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Reviews for Family Means More Than Blood

By : WingsofaDream
  • From NinaSweets on August 01, 2012
    Awesome! Super-foxy-mega-awesome-hot! Oh I loved it! An unexpected twist, I was wondering if you were gonna kill Cedric or if someone else would accidentally get dragged along. I liked it with Pettigrew though, I don't know I think the way Harry feels about him sort of influences how I feel. Harry was sad so I was and Harry forgave home giving him a bit of peace which I think he needed. I browse what you write to other people too and I'm so sad there's only like twelve chapters left. I hope you've got something else to come out immediately after this because I am so impatient. I got all excited and checked for your chapter on Tuesday and then realized with the time difference I wouldn't be able to read it until Wednesday even though I've been used to your weekly updates for a year. I'm such a goose. I was just so excited for this chapter, it's a turning point in the book series really drawin the reader into the fact that this is a war with a death and I was excited to see what you'd do. I can't wait for the fall out and lots of Draco over protectiveness :)
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  • From redeyedemon on August 01, 2012
    I can't help reading updates for this, and then I do and I get to the end and I'm always so sad because when I started reading this it was fifty chapters in and I got to read all fifty of them and now I'm sitting here waiting for more and watching like a hawk for the next update. So... I sit and wait.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 31, 2012
    I'm the same thrnbrooke on ff.net and lots of other places.
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  • From FairyBean on July 31, 2012
    That was a very strong chapter, moving and emotionally pulling. I enjoyed it very much.

    As to defensive, no, I think we both misunderstood hehe. So thats fine.

    My favourite part of this chapter is the way you mix events, like Harry taking back Peter instead of Cedric etc. And I found it hillarious that you gave Voldemort, the dark lord of all evil and the like, the power to give intense pleasure instead of pain to Harry. Was giggling for a while there. hehe.

    Great work. :D
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  • From jami_lee on July 31, 2012
    Poor Harry!! I hope he's okay.
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2012
    True but then Har's instincts have never been wrong yet regarding the bad guys.

    sigh, how many times does it take with Har predicting something disastrous before the adults pick up the point. seriously, sheesh.

    Oh, that must have been so hard for har. It's totally against his nature not to go to the aid of someone needing help.
    Still, YAY! Ceddy, din get deady. I hope he appreciates that later.

    With the port key, would anything touching it trigger it, or does it need to be a living being of some kind?

    Hmmmmm. *peers at you snobbishly and pushes up the potter geek glasses up on my nose. I thought it was unwittingly given for the father since he's like, a bone pile and therefore, unknowledgeable about anything. Still, nice substitute for enemy there. Still, what a thoroughly icky side effect. virtual rape with a touch. ewwww.

    Of course har can't kill him, pacifist... dah! still, that's going to put a serious crimp in ridding the world of V as the canon approach certainly wouldn't work here.

    man, he really doesn't want har to have mind or will of his own, does he. Would har's seer powers be effected by being broken down to being a pet? yuck, what a thought.

    Oh, yeah, that's really going endear the guy to har. How does he know when it's just enough to cause pain and not enough to break a mind. rather risky wasn't it? Kinda hypocritical too. no when his to touch/harm har and then he orders him tortured. Is he still missing several chunks of soul in this? I he is it wouldn't surprise me cause damn, does it show.

    Well, there's a fine motivational reward for loyal service. Help a guy come back and be rewarded with a quick death. >>. Well, at least he wasn't tortured to death. Poor Pete, he was so scared all the time. At least Har was able to absolve him of guilt in the end. Yay Har, getting an early toe in with his priestly duties. ^^

    Har's religion is against self harm and suicide too, yeah? Still, they're frail mortals, and life life with V would be enough to drive anyone to the brink.

    Well, that was dead careless of V. Did he honestly expect har to just sit/stay like a good dog? Still, if he ever snags har again after this, you can bet har is going to be immobilized until V gets him home.

    man, har just can't go a year without being seriously crunched, can he.




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  • From Madamdragon on July 31, 2012
    I love this update. And I couldn't nhelp but knotice the way Riddle called Harry 'love' So Riddle wants Harry in that way? That's very interesting. Wonder what the others will think when and if they find out. Hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From FairyBean on July 27, 2012
    Oooh its getting more and more interesting as it goes along. Excellent story telling as usual and I cant wait to see what happens next

    (Also, my point about not going over the things that had already happened was meant to be a positive thing, I like that you dont rewrite what we know already, so sorry if it came out as a criticism.)
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  • From NinaSweets on July 24, 2012
    Ooooh things are heating up now. I'm surprised Snape doesn't believe Harry but I'm glad you've given him such a good support group in his friends and also in Sephiran. I'm hoping that Harry can save Cedric just because the guys needs a win you know :) A great chapter I'm loving and hating the suspence of it all, if that makes sense. I really can't wait for your update! Just cause the graveyard scene is probably one of my favourite parts of the book and I know you'll do it awesomely!
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  • From bloodshound on July 24, 2012
    Urge to smack the disbelieving adults up side the head RISING! Hells, they know har has visions, he's not been wrong yet. what by all that's holy induced them to believe this was stress related?

    I suppose I'm annoyed at har for not connecting the dots but then again, he has no reason to. He's never met the real moody and he knows nothing, more or less, of the fakes history. He's seen him all of once. Does he still have the map? If so, does it give Moody's name or Barty Jr's name?

    So, it was the twins who busted her on her extra curricular insectoid activities this time out. doesn't surprise me that a pair of tricksters would flush her out. I does surprise me a little that Luc made no legal headway on her but our dear bug reporter would be used to dodging the rich and powerful.

    I hope he does and can. I dun want Ceddy to get deady.

    I know that har isn't supposed to fight when there are others around him still capable of doing so, but does that count when those others are opposing him? I mean, that would be stupid if it was.

    I look forward to seeing how har sabotages Ceddy... or maybe just lets the maze take care of him.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 24, 2012
    Will he be able to? Even though Cedric will think he's a liar? It would save his life in the end. If Cedric believed him afterwards. Oh what trouble! And the Potters! Poor Harry!!! Like he needs that stress!
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  • From ANON - Bloodtear on July 24, 2012
    Ah! Folks need to listen to Harry! Are they nuts? After what they saw with crouch? Great chapter! I am very pleased to know that Sev isn't going to die:) .... And, the more I read the more I hope you wrote on this story for a while yet:):)... Lol it's seriously one of my favorites!
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  • From Madamdragon on July 24, 2012
    I can't wait to read the battle in the grave yard and what will happen. I hope more is to come soon. I love to see Dracos reaction.
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  • From ANON - elementalwitch on July 21, 2012
    51 chapters in and I've just discovered this story.. wow! You are really quite good you know! Loving this.. I love the way that you have shifted teh time forward for Harry, aging he and Draco, and teh changes you made to the original plotline. I have to admit, I was wary- elves, eh, I dig em, but in a HP universe not my bag. But! SOOOOOO glad I gave this story a chance, because you really do this well- not heavy handed, great writing, great style.. looking frward to reading more, and find I will be looking for teh updates myself now. Wicked good read!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2012
    I read this whole story in a day! I love it! Please update soony
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