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Reviews for Within the Lies

By : Sylvia
  • From ANON - DemonLordLife on December 05, 2011
    lurve
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  • From ANON - Alley on November 19, 2011
    I honestly love this story, but I never know that it has updated; lol.
    I always randomly stumble across it and remember what it is.
    Congrats by the way!
    Can't wait to read more of this delicious story.
    Is there a way that I can keep updated on when you update?
    Alley_Blaze
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  • From Cinder1013 on November 16, 2011
    Congrats on the coming baby! Great update. I hate waiting for more, but I understand.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 12, 2011
    Congrats on the baby . And awasome story so far and can't wait to find out what happens next .rember rest and write more soon.
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  • From bloodshound on November 12, 2011
    poor Har. He's still so ambivalent about all of this.
    still wb. been a while and ty 4 t update
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  • From jujukitty on November 11, 2011
    yay, so glad to see more of this! and they're starting to figure out their place in things, but who could these mysterious others be *cue dramatic music* great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next. oh, and can i just say, i could totally see you lovely people cackling evilly at the mention of what's happening next chapter lol. and lastly, a big congrats to you, mama!
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  • From Darkserpentcat on November 11, 2011
    thank you both for this update and hope you feel better soon though without it costing you.

    Is there still going to be a poll?
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  • From bloodshound on September 17, 2011
    I was just re reading to pick up the story again and i noticed something. where you said withering (meaning to wither as in to wither away to nothing)did you mean writhing (to writhe, wiggle in place etc)... so many people are getting this wrong it's becoming a pet peev of mine. >>
    just sticking my two cents worth in for the votes, mio and blaise I like and snape should definitely be a mate.
    do the twins have critter blood? It should be something mischievous like a faun or a sprite or even kitsune if they do... though that might raise problems as to why it hasn't come out in the rest of the family.
    So what happened to the modern dementors to make them look and be all weeooweeeooo?
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  • From ANON - heartstar on September 17, 2011
    I love this more please
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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on September 17, 2011
    Ch7: yummy ending. Harry is right; people will think he's a little more nuttier than usual
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  • From kitmistress on September 16, 2011
    *glomps!* YEAH UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Runs around in happy circles* and really a dementor?...yeah im cool with it i love the twists in your story! i love Sy in his head and that he's not just the dementor but the QUEEN! lol soo cute, and your not as evil this time (thank you for not leaving us on a to big of a cliff)

    and shippo? really?....yeah ok he's cute enough. (except that bow...i hate that blue bow...and im a girl, he's a boy... lol) thank you for the update and by the way your doing amazing with the betaing yourself!
    please update again soon!
    Kit :)
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  • From AquamarieneStardust on September 16, 2011
    Contest 3... I think the twins are Naga seeing as they understand parseltoung, or some other type of snake related creature...

    Also... I LOVE THIS STORY!! I can't WAIT for you to update!!
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  • From Darkserpentcat on September 16, 2011
    good chapter but in the future can you put more discription into the men bodies especially when it involves teasing

    Also I checked your new thread and you haven't put hints as to what they are on it and the only thing I could get from this was that they were snake creatures such as Naga ir another snake creature (I have one in mind I just can't spell it)
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  • From jujukitty on September 16, 2011
    this is so totally awesome! love the twins, you'e done a great job with them and harry, and i love snips and his sense of humor, and sy seems pretty cool too. figure snape is gonna be one of his mates but curious to who else you're going to come up with. and i think your sex scene was just fine, as you said, 2 yrs pent up frustration and first time prob would equal quickie lol love this, can't wait to see more :D
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  • From jujukitty on September 16, 2011
    okay, so i'm only up to ch.2 so far, but i really like this, and i love the twins and am so glad they're good guys, be quite nifty if they're some of harry's mates too :D can't wait to see what's up with harry, what his changes are and everything as well. *skips off to read more*
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