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Reviews for Under the Manor

By : WillGirl
  • From ANON - Rabia on August 31, 2011
    Why leave it at such a sad ending? I think there are things that could still be explored. Ginny might complicate things but I think you could work with or around her.
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  • From ANON - MViolet on August 31, 2011
    I think this story has a lot of potential to continue. I have so many questions about what happens next, such as: do Draco and Harry meet up again, does Draco ever forgive and forget, do Draco and Harry form an even stronger relationship, what is Harry going to do now that he's gotten what he's wanted? I really hope you continue this story because I am hooked and can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Nubia on August 30, 2011
    I think you are doing well in your story, Draco could not overcome the guilt of raping Harry and this is strange but felt pleasure Harry you are who can spin the story you want may end up Harry and Draco together, be lovers etc. thanks for writing your history
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  • From ANON - cgh on August 30, 2011
    dont stop here! we dont realy know how harry feels after this second encounter and how it will effect his relationship with ginny, will he tell her? harry and draco need to talk about whats happening between them, because there certainly is something there. draco needs help facing his demons and maybe you could tell us some more about what he does now, potions? just keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 30, 2011
    I love your story! I don't think it's done, I think there is lots more to tell. I think that Draco and Harry need to face their dark demons together and help each other heal. It wont be easy because neither one would want to openly show their weaknesses and seek help for them especially from each other. I think that they need to face this attraction/connection to each other that has basically been in their lives since they met at Madam Malkin's Robe shop. I think Harry needs to struggle between deciding to stay in a safe, boring and easy relationship with Ginny and the scary feeling of falling in love with someone who is the same sex and who he can't easily have as a boyfriend in the new wizarding society. Draco needs to fight his mind's dark demons and get healthier both in his mind and body. He needs to grow into a man's healthy body. I think it would also be interesting to find out what Draco's job is and what his plans are for the restoration of the Malfoy name. Maybe he invents some new potion. Maybe a potion that restores one sanity and it helps the Longbottoms. Will Harry start a family with Ginny or Draco? I mean they are wizards it's not a stretch to think that gay or lesbian wizards would find a way to use magic to have babies with their partners. I think Harry would be one to want family early in his life since he didn't get to experience a normal family's love for many years into his life. Also wouldn't there be some issues from Lucius if he found out that Draco and Harry were seeing each other. Could there be some new bad guy that Harry might have to face and he could seek Draco's help in solving and catching the killer. These are just a few ideas I'm hoping might help to inspire you to continue your story. Your fan CJB! P.S. I hope to read lots more of your story!
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  • From bloodshound on August 30, 2011
    more pls. you can't just leave poor draco wallowing like that. Sure he did and was made to do awful stuff but I don't think he should drown in guilt forever. After all, the 'light' side did some pretty not to kosher stuff too.
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  • From ANON - ramen on August 30, 2011
    no!dont stop.is it too much to ask for a happy ending for draco and harry?together.it'd be interesting to see how you managed it anyways.i will be waiting to see what happens
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  • From WinterRaven on August 29, 2011
    I think it would be interesting to have Draco confront Harry with what he's feeling - have a final 'showdown' so to speak. Somehow, the story doesn't seem finished where it is, and I think it's because you've created excellent tension and a great dynamic between Harry and Draco... I'd say, flesh it out and see where it goes and if you don't like what you write, don't post :) But there's a lot of potential here so please continue!
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  • From WinterRaven on August 27, 2011
    Love this story. So glad you decided to extend it. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From bloodshound on August 26, 2011
    wll, that worked brilliantly... not.
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 15, 2011
    OMG chapter six was amazing! I absolutely loved it! You write really hot sex scenes! I thought it was pretty cool that even though Harry was partially trying to make it seem like for his own sake he was being forced to endure sex with Draco, but still really wanted to cuddle with him afterward. I loved all the romantic touches like when they entwined their hands together. I can't wait to see where your story goes. I wonder if they'll grow closer and eventually Harry will dump Ginny or if Harry thinks that one time is it for him and Draco has to fight to keep him with him. I don't know where your story is going but I can't wait to find out. I was so happy that the chapter was nice and long and filled with a very oh so delicious love scene, it was so worth the wait! I might someday write that story idea but it'll be a while because today I go back to college life. Again I love your work, your fan CJB.
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  • From bloodshound on August 15, 2011
    How utterly awkward... and intense! This is going to happen again isn't it. I can just see it. They're both so very broken.
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  • From brasilkat on August 15, 2011
    Love it! very well written and incredibly sexy!
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  • From ANON - An Admirer on August 10, 2011
    Oh, eek, I haven't enjoyed a fanfic so much in a long time! I was holding my breath as I read, hanging onto every word. Brilliant from beginning to end, but especially the first chapter was so perfect and gripping and made me cry with pity. Sex is usually so gratuitous and worthless, but you made it into a great character study and used it to develop a fantastic plot. You really are an exceptional, talented writer, and it made me genuinely happy to read this! I loved lines like, "they weren
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  • From ANON - Boxtersushi on August 09, 2011
    I'm really enjoying how this story is unfolding... I hope you keep it up!
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