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Reviews for Potions, Plans, and Second Chances

By : strawberryf1re
  • From KagomeLove1 on May 23, 2018

    What an interesting story. Finally when the dram was going to start. There is no mare chapter. Thank you for the lovely experience of reading your work . 


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  • From ANON - Jessie Deal on August 21, 2015
    What a shame this story isn't finished. It's written lovely, with beautiful details that lend to it being believable. Truely well done
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  • From ANON - Jean on January 14, 2015
    I am really enjoying this - wonderfully written!
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  • From Angelwells on September 03, 2012
    This is a great story, I do hope you continue it on :)

    Angel :)
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  • From onecelestialbeing on April 23, 2012
    This story is so lovely, can't wait for the next chapter~
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 22, 2012
    I am very glad to see you and this story back here. I hope real life, while busy, was good. I am glad he is relaxing with her a little. I hope to see them each learn to trust one another soon, too. I wonder if you're planning to bring Harry into the small fold... hmmm Anyway, thank you and I look forward to more soon, HG4eva
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  • From snape1sh on April 21, 2012
    Oh yeah!!!! Finally! This is one of my favourite stories ever...I'm so glad you're back!
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  • From ANON - Ldeetz on January 06, 2012
    I love your story. I wish I had a better way of keeping track of when you update it. Speaking of which, I hope you'll be able to update soon. You have me on the edge of my seat with all this sexual tension.
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  • From CryingCinderella on January 04, 2012
    I have not noticed any inconsistencies in your story (except for the frequency with which you update ;-) ...) and find it oh so cruel that we've been dropped off after that oh so tension built moment. I read it twice because I couldn't believe it. But let me back up to the earlier bits in the chapter- you characterize Ron quite well, as I'd imagine him to be, all sniveling and pathetic. You do the characters' emotions justice as you let them slowly build and play out across their faces, in their actions and what little they do say. The shower scene was brilliant. Had my blood boiling. And then when he fell- the inevitable- I thought I was literally going to explode reading that bit- you have it so well crafted that each word of that moment stands your nerves on end. The kiss- oh the kiss- I just wow- commend you on your ability to make that work so perfectly. It was mind blowing and yet so simplistic- the briefest of moments and BOOM! Please please please give us an update sooner than this last one. I find myself desperate to know- what will she say? Will he try to play it off as if nothing had happened? And for the love of god, she's slipped over so many slippery slopes in regards to her professionalism, hopefully she won't decide she needs to be firm here and now. It's driving me absolutely mad pining for that moment when their lips finally meet intentionally and he's able to ravish her, frail or not. I know that all your mounting tension will make it all the more satisfying and brilliant when it (and they) finally come. Eagerly awaiting this perfect craft of yours. Please do hurry! :-)

    xoxo
    CryingCinderella
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  • From snape1sh on January 03, 2012
    Oh my goodness, I started to read this story yesterday and just couldn't put it down. The moments between Snape and Hermione are so beautifully written, also the flashbacks of Lily. I cannot wait for it to continue!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 03, 2012
    So close and yet so far... sigh. Even completely understanding both of their thoughts, and knowing he's in no condition for such activities, I long for them to throw caution, logic and the rules to the wind. I am glad he is finally healing, but I am saddened by the thought that he will leave to "protect her" and not allow them a chance at true happiness. Fingers crossed for you to find a way for them to let go. I also feel badly for Ron. He's so sad and confused and now alone. I hope he gets the help he needs. Thanks and Happy New Year! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - demonsangel on January 02, 2012
    As always, I love this story. There is a bit of insight I would like to offer up though, I know from experience that when a person is that weak and has been bed ridden like that, that doctors often use strengthening exercises. At least that is what has been done for all my family, myself included. For example, his legs have clearly lost muscle and are weaker then before, so using one of those large medical rubber bands and looping it around one foot, then having the person hold onto the other ends so that it is tight and then slowly moving their foot down as if pressing on the gas or something and then just as slowly raising it several times would help increase flexibility and strengthen the muscles, all be it gradually.

    Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Avivafae on December 21, 2011
    I love this story. I hope you will update it soon. The characters are so on the money it's wonderful. The interplay between them just pulls you deeper and deeper.
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  • From ANON - Brianne on November 30, 2011
    I love the storyline and think you're an exceptional writer. I only have an issue with 2 things. You repeat yourself a lot through the story. I would just use different phrasing if I were you. And continuity. You had hermione cast a disillusionment charm but then made it seem as if she and snape could see each other. I am not trying to criticize your work, which I think is fantastic, so please don't take offense. I love the story and I'm looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From CryingCinderella on November 26, 2011
    Once again my commendations on your brilliant chapter. The intimate stolen moments, the hand in the hair, the fingers laced together, etc; they create a depth to their relationship that is simply beautiful to watch unfold. It's painstaking to wait between chapters, though I understand you are attempting to craft perfection. (I myself am completely uninspired and have 4 stories waiting updates) The raw emotions so thinly veiled in their conversations and gestures are particularly brilliant and I do enjoy watching their banter. All of that bubbling and boiling when he said that she was fairing better than Weasley only to have her diffuse into a somewhat witty retort- it was maddening genius. I cannot wait to see the further involvement, now that the pressure is on for her to reveal his identity. Perhaps it would be safest if she were to remove him to some other location. Her now vacant apartment- with it being just a floo's shot away...then she wouldn't have to be pressured with his identity whilst still allowing him the care he needed- though goodness knows the man would be down-right resistant. I can hardly wait to see where this goes. Hopefully it won't be another two months before we find out. Let's hope it'll be an early Christmas present!

    xoxo
    CryingCinderella
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