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By : WingsofaDream

From NinaSweets on October 19, 2011
Aw how cute was that! Lots of cuteness, you know I love the cute chapters, I'm still 'aw'ing Valentines cuteness! The reactions with Snape - no one can resist Harry's adorableness for long. And Draco adorableness. and just awww! Just a squee worthy chapter, can't wait for your update with hopefully more 'aw' worthy moments. Though that doesn't make for an interesting story I still can't help myself!!
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From bloodshound on October 18, 2011
another sweet, setting things up sort of chapter... it did make me grin though. Meanie, it was a bloody horcrux wasn't it. Anyway, i wonder what's so bad about being in Slyth that makes it sucha bad place for Har? Ah well, we'll find out sooner or later, mwhahahaha.
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From JtheChosen1 on October 18, 2011
Sorry that you had to deal with jerks on ff.net - your writing style is clearly superior! Great work here, loved the update =)
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From ANON - qwerty on October 18, 2011
I love the increasing hits of a Harry/Draco relationship. So innocent and sweet! haha. Snape's reaction to Valentine's Day was adorable :P
Interesting lesson! I was wondering when Harry would learn more things about his staff.
Great chapter!
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From NinaSweets on October 13, 2011
Oh the plot thickens. Important gold thing that shall come up later but I won't remember until it is brought up again. I hope poor Harrys visions don't get any worse, and yay for more DracoxHarry love. I like the chapters where there's a bit of plot a bit of explaining and a bit of cuteness. Of course I shall gush over Draco's cute 'can I have a hug?' awww. It shall tide me over for more cuteness.
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From ANON - Tani on October 13, 2011
Hello! :)
Just wanted to pop in and say that I really like the story so far!
I did have one question though... Is there a reason you made the Weasley kids younger? Since the years coincide with canon for Harry and Draco, that would make the Weasley kids younger seeing as how in canon only Percy, the twins, and Ron were in school with Harry and Draco with the twins being in third year when Harry, Draco, and Ron started their first year (Percy in fifth, and Charlie having graduated last term).
I was just curious, as I noticed the discrepancy and you hadn't elaborated on the reasoning as it seems a bit of a big change to me. (Not that I really mind since I don't care for Ron, lol.)
Anyway! Still a good story! Keep up the good work! :)
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From ANON - polka dot on October 12, 2011
I feel bad for Draco, he's not happy at all. For some reason I picture Harry like a little fairy in this.
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From ANON - Althydia on October 12, 2011
Ah, I'm so happy to read another chapter of this wonderful story each time there's a new one! Thanks for sharing!
And you spoiled us with two adorable moments: Harry's behaviour with his father (holding his hand proudly, etc) and Draco's need for a hug (SO sweet!). Awww...
But damnit, Harry is still hiding his troubles - even from High Priest Sephiran! That cannot be healthy. Can't someone get it into his head that he shouldn't always worry about burdening other people with his problems? Some people would love to help him, I'm sure. I just hope that now that the twins are aware of his visions, they might be able to warn someone if something happens to Harry because of them. And with Harry's bad omens about the DADA classroom and Draco's warning, something could indeed happen pretty soon. I also wonder about that golden object in the chimney: could it be a Horcrux (like Slytherin's locket or the ring)?
I'm glad Harry got to spend some time with his father and Draco, though. I like the twins, but they can't replace Harry's family. Actually, Lucius must feel a bit lonely alone in the Manor, with Draco away and Severus also at Hogwarts?
Glad to see the return of the Marauder's Map too. But if Harry knew who created it, I'm sure he wouldn't be too pleased... Harry's Quidditch skills seem intact too, but playing for Gryffindor would probably make things more tense with Severus and Draco. Is he also a natural flyer in your story?
And by the way, I actually thought Severus knew who Harry's biological parents were, so your answer was quite a surprise! Maybe because in the books he looks so much like his father with his mother's eyes? In your story I assumed he would also look like them, even though he may have longer hair and other glasses - and thus Severus would notice the resemblance. Then again, I guess Severus wouldn't expect the Potters - as noble as they are made out to be - to abandon their child in an alleyway... He's a great father to Harry anyway, and deserves some happiness too.
Now let's hope that Harry can finish the year without any more trouble (and no Voldemort!)...
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From Chmurzasta on October 11, 2011
Aaaaw, this one is sweet and fluffy.
I like the plot - you're not afraid to wander away from canon, but at the same time the ideas you come up with are easy to digest.
A pity Siri is a meanie though. Hope he'll show up later.
Can't wait to read the rest!!!!!
*hugs*

