffffffs your use of language, even if i did have to go and look up a couple of words. >> being someone elses drive and motivation without even knowing it, what an interesting idea. I wouldn't say he's Draco's inspiration because the word has to many positive connotations and dooesn't quite fit. It's close though. Pouches, fleshy sheaths for his wings, what a great idea.
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  • From ANON - loveyaoi7 on August 13, 2011
    :D Great as always, I can't wait to see what will happen ^^
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  • From SParker on August 13, 2011
    about #11...

    Damn, I thought there'd be more butt-kissing
    from Harry. :-)

    Btw, what inspired this theme for the story?
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  • From bloodshound on August 12, 2011
    snickers
    more like a bird in a snare. ^^ still, i'm sure malfoy won't do toooooooooooo much to him.
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  • From ANON - js on August 12, 2011
    I liked Draco's reaction to Harry's apology. :)
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