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Reviews for Under the Manor

By : WillGirl
  • From Spacefille on August 09, 2011
    I absolutely love this fic. :) I love love Draco torture, and prisoner rape fics where the so called tormentor suffers more than the prisoner, which is this fic in a nutshell. This bit "He flinched away instinctively, and sensed Draco recoil halfway across the room. Harry rolled his eyes." had me laughing out loud. I know it's supposed to be serious but I could just see it so well and I loved how Harry was all "okay seriously just do it already. :/" ah good ol' Harry. XD And then I read to the end and I must say I'm really looking forwards to more. I like how you've written adult Harry and Draco... Draco's got his arrogant personality back and it feels like Harry is a bit of the confused one now. I'm eager to see what you do with it. Thanks for the great fic!
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 07, 2011
    I loved the new chapter and I was happy that it seemed longer, but I hated the cliff hanger I wish there had been more to read. I have a big smile on my face and I can't wait for the next chapter. I get that Harry seems almost like he has unfinished business with Draco, because he had been turned on by sex with Draco and didn't allow himself to come. It's like he has unanswered questions about himself; did some part of Voldemort rub off on him or still live inside his mind or heart or did he truely just missed the fact that Draco and he are a match made in heaven. Does he have problems with the way he feels because he might be scared of how his friends and the rest of the wizard world would feel and act towards him if they knew their saint Potter had fallen for an Ex-Death Eater. Will Harry ever share the duties as a top once he has closure as a bottom? It felt like Harry was such a take charge and dominant character that him sharing that position with Draco would give him some semblance of control back in his life if he can't get Draco out of his system. Harry having the chance to dominate Draco back would be totally hot and like their natural competiveness to one up each other all the time. Any ways sorry for rambuling on. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see where your story goes.
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  • From brasilkat on August 06, 2011
    I'm anxious for the next update!
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  • From bloodshound on August 06, 2011
    Just hope Harry has his head together enough so that Malfoy will know Har would rather be the usey rather than the user.
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  • From ANON - semaphore on August 06, 2011
    Hi,

    just dropping a line to say that I'm really enjoying your story so far.
    I'm very intrigued by your character description, it's quite unusual imho, everyone seems to have hidden depths and layers which makes the whole thing so interesting. Rape fics aren't actually my cup of tea but I couldn't stop reading here, so well done! (that sounds wrong somehow but be assured it's a compliment, yeah? :)) Your writing style flows and what can I say, it's just really enjoyable.
    Hope you're gonna continue with this to whatever ending you've imagined. Can't wait for the next part, thanks for entertaining me so far :)

    M
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 06, 2011
    Chapter four was so much better. But I wish you would write longer chapters like chapter one but I know at that time you thought your story would only be a one shot. I liked that Malfoy thought Harry is after revenge or equality and is willingly offering to give it to Harry. That is way cooler an idea than Malfory being arrogant and a pampous ass and thinking Harry was lusting after him. With Malfoy thinking Harry wants to get back at him It makes me think that he still feels guilty for what he had to do to Harry. But it truly says he does replay that memory over and over in his head. This chapter made me wonder if Draco really didn't see Harry's erection predicament in the first chapter. I thought werewolf tag was pretty awesome. I can't wait to see how your story plays out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2011
    I've just read the first three chapters and I could see such potential from the first chapter on it's own, I am so happy you chose to continue! I can't wait to see what happens next :D
    Best Wishes
    Shigure-san
    x chuu x
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  • From ANON - Queen Pen on August 05, 2011
    more please!! good stuff
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 04, 2011
    That chapter was such a tease! I wanted more so much more in it. It was a little strange how Malfoy and Potter meet again but I can sorta see that happening. I felt the conversation between Draco and Harry was weird and a little hard to follow with the whole Blaise thing. I mean I get that in the first chapter Harry had thought about the rumors that maybe that wasn't Draco's first time with a guy and that he might have been dating Blaise at Hogwarts, but that's still not even confirmed. Was Harry Draco's first time or not? Did Draco and Blaise ever date? I'm just confused but I still want to follow this through because the first chapter was so amazing and the second was a great follow up because it got us past the war and gave us something better and more than J.K.'s silly epilogue.Also you could see that Harry probably would sit through all those trials and how he could have those feelings towards the Malfoys. I was waiting for this chapter but now I'm on edge for the next chapter. I'm wondering what Draco has been doing all this time. Like what the wizard society would let him get hired as. It would be cool if with all the Arors leaving Draco would be recruited and become Harry's new partner so they would have to see each other every day and Harry would have to fight his attraction. But that's just one scenario I see in my head that could happen with your story but I can't wait to see what you write about.
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  • From bloodshound on August 04, 2011
    oh yeah, he's sooooooooooooo going to be seeing Malfoy again. I curiose to, what HAS Malfoy been doing?
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 01, 2011
    I love your story so much! I could actually see that happening as an alternate story. Please keep continuing I really look forward to reading more. Your story is really well written and I feel you have a great grasp on the characters. Your new fan CJB.
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  • From ANON - kit on July 31, 2011
    oh! i'm excited to hear that this will not remain a one shot. The second chapter was touching...I cant wait to see what your story will be leading up to.
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2011
    well, i can say that worked nicely.
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  • From apless2645 on July 31, 2011
    I am so excited for this story, I feel like it has the potential to be one of those really angsty slow-burns that I love. Can't wait for more!
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  • From kogaluver on July 31, 2011
    I'm so glad that you decided to continue this at the point where Harry had won. I read the first chapter yesterday, and it left me feeling bothered. It was a very haunting image to be left with. I'll be looking forward to future chapters. Nicely done ^_^
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