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Reviews for Potions, Plans, and Second Chances

By : strawberryf1re
  • From RedStormRocks on November 24, 2011
    *doing happy dance*. Oooh, I love it!!!!
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  • From Remarkable on October 23, 2011
    I absolutely adore this story, and am so anxiously looking forward to the next installment! Just incredible, my new fave story!
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  • From dragonfreak1991 on October 22, 2011
    Really good can't wait for more. Awww poor Hermione doesn't deserve Ron to be that way.
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  • From CryingCinderella on October 21, 2011
    Coursework be damned. Your uni class this session is to finish this story! :-p Another excellent chapter, of course, as if we could expect any less. And such a tantalizing tease! That dream was well beyond the expectations of any of us; hot and titillating, scandalous and sensual, so very appropriate- and I was pretty much picturing Hermione the whole time anyhow, so the fact that it ended with her- well that just made it all the better. But oh you've left us in quite a predicament. She fell asleep hunched over his bed- he's just given release to a wet dream without a moment to clean himself and now she's awake. Goodness whatever will he do? Your intimate scene in the park was thrilling and exhilarating. It kept me on the edge of the chair with baited breath so bad that my lungs were stinging until finally the thunder tore them apart. Brilliant, but cruel. Surely there must be some release for the two of them? SOON? Your masterful skill over their mutual plight is to be commended in your writing. Your craft is well honed and I salute you for your meticulous attention to detail as well as your impeccable descriptions. Now- all that said- PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE find some more time to craft your perfection. Tell the prof you need a day for mental health and lock yourself in your confines and write, for the love of Albus, write! I eagerly await the next installment in this enthralling story, and forgive you your trespasses of infrequent updates. ;-)

    ~CryingCinderella
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 21, 2011
    There is no need for perfection, but you do a great job of getting really darn near it! Thank you for the update and their growing closeness. I know it won't be incredibly soon, but I do eagerly await the next chapter. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Heather Washabaugh on October 21, 2011
    Poor Hermione! At least she is free now.
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  • From CryingCinderella on September 26, 2011
    My lovely, lovely, lady. University started up, and now that you've settled in...PLEASE?? Won't you indulge us with another fine chapter in this delicious story? I beg you.
    ~CC
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  • From ANON - Jenny on September 02, 2011
    I can't wait to see how Hermione ends her relationship with Ron. You write so well, I think it's going to be quite emotional. Keep it up -- I check this site for updates every day, your work is fantastic!
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 31, 2011
    Oh goodness I think we had to wait far too long for that one. And yes, I am eager to see her leave Ron. Severus is right, she needs to live life for her happiness, as life is just too short to do otherwise. The walk outside was lovely and the dynamic that you continue to build between them, their emotional reactions are priceless and brilliant. I cannot wait to see more of where this is going to go. Leaving Ron is going to be difficult, and so is Severus trying to keep his perverted glances under wraps. Though the poor fellow probably needs another shave. And perhaps another massage. ;-) Great work, cannot wait to read more!
    ~CC
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 30, 2011
    I find myself reading your story and hoping for the time when he is less frail and sickly and she is more self-assured and comfortable. I know we have a long way to go, but I do look forward to it. I wonder how long it will take him to realize he is actually interested in her, or for her to realize it. lol They will certainly keep each other on their toes once they get past their initial trepidation. :-) I loved how uncomfortable he was with her tears, but still didn't think to be snarky or cruel to her. And, it's funny and interesting to watch her want his friendship and trust so much, when she honestly has no reason to want anything but his healing and approval for a job well done. These two are very fun, even in their pain. I do feel badly for Ron, but maybe her stopping his dependency will be the thing he needs to get his life restarted. Looking forward to more. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Dherea on August 22, 2011
    Great story. I am really enjoying Hermione as a healer & confident woman. Really well written - looking forward to the rest of the story.
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  • From pinkmoontribe on August 19, 2011
    Amazing i love this....i love the progress and the .massage had me drooling lol. Ugh i hate ron. I always have...she needs to kick his ass to the curb and get her some snape! Please update soon....or email me would be better! Lol
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  • From ANON - Amanda on August 16, 2011
    I just wanted to say that I am loving this story. I can't wait until these two get... y'know, physical. You write beautifully, I know it's going to be fantastic.
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  • From ChaosLady on August 16, 2011
    How delightful! We even have a masturbation scene. Can't wait til the next update!
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 15, 2011
    Oh if only she had been there; hence the smell of her lingering so strongly! Wonderfully penned again; though I longed for a much longer massage. (and will now be longing for a long time for the next chapter) I found his perversion of her to be delicious. It was tasteful; how he imagined her and used that imagery to bring himself to release. And Harry, what a surprise. :-) We can only hope that Hermione will take his advice to heart and leave Ron, er I suppose kick him out. Perhaps that will lead to Hermione offering to keep Severus in her place; as he is worried about his funds being drained by the hospital. That would certainly set a change of pace for Severus. I do think the walk will be nice for him. And I do hope perhaps she allows herself a little pleasure; to perhaps fantasize over him. Again the dreamed memories of Lily are penned with excellence, I only hope he doesn't hold those to firm in his heart, so firm there is not room to allow these strange new feelings regarding Hermione to blossom. I like how you have them spinning the mind games at one another; and the subtle nuances that help build up the reality of the hospital (being interrupted by the intern looking for Marcus, and then Marcus looking for said intern) though I do hope soon we'll have a reveal. That moment you're building up to (and have done a wonderful job building up to) that moment where one of their attractions is exposed to the other. You've crafted this so beautifully that I can hardly begrudge you for taking your time (though it is AGONIZING awaiting the next installment) I cannot wait for your next chapter. The walk is promising, and healing the holes in his heart, both physically and metaphorically is going to be wonderful. Can hardly wait. Merlinspeed to getting it done soon.
    ~CryingCinderella
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