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From bloodshound on October 11, 2011
I've read other papa Snape fics but in most of them he's a reluctant, shocked to learn of my teen age son type parent and in half it turns kinky. this is the first of this type I think I've read.
Neh, neh that glint of gold is totally a horcrux right? Right?
Hmmm, interesting. I wonder how frequently these flashes are going to happen. har REALLY needs to talk to that priest.
Saying har wouldn't be safe is a bit ominous... i wonder what thats about.
neh, Har could still send his pa messages. It'd be a bit like a little kid getting a good night phone call from papa.

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From JtheChosen1 on October 11, 2011
Awesome work here! Are you ever going to put this up on fanfiction as well?
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From ANON - Bambi on October 06, 2011
I usually don't read stories with Snape as Harry's father, but I love it!! He's shows such a different face with Harry, and it really makes me kinda die from the sweetness overload
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From ANON - Althydia on October 05, 2011
Phew, I am very relieved for Harry too! I feared the worst for a while, as I didn't expect Gryffindor actually. I would have thought that it could have been Ravenclaw for Harry, but then I realised that he did do some things that were definitely Gryffindorish (e.g. take the Avada Kedavra for Lucius). Gryffindor could have a good effect on him concerning his lack of self-confidence sometimes, although this choice of House must not have been a very pleasant surprise for Severus. Now he may have to actually give points to that House (!), and it could sting also because it's the House of his old bullies and Harry's biological parents (I suppose he knows who they are?)... But Harry's reasons against Slytherin were very valid, considering his experiences with Voldemort, and I'm glad Draco and Severus were understanding (although he didn't exactly talk about his worries to Severus, per se).
Also, it's interesting how Draco also has a more canon side to his personality (his attitude with his 'court', for example) and friends that Harry doesn't like. But Harry himself knows lots of Weasleys and he could become good friends with the twins (but what about Lee Jordan? He seems often overlooked, even in canon, although I personally like the Lee/George ship). And what about Quidditch? Will Harry be a natural flyer and part of his House's team? (could potentially be another blow for Severus, though) Although Harry may be more work-oriented than sport-oriented at the moment, and he already has a busy enough timetable at school...
Well, I look forward to his Hogwarts years, also because with adolescence may come sexual/romantic interests, and I'd love to know where Draco fits in all that. ;)
Will there be some cute moments with their pets too, now that Hedwig and Elincia have been brought along to Hogwarts?
Thanks for another great chapter and for your kind comment (made me blush)! It's also very nice of you to reply to your reviews. :)
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From NinaSweets on October 04, 2011
A belated happy birthday to you! I just turned 19. Yay for presents... moving on...
A lovely chapter! I was so worried for poor Harry and when Draco was just glaring at him from the Slytherin table I was like noooo. But of course it all worked out, I'd be disapointed in Draco if he let something like that stop him and Harry being friends (though you had me going here for a little while). Happy with Snape too, Harry needs so much reasurance and Snape did it without much prompting. Oh I just love your characters! Imma go and fangirl squee cause I like a happy Harry
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From JtheChosen1 on October 04, 2011
Another great chapter from you! I swear, I just wanna cuddle with little Harry after every little adventure he has! Great job here, can't wait to see what else happens!
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